[Fun Man] [Single Female Protagonist] [Harry Potter Fan] [The Gray Devil] [Hufflepuff] [Phobia of Insufficient Firepower]
How does it feel to have a crappy system that is so pitiful that you can only draw a skill after 100 consecutive draws?
Heros said
So fucking cool
Voldemort: "I don't know either? Who is a good person who just cuts out his bones without even saying a word when we first meet him?"
Harry "Thanks to his alchemy tool I was spared Potions class."
Snape said it was great
Hermione "He is a very charming person. I always feel overwhelmed by him."
Ron "Snowflakes are falling and the north wind is blowing."
In short, no matter what, originally I just wanted to go to school.
If Voldemort doesn't want to make it easy for me, then he can't even think about it.
Do you know what it means in the Yangtze River that the waves behind push the waves in front, and the waves in front die on the beach?
Reader comments
I still give five stars to the heroine Hermione. The description is also very smooth, the protagonist's problems are also very big, and there are also foreshadowings about the problems. The plot has now ended in the first grade and the pace is very good. I hope the author will not write it down and keep writing. There are not many HP fanfics now.
The author is very diligent in updating, often updates, the plot is not boring, and there is no problem of overpowering the combat power. It can be said that it is among the top new male HP fan fiction books. The male HP fan fiction that Tomato started writing this year basically has big and small poisonous points. Those that are really uncomfortable to read are either illogical, or overpowering the combat power or engaging in some brain hemorrhage operations. Only this book currently has no major poisonous points. As long as the author maintains this quality in subsequent updates, it can be said to be a good book.
I also like the character of Hermione, the single heroine, and the protagonist's younger sister. I'm really looking forward to who will be my younger sister's CP? I hope the two girls will improve their fighting ability!
Hermione, a single girl, was given talents/supernatural powers by the system. . . Cool article!
The plot is mixed with "theology", Olympus and the gods; the yellow robe is added. The original main plot has become a branch plot, and Voldemort has nothing to fear. With full talent points, research to become a 'demon', and reach the ultimate in everything... Unparalleled 'invincible'
Chapter 91, a similar plot of a clone
This is a cool article. So far, there has been no behavior that suppresses the combat effectiveness. It is a model of cool article.
OK [laughter] [laughter] [laughter], I have a lot anyway, and I can't hold it until 100,000 words before reading [], so far, I like it very much, just finish reading ~ [laughter] There are some contents that other brothers who commented earlier than me have already said, so I won't repeat them, but I think [laughter] can be sweeter ~ understand? [Laughing evilly] Anyway, that's it. But why don't I give it a perfect 5 points? [Laughing evilly] Because I'm afraid that the author is too proud.
The protagonist has a good personality and is decisive in killing.
The last time I read it in such a long time was "I Want a Great Sword at Hogwarts". As I watched it, I felt like the author was a bit like an old friend.
Listening and reading the current 48 chapters, it's pretty good, please update soon! Mark it
Not bad, worth following up. Chapter 25. I'll check it out later.
The HP of the Mythic Resurrection mod can be said to be quite creative.
Card's good writing skills, 6
I particularly like Hermione. The movie version has too few words.
Do you think this author is bad? The author's writing is amazing ୧(´▽`★)୭
The rhythm control has been very good so far, and the content is also very vivid and beautiful.
I still give five stars to the heroine Hermione. The description is also very smooth, the protagonist's problems are also very big, and there are also foreshadowings about the problems. The plot has now ended in the first grade and the pace is very good. I hope the author will not write it down and keep writing. There are not many HP fanfics now. The author is very diligent in updating, often updates, the plot is not boring, and there is no problem of overpowering the combat power. It can be said that it is among the top new male HP fan fiction books. The male HP fan fiction that Tomato started writing this year basically has big and small poisonous points. Those that are really uncomfortable to read are either illogical, or overpowering the combat power or engaging in some brain hemorrhage operations. Only this book currently has no major poisonous points. As long as the author maintains this quality in subsequent updates, it can be said to be a good book.
I also like the character of Hermione, the single heroine, and the protagonist's younger sister. I'm really looking forward to who will be my younger sister's CP? I hope the two girls will improve their fighting ability!
Hermione, a single girl, was given talents/supernatural powers by the system. . . Cool article! The plot is mixed with "theology", Olympus and the gods; the yellow robe is added. The original main plot has become a branch plot, and Voldemort has nothing to fear. With full talent points, research to become a 'demon', and reach the ultimate in everything... Unparalleled 'invincible'
Chapter 91, a similar plot of a clone
This is a cool article. So far, there has been no behavior that suppresses the combat effectiveness. It is a model of cool article.
OK [laughter] [laughter] [laughter], I have a lot anyway, and I can't hold it until 100,000 words before reading [], so far, I like it very much, just finish reading ~ [laughter] There are some contents that other brothers who commented earlier than me have already said, so I won't repeat them, but I think [laughter] can be sweeter ~ understand? [Laughing evilly] Anyway, that's it. But why don't I give it a perfect 5 points? [Laughing evilly] Because I'm afraid that the author is too proud.
Okay, okay [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] It's so beautiful
It's okay, keep working hard(ง •̀_•́)งCome on
There is a story about it that is almost the same as the Harry Potter fan fiction with a rating of 8 or 9 points.
Nice looking, love watching It's very, very interesting, I feel like it's in the top ten among fans [Sending my heart]
It looks good, keep writing. [Please update]
It's okay, but some typos and unclear sentences are best corrected in the first 50 chapters.
It's good-looking. The main character is afraid of lack of firepower, but his strength is really awesome- ̗̀ ෆ(˶'ᵕ'˶)ෆ ̖́-
Very good, I think I can give it 8.5 Points or more
This book is good [like] It's really cool
Awesome, Rem, too short, I want to raise a book
It's pretty good to watch
If you haven't finished reading yet, give it a five-star thumbs up
Well written, quite good
Come on! Keep updating.
It's obviously pretty good, why doesn't anyone watch it?
The protagonist has a good personality and is decisive in killing.
The last time I read it in such a long time was "I Want a Great Sword at Hogwarts". As I watched it, I felt like the author was a bit like an old friend.
Listening and reading the current 48 chapters, it's pretty good, please update soon! Mark it
Not bad, worth following up. Chapter 25. I'll check it out later.
The HP of the Mythic Resurrection mod can be said to be quite creative.
Card's good writing skills, 6 I particularly like Hermione. The movie version has too few words.
Do you think this author is bad? The author's writing is amazing ୧(´▽`★)୭
The rhythm control has been very good so far, and the content is also very vivid and beautiful.