(Bear Bear, Fat Bear, Fatty, Campus)
A cousin from the country comes to stay at your house and accidentally joins your class, so the story of Lin Le and Xu Tian begins...
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Reader comments
My comment after reading it was, hey hey, I am an optimist, hey hey hey, I am also an optimist [blowing kiss] But! This is the ending, haha... Boss, you know, I can do anything [smile]
Super super super super delicious! ! ! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] Boss, I want to follow Ni all my life (ahem) [Shy][Shy][Shy] The emotional description is great, and the double vision is shocking and delicious [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] But the knife at the end was too sudden and there was no hint at all. The knife made me blurry [I almost cried][I almost cried][I almost cried] Generally speaking, Dada's writing is a fairy tale [love] [love] [love] (cough cough) Keep up the good work [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]
It's written from a first-person perspective, and it's very immersive. [I understand] [I understand] [I understand] My vocabulary is limited, so I can only use words like "get along with each other, super read," but there are so few book reviews! [Face covering] I hope more people can see it, and I hope the author's work will be a big hit [love] [love] [love]
The switching between dual perspectives has a strong sense of immersion. I just hope that some details can be added and don't just ignore them with ellipsis (personal preference). It's very sweet. I hope there won't be any knives later.
Is this the author's personal experience? It feels very real. I need to add more details, add more details, add more details (say important things three times, especially when it comes to that kind of stage). I love watching it, hehe.
I saw the latest chapter 30, and the previous plot was really well written. The switching of the two perspectives shocked me even more. The first perspective was of a big jealous jar that was inexplicably jealous, and the second perspective was of a fragrant and soft little cake;
The inner drama of Tiantian in the following is even more outstanding. It is matched with the subtle description of actions, which is not too impressive. The delicate emotions are the best books I have read on Tomato so far (Laijia, I have not read many books);
What's even more amazing is this deep sense of substitution. As an older person with a classy taste, when I saw the jealousy in front of me every day and the entanglement in my heart every day in the back, I just felt childish at first. What is there to be entangled in, just say it outright? But I immediately thought back to the me when I was in school. Isn't this the same me before? This full inner drama is also an emotional expression that only belongs to teenagers. It suddenly reminds me of the past. The choices I made and what I did are no better than what I make every day. Now I often say it casually and try to talk about it. Cheap love and liking are the most important words of love that I was extremely entangled but dare not say casually at the time. The inner entanglement of pulling the person I loved closer and farther away at that time is also the true love that I have long lost now.
Looking forward to the updates of subsequent chapters.
So good, so good
The author's writing is really good [laughing] I laughed the whole way through it.
The dual perspective is very novel, the writing is clear and the emotions are sincere.
It's really great. I like the plot very much.
I finished reading it in one go. It's so interesting and sweet. I'm looking forward to the next one. [Sending my heart to you]
It's really beautiful. The author lives here and has a long journey😍😍😍
Super sweet! ! The ending isn't too bad either🔪It's pretty good
Looks good, my aunt laughed the whole time
It's beautiful and I love watching it. It's sweet. Teacher, please give me more [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]
My comment after reading it was, hey hey, I am an optimist, hey hey hey, I am also an optimist [blowing kiss] But! This is the ending, haha... Boss, you know, I can do anything [smile]
Super super super super delicious! ! ! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] Boss, I want to follow Ni all my life (ahem) [Shy][Shy][Shy] The emotional description is great, and the double vision is shocking and delicious [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] But the knife at the end was too sudden and there was no hint at all. The knife made me blurry [I almost cried][I almost cried][I almost cried] Generally speaking, Dada's writing is a fairy tale [love] [love] [love] (cough cough) Keep up the good work [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]
It's written from a first-person perspective, and it's very immersive. [I understand] [I understand] [I understand] My vocabulary is limited, so I can only use words like "get along with each other, super read," but there are so few book reviews! [Face covering] I hope more people can see it, and I hope the author's work will be a big hit [love] [love] [love]
The switching between dual perspectives has a strong sense of immersion. I just hope that some details can be added and don't just ignore them with ellipsis (personal preference). It's very sweet. I hope there won't be any knives later. Is this the author's personal experience? It feels very real. I need to add more details, add more details, add more details (say important things three times, especially when it comes to that kind of stage). I love watching it, hehe.
I saw the latest chapter 30, and the previous plot was really well written. The switching of the two perspectives shocked me even more. The first perspective was of a big jealous jar that was inexplicably jealous, and the second perspective was of a fragrant and soft little cake; The inner drama of Tiantian in the following is even more outstanding. It is matched with the subtle description of actions, which is not too impressive. The delicate emotions are the best books I have read on Tomato so far (Laijia, I have not read many books); What's even more amazing is this deep sense of substitution. As an older person with a classy taste, when I saw the jealousy in front of me every day and the entanglement in my heart every day in the back, I just felt childish at first. What is there to be entangled in, just say it outright? But I immediately thought back to the me when I was in school. Isn't this the same me before? This full inner drama is also an emotional expression that only belongs to teenagers. It suddenly reminds me of the past. The choices I made and what I did are no better than what I make every day. Now I often say it casually and try to talk about it. Cheap love and liking are the most important words of love that I was extremely entangled but dare not say casually at the time. The inner entanglement of pulling the person I loved closer and farther away at that time is also the true love that I have long lost now. Looking forward to the updates of subsequent chapters.
So good, so good
The author's writing is really good [laughing] I laughed the whole way through it.
The dual perspective is very novel, the writing is clear and the emotions are sincere.
It's really great. I like the plot very much.
I finished reading it in one go. It's so interesting and sweet. I'm looking forward to the next one. [Sending my heart to you]
It's really beautiful. The author lives here and has a long journey😍😍😍
Super sweet! ! The ending isn't too bad either🔪It's pretty good
Looks good, my aunt laughed the whole time
It's beautiful and I love watching it. It's sweet. Teacher, please give me more [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]
No matter what, I will just complain to Lotte 99
It's very engaging and the plot is well written.