Magical Girls Should Be Hypnotized

It's okay... The subject matter is pretty good, but the system is too strong. Everything is a passive skill of the system. It feels like the plot is being pushed by the system. The protagonist is a character who is excluded from the plot and is dispensable. . How about strengthening the protagonist, or allowing the protagonist to make more independent decisions about hypnosis. Girls are pretty good, so come on [shy][shy][shy]

To be honest, I think it's a bit strange. Magical girls are not like magical girls, but the Weird Association is more evil than imagined. The magical girl here is just a superpower. She has no other characteristics except that she is a woman and her superpower is relatively stable.

Generally speaking, the magical girls here are really just women with magic, and they look almost the same if they have superpowers.

I'd like to add some independent thoughts to the male protagonist. It feels like the male protagonist often goes to bed after making some progress [face covering]

Well written, very good! But the protagonist is a bit weak👎, when will it be strengthened😋

It would be fine if there was more of that kind of plot. For example, eat it directly

It doesn't feel like other novels, the association and the weirdo camp are not good things

Come on! Write about Liu Bei's eldest brother

Absolute to the extreme [OK] Every time I watch a paragraph, I have to exhaust myself. Update soon.

The writing is quite nice and abstract, but the male protagonist is too weak. Besides, if you watch it too much, you will feel like you will have a new outlook on life, and you will have more of it in your mind🧀[smile]

Very well written, I like it

There is too little written. Secondly, will this book really not be reviewed and sanctioned?

It's good to read, but why not more chapters? (Author of Meowology) 4 points previous chapter

It's 4 stars, but it doesn't meet my expectations.

Go check it out, it's nothing too radical but it's fun to watch

I've been watching it for a long time. It's my favorite genre, from lolita to royal sister. The language is humorous, the plot is good, and the words are rough but not rough. I think it's good to watch.

If you don't like going straight, this is the way to go.

Come on, hope for double updates

Cognition is normal, but some words are typed incorrectly

The author has a bit of a side job, but he still needs to increase the dose. Hey [laughing][laughing][laughing]

This book is so good, why is it rated so low? The writing becomes more and more confusing as it goes on, and there is no new development.

Very good, but the conversion power of this transformer is a bit low [smile]

My writing style needs to be improved urgently, and my logic often doesn't make sense, but for the sake of my XP, I'll give you five stars [laughing]

Let me just say this, it is a very curious book. If you are interested, you can follow