
The Superhero Kill Line, but It's Spider-Man
美漫斩杀线,但蜘蛛侠
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- Ongoing
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- 1.2M Words
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- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 9d ago
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- Fanqie
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Finished reading. Spoiler alert. The writing is pretty good. Both Spider-Man and Batman are well described, but the other characters are a bit stereotyped. Their personalities and their vividness are much less... Just like the classic villains of the original Spider-Man, the 6-man group, etc., Each personality and background is very distinct. In fact, I'm quite curious about the interaction and impression between Spider-Man's kind personality and other villains. Like the little gangster who was cold-blooded and could complain, the description was very good and made it feel like a living person. Those famous villains have no obvious feeling.
The pure and cute little spider enters Gotham. He is worthy of being a child of our country. He even has time to think about uneven distribution and the problems of people in front and behind. I like the novel that the system has a small proportion and is just the support behind it.
From the beginning, I saw the updated parts. Generally speaking, it is not bad. At the beginning, the author used AI polishing in some places, which resulted in a strong AI flavor. Later, I looked back as a pastime and found that the traces of AI were getting less and less. By the end, there were almost no traces of AI. The plot is very good and the subject matter is not bad. People who are worried that it is all AI can rest assured. It is just that some AI polishing was used in the early stage and almost none in the later stage. It is still pretty good. There are also many places that make people laugh. The protagonist, the little spider, is particularly fun.
The good thing about this book is that it does not repeatedly emphasize how smart the male protagonist is, but highlights it from some small details. The most important thing is that Batman in this novel does not have a broken character, and the feeling that Batman is always watching you comes out. The male protagonist himself is smart and smart. Although he only has fighting instincts and no basic training, it can be seen that he is a piece of beauty. Although his interpersonal relationships and acting skills need to be discussed, it doesn't matter. With the help of my dear daddy, I believe he will get better and better. Anyway, the child finally has enough to eat, maybe...
My favorite thoughts after reading "Gotham Spider Wei Guangzheng" are great~ 1. First of all, the plot of the book is smooth and natural, with no subtle points, and it is more consistent with the world view of the original work. Although I am just a fan of American comics, I can also feel that the author has put a lot of effort into this aspect, and it is a very fluent book. 2. Then I have to praise the protagonist. The setting of the protagonist is very good. He is a very cute little spider. His growth is not crushing. Moreover, he has a rare and valuable spiritual quality that is not found in many Tomato novels. He is a spider that fits the original work very well, but there are some. The cuter feeling is that he is a pure, basically very upward, kind, and good-hearted child. The protagonist's three views are very sound, completely in line with the kind of true socialist successor. It can be seen that the protagonist's character is also very rich, with a rare sense of justice, and he has a pet. This is a big reason why this book attracted me. 3. I can only say that this book is a book with a particularly good pace. It has a profound criticism of social reality, as well as humorous elements. It is handled just right and has no uncomfortable poisonous points. The protagonist is not 100% a pure good person, but mainly has a little bit of a system... The character of the protagonist is still very likeable, a kind of false justice and kindness, but the kind of person who has truly experienced and beautiful things, so he hopes to bring all the good things to everyone. And the little spider should be well raised, Mengmengmeng~ I seriously support this book. Hehehe, after writing this review, I will start raising the book. The author is waiting for me to come back. Meow Meow Meow (づ ̄3 ̄)づ╭❤~, well, the only bad thing is probably that his chapters are still too few. I will finish the move soon. Can you write more Meow Meow? I really want to support the book, and I really want to encourage the author to write.
It's a very tasty book. This little spider smells very good. Well, can I see a bat spider one day? Well, there should be no such species. It's a bit short. Come on, author. I'm waiting to catch up to the end.
It is a JJ-style fanfic about beauty, strength, and cruelty without cp. It focuses more on character relationships and emotional drive rather than developing combat power and changing the world. It is not a hard-core novel, so it is ok to read without thinking. But when I saw that the protagonist was diagnosed with a series of mental problems, and others expressed their pity for it, I couldn't hold it in anymore (because I've seen it so many times that I knew what was going to happen from the beginning) [I'm full] [I'm full] When will I be able to see a comprehensive British and American novel written by a female author, and a fan who digs deeper into the plot of the original comic (such as Black Sun). It is not easy for the author to give love a five-star rating, but let's go first. There are many plots that change the soup without changing the medicine. You will know what is happening after the beginning.
With AI expansion, what bothers me the most is that the plot always uses flashbacks. One story is told in the beginning and then suddenly switches to another story. The female channel is also very aggressive, domineering and controlling. However, the changes to the major events of the Civil War are good, not in the movie version but in the original comics.
Very interesting idea, no cp is even more praised, the rhythm is well grasped, and the update frequency is also high The description of Spider-Man is quite good, and he is very chatty. The overall tone is not too heavy. I don't know much about Marvel DC. For example, even those who have only watched some of the movies will not be confused by this. The threshold is not high. If you don't remember the name, you can basically find it by browsing the comment area. There are no shortcomings except that the current number of chapters is too few and the media is not American enough, but they are all minor problems. All in all, it looks good. Spider fans are really attracted by the cover. After reading a few chapters, I added it to my bookshelf. It looks good. As for AI writing, I can't figure it out at all. A book I read with good ideas in the past was also criticized for having an obvious AI flavor. This one I just think there are a lot of minor flaws at the beginning (typos, unusual descriptions, such as writing about hair flowing when wearing a mask), but the more I read later, the more normal it becomes, and the more it looks better. Please author please use AI less. Although I hate AI, I can't see it being used when writing articles, so I'll just pamper it...
This book is really, really good to read. It can be said to be highly recommended. The character design is also perfect. The author is the author. I hope that there will be nothing in the subsequent plot. The protagonist is adopted by Bruce and becomes Robin or something. In this case, I feel a bit vulgar. Besides, I feel that keeping the protagonist in his current state will make life more immersive.