Mortals Want to Cultivate Immortality: Immortals Must Cultivate Second-Hand Things!

I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day and every night. This book is a traditional ordinary book, not a brainless novel. Regardless of the bad reviews or good reviews, I would like to thank all my Taoist friends. After all, they have read my book carefully. It is the first time I come across this type of novel. It has many flaws and is not easy to create. I have written down the points everyone pointed out in a memo and corrected them. I will never do it again in the future!

Five stars are for motivation. In fact, the writing is good, but the protagonist's emotional intelligence is insufficient and not as smooth as Fang Yuan. Many of the twists are too blunt, but considering that the magic novel is the world's enemy, it is normal. But if the author wants to go further, he can ask Obsession and Dao Xin The direction is written, for example, love cannot be achieved, hate is like separation, killing the person you love and cares with your own hands, wanting to get everything but in vain, paying a terrible price for the goal, the essence of the magic novel lies in the heart and human relationships, rather than a killing novel.

The setting is good, even if he was arrested, he wouldn't be searched? Moreover, in such a big cell, the two of them were not in the same cell according to the description, so the cell leader didn't hear their conversation?

The score is low, at least 8 points should be raised. There are no poisonous points. The protagonist kills decisively, the fighting is very exciting, and the supporting characters also have their own characteristics. The cruelty of the world of immortality is fully described, and every one of them is a sinister sixth man!

The writing is good, mainly because the plot is rich and full of ups and downs. Compared with Tomato's pile of AI and primary school students' hydrology, this book can be read. Not that much water. Although there are some unreasonable and poisonous points, they are harmless.

There are shadows of mortals, come on, author. It's okay to borrow from others when you write your own story, but borrowing too much can easily bias your own storytelling ability. I hope to write a story that belongs to Chen Laomo (Chen Tianzun) [smile][smile]

It should be hand-made. I haven't seen any particularly strange AI points. The quality is quite good. At present, it is only when registering for others that you give your real name. This is a little strange. But in other places, there are no poisonous points so far.

It's okay, five stars for support. I thought it was a dark text at first, but later I saw that it was just a flow of mortals who were killing decisively. There is also the one that is barely considered a golden finger, but I feel that it is not very useful. The relationship between Luo Laodao was written very well, but the timeline jumped too fast and felt a bit stiff. There are no weird depictions of women, and hopefully no female protagonists.

It's a pretty good novel. The author is probably a bit older. It's a more traditional Hugh Immortal novel. The overall score should be above 8.0. If it were placed more than ten years ago, it should be above 8.5 Points. If it is placed now, it may be almost meaningless, because in the current environment, everyone prefers to read fast-paced novels, no matter what genre they are. The pace of this novel is okay, in fact, it is not very slow, and many ideas are very good. Many magic weapons, dungeons, and many plots are also very good, but there is a problem with cheats, because currently, cultivating immortals is also very good. Well, whether it is fantasy or rebirth, the golden finger is one of the most important points for readers to read novels. In fact, I don't think the introduction of the golden finger in this article is so detailed. I think the role of the golden finger is too low. For example, Some of these talismans must be particularly powerful. Since you can copy them infinitely, I think it is relatively easy. Many times they include some magic weapons, some elixirs, some elixirs, etc. There must be something very awesome. You just need to take some broken things and you can copy them. I think this is a very incredible effect, but maybe I was afraid that the thing I wrote was too invincible, so this point was not highlighted.

So far it looks okay. There is no logical flaw The most important thing is to improve your cultivation faster. If your cultivation level rises slowly, no one will notice. This type of novel is originally designed to see the protagonist improve his cultivation.

Mortals cultivating immortals would definitely not be so smooth if they were not Long Aotian. The character of the protagonist is kind and kind to him, and he will repay kindness. He will not kill people who have no hatred, but he will retaliate immediately if he has a chance. I guess I won't like them too much if they just like to kill everything they encounter. In addition, it may be because of the settings that the spiritual roots of the two newly discovered people were not absorbed to improve my own spiritual roots. It may be that the level is too low to absorb it, or something like that.

I think the author's writing style is quite good, it feels eloquent, and it is humorous when it should be humorous. But after reading it for so long, I feel that the use of external mirrors is still a small matter, and there is no sense of satisfaction. I don't know if I am holding back something big.

The design of this magic Buddha technique is so good. Can the author arrange a lotus platform for the protagonist to use as a flying prop? [Laughing] The protagonist might as well shave his hair.

The score is low. Come on, author.

It's 90% rare among Goldfinger

A masterpiece of mortals, fast forward to chapter 75, kill the master who wants to take away his body, and the rest will be more exciting.

The plot is smooth and engaging, and the words and sentences are well-chosen. There is nothing that makes people feel stiff, and there is nothing about being young or ignorant. At present, the protagonist seems to be bold and cautious. Maybe the score is so low because of some mechanism problem? I hope the author will polish it carefully and make persistent efforts. There are only a few chapters left to catch up with the main force. After reviewing it, the overall character creation is good, the story is very strong, the IQ is online, and there is intrigue. The protagonist is gradually growing up in this context of a mortal living in the underworld and cultivating immortality. Fortunes and misfortunes depend on each other, and opportunities and crises coexist. It may be limited by the word count, but the worldview is mentioned but not developed in detail. There are many dungeons. The characters who appear are basically random encounters or competing for resources. There is no sign of a female protagonist yet, and it feels a bit like a road novel about cultivating immortality and adventure. In short, if you can rank at the front in the mortal stream, it will be no problem if you place it in the Xianxia section next door (that is, the XX Xian clan and Xianye have strength) and it can be counted among the top 20 people who earn votes. The author maintains his original intention and continues to polish it. Platinum credit [like].

Good-looking, interesting cheats, food level

Great, more updates.

The book is okay, but it's slow and has no plot. It would take at least 300 chapters to be enjoyable.

The novel is interesting, keep practicing.

Keep your feet on the ground and walk step by step, and everything will come true if you have a clear mind.

I think it's okay now, the author's writing style is okay, I hope to write a longer one [laughing]

The devil, the golden finger mirror, isn't it the horse charm? Saw through you.

It's okay, slightly flawed, but not bad Alas, I'll give it four stars. The writing is not bad, but it's a bit watery, and the plot seems a bit deliberate in order to describe it in such a dark direction.

Seeing him leaving Fulongmen, he was blocked. Very good!

I watched the comic first and then I got stuck into the novel. It was pretty good, but I don't understand why the rating wasn't high.

A very nice book. Opportunities are too rare, so raise a few more spiritual beasts and insects, make elixirs and draw talismans.

It's pretty good. It's worth watching. The plot is reasonable.

Real review! ! ! I have read more than 80 chapters, but the slight irritation at the beginning does not affect the overall plot. I originally wanted to give it 4 points, but I added 1 point for encouragement when I saw that it was a new book!