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The protagonist in the first few chapters made me feel physically uncomfortable, I hope it will change in the future The front and back are too separated. I don't understand what the protagonist is struggling with in the early stage. Moreover, you also designed the extraordinary 18-year-old virgin Pianpian. The protagonist wants someone for the first time and then despises her. I can't understand your profound wisdom, so I choose to give up.

The writing is good so far, and I do what I need to do without being pretentious.

I feel like it will be brought back to the modern world in the future. After all, the late Ming Dynasty is a cannibalistic world. Unless the protagonist rebels and becomes emperor, life will be very miserable later on.

Very good, now I combine the double door with Aihong

I feel like the protagonist's personality is average, but he's pretty good at saving the tragic plot, and the writing is also pretty good.

Not bad. The emotional description of the protagonist is quite real. I want to watch the torture area.

The author's writing is very good. I think it can be ranked in the top three among Aihong fans. I hope the author will not stop updating and must finish it [Blow kiss]

I need this book

Very good, I like it very much [send heartfelt message]

It's not bad so far. I hope Lin Pianpian can live a better life in the future.

Not bad, I hope to keep updating

A good-looking author must finish the book Author, do you want to write tens of millions of words?

It is well written. The inner descriptions and changes of the male and female protagonists are very well written, and you can see the process of their thoughts.

I can barely do it [Like] Come on

Support, the writing is very good You must keep writing.

Come on! Very nice! One day of updates is not enough!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Emotions and interactions are very delicate

Good-looking, super good-looking, very good-looking

Naishen! Feeling good, okay

Anyway, as long as Hui'er can be happy

The writing is okay, I don't know if the author can last longer. The current situation of the Aihong fan fiction I read is miserable, so I just insist on writing [face covering]

At present, it seems that I can give a five-star review first. After all, everyone wrote this Aihong fanfic to redeem Lin Pianpian.

The author who looks good must keep updating [angry]

The main character was not well written in the past. The candy distribution later was positive, and he was considered one of the better ones among Aihong. Five stars encourage him. Urgent update.

The update is not enough. The emotional scenes are well written. I look forward to the appearance of Su and Mansui.

It's really good. I'm the only one among Aihong fans who can't read it. I read it twice before. The description is really amazing 😉