There Is a Scroll King in the World of Immortality

It's pretty good to watch, solid and steady, but it's a pity that I always thought that the protagonist group was a pure friendship, but after all, it also involves male and female affairs, which is not my favorite plot.

The book can be of high quality, and it can currently be given 9 points. It can be seen that the author wants to open up an emotional line, but the Tomato environment is like this. It doesn't matter whether your writing is sweet or not, if you dare to open up an emotional line, you will be criticized. Although Chen's supporting role has a good image, it's not that there was no foreshadowing, but he was still criticized for being too abrupt. Talking back to this book, I very much praise the image of this positive, friendly, well-established and well-managed sect. The kind of sect that cultivates immortality where you take what I have and I kill you makes me uncomfortable to read. The characterizations of the foursome are also interesting. I haven't left the sect yet, so I hope that the following plots won't be too cliche.

It's very good. It's the first time I've seen this style of novel about cultivating immortals. It's the first time I've realized that novels about cultivating immortals can also be written as everyday novels. There's no intrigue, there's no world-ending crisis to save, and it feels like the years are peaceful. Although the protagonist has a system, the system doesn't give rewards, so it can be said that the protagonist has no golden hand at all. It refers to very daily cultivation of immortality (PS: other immortality cultivation novels either have golden fingers or have maximum talents. Which one is not the world's first-class genius? Even in the biography of mortal cultivation of immortality, there is a dark cultivation environment that pushes the protagonist along, and he will be plotted against, but this book is different, it is too calm, purely daily writing)

Not bad. You can eat it. The old bookworm decided that he wanted to make the battles more realistic, but the battles were still written with insufficient imagination and enough imagination to produce mental pictures, and the other characters had flesh and blood. Let me correct you, this novel does not have those harem romances, don't let some people be led astray.

I really like this kind of lighthearted and funny fairy tale. There is no killing and human twist, which is too depressing! A stream of clear water [blowing kiss] The setting is so interesting. The protagonist is obviously mediocre in talent, and the system is useless. There is no punishment, but the protagonist is forced by the system to become the number one freshman and is favored by the upper management [laughing and crying]

This book has educational significance. It can be called a breath of fresh air in the contemporary decadent social atmosphere where people always want to show off and lie flat. It can also show readers a traditional and positive value in fragmented reading. Although the writing style is relatively ordinary, the intention is excellent and the position is outstanding. It is worth reading.

It's good to read. I personally think the rating should be at least 8.5, So I'm writing a book review to increase the rating. It's a very light-hearted and everyday novel. The characters in it are all very cute. There is no plot of bitterness and hatred. I always like this kind of novel.

The cheats in this book are still very good. There is no unearned rank improvement, and there is no sudden change from mediocrity to a high-ranking protagonist's destiny. There is only the accumulation of small things to make a lot stronger. But the positioning of NPCs is too low, and it feels like "the world has gone back XX years, but I haven't changed". No matter how talented the character is, he will fall under his feet because of the efforts of the protagonist. Some slightly unusual (book world) settings: Demonic Abyss, a setting with a strong sense of mission. The description of the protagonist entering the customs and setting the mission can also feel this sense of mission, just like the border army in the real world. There is a safe zone outside the customs, which is an area divided by the support speed inside the customs. Outside the zone is a gray area where there is no way. The contradiction is that in this place with a sense of mission, you can explode other people's equipment at will outside the support area. There is no sense of solemnity in the experience. The status of the military generals is not high and can be suppressed by the protagonist, who is from a small sect. If this is the case, it can only be considered that the danger of the Demon Abyss is not great. The status of the small dungeon for early leveling does not match the description given by the author, and it seems a bit disconnected; Bai Yujing, many geniuses in the same class are suppressed by the protagonist who goes to and from get off work on time. In order to show rationality, some patches have been added, such as not practicing seriously (laughing). The food in the cafeteria can increase experience and is greater than the food of various families with family backgrounds and talents. In addition, the talent value can be improved the day after tomorrow. Like the cafeteria, only the sect has it... It is not clear what the relationship between the cafeteria and this talent-improving pill is in the book. Above the mortal world is the Divine Treasure, possessing divine consciousness (Elder Song of the inner sect). Going to the main peak and becoming a core disciple is said to be equivalent to a university. I wonder if any graduate students will say this later [Laughing and crying] In view of the performance of this sect, it can only be viewed as a small sect. Otherwise, it may be a bit difficult for a protagonist who normally commutes to and from get off work to catch up with the differences in individuals and backgrounds by eating in the cafeteria. It can't be a Datong society and pursue the fairest growth [laughing and crying] The last thing is to describe how often the protagonist doesn't want to be too tired. I feel like it's written a bit too frequently, which affects the perception a bit and gives me the feeling that the protagonist was born just for this joke about going to work [face covering]

This book is definitely worth reading. The pace of immortality novels is fast. It is normal to have an opportunity in three days and a slap in the face in five days. However, there are really very few daily novels with a very slow pace. Most of the protagonists either rely on the golden finger system or the magic weapon grandpa. The protagonist of this book really only relies on his own hard work and persistence from beginning to end (and the small supervision of Yidiudi System).

I am currently up to chapter 60, and to be honest, it feels a little uncomfortable for me, a bit like when I was in my third year of high school. This is not called cultivation, it is called torture. If I had such a system, I might have committed suicide. I feel sorry for Brother Yue.

Very nice to look at. It feels particularly good to see that the protagonist is talented through his own efforts.

When I read this book before, I looked through the comments section and saw a lot of people criticizing it. But I haven't read this kind of book for a long time, so I clicked in to take a look. For me, the plot and Goldfinger are surprisingly acceptable. Maybe I have illusions about my own life, wondering if I will be more successful if I work harder. A very good book, the plot alone is very good. But there are still some shortcomings, the combat power, the brief description of the realm is not comprehensive, and the ability of the realm cannot be felt. Maybe the way the characters in the book (especially Lao Mo and others) get along is a bit confusing. No matter what it is, it would be a life-or-death feud in other novels, but this novel's handling of the character's interaction is pretty good, and it won't make people feel disgusted.

After watching it, it seems to be around 9.2. Most of the plot is about brotherhood, but the part where we get to kiss each other is a bit shocking, and the author could use a little Al to make the sentences smoother. It's a bit difficult to read in some places. I've struck gold here, it's not bad, but could the reviewers stop focusing on just one point? Just a few of them will be fine. Are you looking for other shortcomings or advantages? This stick kills all plots. I saw more than 100 chapters and thought it was a good book. Reading your comments was a bit off-putting, and my mood for reading the book dropped [face covering]

Forced to voluntary involution, group portrait, funny. A reasonable worldview and cultivation system for cultivating immortals. These are the things I like about this book. In addition, if the original foursome of Involvement can reach the top together, I would like it very much. Since it is written that there is no heroine, there can be no more drama about getting close to women. So far, I have taken the initiative to post others three times. There is also an inverted sticker added at the back. The second time I saw it it was really embarrassing.

I think this book is very interesting. Why has no one read it? I feel that the protagonist is steady and steady. Although there is a systematic setting, it is actually a highlight of the novel. It is really interesting. Great support for the author.

It's a very nice book, and it's an entertaining piece of writing. The protagonist's plug-in is quite unique. There are no rewards if you do well, but there are punishments if you don't do well. To be honest, this kind of plug-in is actually quite difficult to write. After all, there is really no positive feedback, and readers will get bored watching the protagonist being tortured to death every day. Fortunately, the author did not really describe the protagonist's upgrade process in detail, but focused on the protagonist's interactions with other people, which was unexpectedly good. I think it's worth reading, but I don't know whether this book is without a heroine or with a heroine? There are ambiguous scenes, so don't watch it if you are disgusted by it.

After reading Chapter 90, the author's setting is clear, the writing is very good, and it is funny and true. All the actions of the protagonist are consistent with the character. This book definitely deserves a rating of 9 or above. There is a group of gods in the book review section. They saw other sects poaching the protagonist to do hard work. If the protagonist didn't leave, they would give it a low score. The emotional line was not revealed, and the other person's parents would also give a low grade if they fell in love with the protagonist. I can only say that Tomato readers are too authoritative.

Not bad, not bad, quite real. I prefer this kind of slow progress in the ordinary. Step by step, people can clearly feel how the protagonist progresses and gradually becomes stronger.

The best thing about this book is that there is no slap in the face and not too much love and hatred. It is a pure daily life of brothers from the four districts working together to practice together, occasionally interspersed with some opportunities given by the sect, the most important thing is special group portraits, and the protagonist's cheating is so torturous that it tortures the protagonist without even paying for it. In short, it looks very good. Why has the world become like this? Even if I make a normal comment, some people will say that I am a bastard. This novel is really good. There is no love, hate, plot, or knives. It's just that the protagonist is a bit miserable, being whipped by the system every day and getting no rewards at all, but Elder Song is really cheating. If this book is finished, I really hope the author can make a side story about Elder Song. It will probably be very interesting. To be honest, Elder Song is a very good protagonist even in other novels. It can only be said that Bai Yujing has his own protagonist in each era, and he also has his brothers in the four districts of each era.

It's very good to watch, but there are too few. Those cheats that are particularly strong make the protagonist very happy, which makes me jealous. This kind of cheats that I can't envy make me feel comfortable watching. Although the protagonist has cheats, I don't envy him at all.

It's great. Now let's talk about the two surprises mentioned in the comment area. One is the kiss in Chapter 37. But according to the previous plot, due to the system, the protagonist has to devote himself to learning knowledge and practicing fighting for seven or eight hours a day. Under such a stressful situation, he suddenly took a five-day holiday and was jumping around the house. In this situation, even if Zhao Nan (the protagonist's brother) comes, he will kiss him (and the kiss described in the early stage will probably be covered with saliva) The second one, the protagonist group has been together for four or five years, and they have a tendency to like each other. Then there are a lot of low-star people who say that Cp has a female protagonist, which is awesome. The most important thing is that because the author wants to win back these people, he doesn't include a female protagonist in the author's remarks, which in turn causes people who like the plot to say that I don't want to read the heroine. But I feel that a group of teenagers and girls supported each other and grew up in an environment that was more high-pressure than the third year of high school. They were inseparable for 4 or 5 years when they were in their youth. It would be strange if there was no such hazy emotion for 4 or 5 years. They really have to cultivate themselves into machines, and the text is written very lightly. If we continue to be inseparable together like this, it will feel natural to be together in the future,,,, but because a group of people who have CP will directly give low marks, and saying that there is no heroine will only make people who like the plot feel disgusting But overall, on Tomato, this book is very interesting

Funny, logical thinking, revolutionary friendship, details, group portraits, it is not a slap-in-the-face cool story, it is a growing protagonist who has failures and successes. The protagonist and his friends are fooling around together, which is very funny. The plot is not one of those that wins first place in a competition. It is really good to watch! ! ! Although I haven't seen it yet, I hope it's free of charge! ! There is only deep friendship and comrades who live and die together! !

To put it in context, I am now in Chapter 42, and I saw the place where it was said that lightning protection should be avoided... Maybe I took too much poison and actually thought it was okay. The plot is that the male protagonist took a five-day holiday because there were still five days left for the assessment, and he did not need to practice. The person named Chen happened to be next to him, and he happily gave her a mouthful. There doesn't seem to be anything shy about it (although I personally think it's just because the person is closest to him, but I'll have to look again)… If similar scenes still appear later, I won't be too late to give it 7 stars.

As a "system" article. His system does not reward the protagonist, but instead constantly 'persecutes' the protagonist. It's not the kind of system that gives you tasks and just a few rewards to make you invincible. It doesn't make up items and cultivation levels out of thin air. Belongs to the kind of person who works hard to get results. This kind of protagonist is usually too self-disciplined, which makes readers feel fake and empty. However, the author uses a system to force him to practice, and the protagonist is not very talented and wants to be lazy and goof off, which is in line with the thoughts of contemporary young people. Light-hearted and enjoyable, In Tomatoes is a novel worth reading.

I have caught up with the latest chapter. I came here from listening to books elsewhere, so the reading time is a bit short. I had a lot of fun watching the four-person group. I can accept it with or without CP. I can eat everything to have a balanced nutrition. However, the mission part in the middle is a bit boring, and it will touch on some conflicts of values. It is better to write less about this kind of conflict event where a thousand people have ten thousand ways to do it. After all, the reason why the tram problem is a difficult problem is that there is no solution except to crush everyone with strength. Overall, I give it four stars. The author will try his best to update it~

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The novel is very good, but it made me so tired after reading it [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]. This feeling of being scrolled to death makes me, a loser, very tired after reading it [crying][crying][crying][crying]

It's very novel, but I feel that there are still some problems with the writing. For example, the combat power of the forces is not clearly stated. I still can't tell where this sect ranks. Anyway, the combat power is very problematic. When I went to Suppress Demons, I wanted to see Wandering Dragon, but there wasn't much description. Summary: There are still some problems, but the subject matter is novel enough, you can try it.

It's good to read. This is a novel with no cp and no heroine [cool]. Don't be dissuaded by other book reviews.

After listening to more than a dozen chapters, I don't plan to listen to it anymore, so I will review it. The way this book is expressed is that you can tell from the beginning that this is not a new author. It reads very smoothly and is not strenuous at all. This article has the flavor of some ancient male videos. The plot does not advance quickly and is slow and flowing. The reason why I can read more than ten chapters is because although the protagonist of this book has a system, the system of the protagonist is not a gold-finger system. It is even a bit of a trap. It only encourages hard work and does not give rewards (there may be changes in the future). It does not fall into the category of typical cool articles that I am tired of reading. I think this setting is quite novel, and I have read more than a dozen chapters. But as an old reader in the single field of immortality writing, I still prefer tomato-style bursting novels that can quickly give me a sense of freshness at the beginning. I don't have the patience to watch the long flow of novels become more and more exciting in the later stages. Unless the author can make ordinary daily plots with little progress and make them particularly humorous and interesting, this would be very demanding. The main reason is that this kind of long and thin story is too risky in the later stage, and I don't know how it will develop in the later stage. If there is no big progress, it will be a boring chronicle. If there are some plots that I don't like, it will also make people very uncomfortable. After all, it has been dull for a long time. As a long-time reader, I have naturally been fooled many times. Due to personal preference, I gave it up. Currently, if you like atypical and refreshing articles, and those who like to read long-flowing stories, you can try it.