From Fighting in Martial Arts to Cultivating Immortals

There is nothing wrong with the plot, and the character and character of the protagonist are also solid. There are almost no fools in the supporting characters, and caution is engraved in their bones. The dialogues and details of the characters are well written and engaging enough that I read it all in one go without skipping a page. It's the gold that I finally found in Tomato recently that makes me, a person who almost doesn't evaluate, can't help but evaluate. But there is a problem. Like many martial arts novels of the same type, you must have corresponding techniques to break through certain realms. So let me ask you, how did the predecessors break through? Are you forcing yourself to get stuck? That's why I kept one star.

The characters in the book all have their own positions, and they always consider their own interests first when doing things. There is no love without reason, and there is no hatred without reason. I like this kind of character setting. The protagonist is neither a good person nor a bad person, he can only be regarded as a normal ruthless person... Not a virgin, not pretentious, and not without a bottom line. The protagonist's setting is also very good, please go to the author. Five-star praise for you!

The plot is not procrastinating or brainless. The protagonist has a good personality. He is not a good person but he has a bottom line and will not kill innocent people indiscriminately. He has a grudge that never ends overnight. Now I have reached chapter 120 and it is still about martial arts. It is very exciting [like]

The first few chapters of the novel are a little dull, but they get better and better as you read later. I also liked the character of Pig's Feet, and it was even more satisfying to see the father and son confront each other in a secret room. Come on, author, please update as soon as possible. I've already read Chapter 75, and the more I write, the better. Come on, author!

This book's 7.9 Is too low to be considered a top-notch Tomato book, but 9.0 Is enough. I really like the balance between love and hatred in this book. The details are handled in a sensible way, without being too grim or too saintly. I thought it was very cliché at first, but I didn't expect it to be a twist on the cliche opening. Overall, the plot design is relatively novel. The disadvantages are: the title of the book is very bad, I suggest changing it; I don't like to talk too much before starting a fight. Finally, I hope this book can exceed 2 million words. There is another small advantage. The protagonist of this book is not "I can get it if I want it." Instead, it was trial and error many times, falling down and getting up again, walking a few steps forward, and falling down again. This is the real thing

The author has good cultural background and the quality of the book is OK! The plot logic is relatively rigorous, the characters are well drawn, there is no obvious brainlessness, love and hate are clear, and it is not procrastinating! Some plots can resonate with readers, although the supporting roles are sometimes more casual, after all it is fantasy! If the author sticks to it, it will definitely become a big hit! Of course, if you like mindless hydrology, this may not be for you! It is suitable for those who have a correct outlook on life and have some logical thinking!

It's beautiful, I love reading it, it's so refreshing and not boring! The logic is also smooth. I have updated it to the latest chapter in one breath. There is only one poisonous point that I can remember so far. It is the Jiang family who said they fully support the protagonist and then said, "Okay, I will only demonstrate it three times." This seems to be a copied classic teaching scene... The other poisonous points are minor, if there are any, because I haven't memorized the poisonous points that I can't remember. [Sneaky laugh] I feel really refreshed after reading this article.

Finally, I came across a routine article that doesn't involve upgrading, killing people and grabbing resources, then upgrading, killing people, and grabbing resources again. The world in the author's writing is a bit interesting, and he tells stories with intention rather than routines! [Praise]

The overall book is pretty good. The plot is quite online. Every little person has his own love and hatred. This is the most logical book that describes the secular world of immortality. It's been a long time since I stayed up all night reading a book. But after seeing the latest version, I still gave it up, which is why I deducted one star. One of the most disgusting plots is when the protagonist is completely helpless and is saved by a cheat that he doesn't know about, but luck. In the most critical plot of life and death, which is very close to the face, the protagonist survives by sheer luck. Other than that it's pretty good. Secondly, the plot is not fast, but there are no shortcomings.

The world view is reasonable, the characters' emotions are reasonable, and the story line is reasonable. As a bookworm, I am very picky about reading. The worldview construction of this book is more reasonable than a brainless novel. The cheats are very powerful but they are not guided by the cheats. Although the cheats are very important, they do not account for a large proportion. The characters have normal emotions and maintain normal sanity in the face of danger. This is not the kind of mindless plot where a diaosi saves a beautiful fairy and her family agrees to marry him.

It looks good, and the further back it gets, the better it looks. It's ups and downs, exciting, and you can't guess what will happen next, for all the characters. Reasonable logic, the protagonist is never afraid of being timid or picking up troubles, his personality is distinctive and impressive.

It would be better to write it in two halves, the mortal chapter and the immortal chapter. The final mastery of martial arts can activate one's own spiritual roots. The mortal chapter is well written, the supporting characters are intelligent, and there are all kinds of bloody relationships between men and women, and conflicts of interest. Green tea? Directly destroyed by violence and then abandoned. The only successful pairing was achieved when Wu Erdai took action. All kinds of acting skills are used for profit. For the sake of plot development, the protagonist is suppressed as a mortal, and since he cannot get spiritual stones, Goldfinger naturally recovers slowly. It is a serious country and immortal sect. Apart from anything else, we will never be careless in safeguarding our own interests.

It's super good-looking, but is the protagonist a little too stubborn? Don't be too stubborn. You can hide some, but you hide so much is too much. The character of the protagonist is a person who can achieve great things. The background of the characters is very cool. I have upgraded to a cool novel. I have found a novel I like. I hope the protagonist can properly show his little genius.

The plot is interesting and novel, with the author's own ingenuity and no clichés. The protagonist is vividly portrayed, and the supporting characters are flesh-and-blood and realistic. It's a pity that it's too short and the score won't go up. I'm afraid it hasn't reached the point where there are more words at the end. After all, the more than 200,000 words have been squeezed in before. The pressure for promotion is still there and I haven't released it yet. However, I have to control it well and release too much pleasure and it will be boring. Gradually release it. The rating will go up

Good-looking is good-looking! The protagonist should give in and give in. He is tough when he should be tough. It is not disgusting to watch, but has a sense of comedy. His strength has been steadily improving. There is no pressure or force, and the balance is guaranteed while ensuring the excellence of the writing.

I have 10,000 online hours, so I am really picky about reading books, but I think this author writes very well, and writes the protagonist and minor characters vividly. The writing and plot are very good, but the plot is too slow and a bit draggy! Anyway, overall, I definitely give it five stars! [Praise]

I just heard the latest chapter, it's very well written. I am very much looking forward to the follow-up plot, and the author will update it as soon as possible. A suggestion to the author is that the title and introduction of the book should be changed if possible, because the title and introduction almost persuaded me to quit. In fact, the content is much better than the title and introduction indicate. Update quickly! [Please update]

What an awesome pig's trotter! ! He has wisdom, emotional intelligence, means, understands the truth, and is decisive in killing! The only dissatisfaction is that the golden finger has written more than 50 chapters and still doesn't know how to increase the life span.

There are no golden three chapters at the beginning, but you can still see the author's profound writing skills. I read it patiently and it was so enjoyable that I stayed up all night reading it. The protagonist is well written and you can see the character's growth. But some plots written by the author themselves are too limited, so when the protagonist breaks the situation, he has to use some deus ex machina. Overall four stars, why five stars? It's because some people's ratings are too low, and they are stupid and low.

Cool! It's not mindless. The writing is very good. I haven't seen such a good book in a long time. The protagonist has a good character, must avenge when he takes revenge, and is flexible and flexible! The IQ of the supporting characters is online, especially the small characters are also written with flesh and blood! ! It doesn't stress the combat power, there are currently no poison points, and there is no female protagonist, so it's okay. Give the author a round of support! Keep up the good work👏

This book has been listed on the homepage many times, but every time I saw the ratings, I didn't click on it. This time Shuhuang took a look and unexpectedly found that it was pretty good. To say this is a multi-masterpiece, it certainly doesn't count. But it's pretty good in Tomato. Although it's a little bit poisonous, it's not harmful. Overall, although there are some minor flaws, the book is overall very good. The most eye-catching thing is the setting of rules in the book, why immortals don't do whatever they want in the mortal world, and why families in a place can't be domineering. The rules and regulations from top to bottom are quite interesting and reasonable. I hope that the author will not fall into the clichés and do anything to suppress his strength in the future. There can be restrictions, but they must be reasonable.

To be honest, I rarely give five stars. Most of them are three stars. Unlike some novels that are full of poisonous points and brain damage, this book does have better characters and a more reasonable plot. I am quite satisfied with it.

The structure is clear and the content is substantial. Please use it carefully.

It's okay. The characters are quite distinctive. It's over 300 chapters now. I feel like it needs to speed up a bit later. It's about reaching a certain level of martial arts and cultivating immortals, it's about martial arts training, and it's still a two-week break. It feels so slow.

It's a very good novel, and the author is quite honest. In the introduction, he clearly states that "this book is a cool novel, but it is not a brainless novel" [laughs] At the beginning, the verbal push and bargaining between the protagonist's father and Li Zhong made me feel like I could continue to listen to this novel (the protagonist's father knew the bargaining chips he had, and when faced with the strong, he still pretended to fight for the best interests)... After listening to a hundred or two hundred chapters, I still feel that the plot is logical and worthy of the evaluation of "enjoyable but not brainless"... But the overall novel is a bit bland, and there is nothing "unexpected" (because it must be logical, everything that needs to be explained will be explained in advance). The story is also an old-fashioned martial arts + fairy upgrade setting. There is nothing new, but it is still very good and enjoyable to listen to. I'm almost up to speed on the update, which is quite good, but there are still some problems: the character portrayal of the protagonist is inconsistent (the biggest flaw in this regard is the protagonist's attitude towards his senior sister) Although the protagonist has clear grievances, he is emotionally indifferent (the family relationship setting in the past life), utilitarian, and cautious in doing things, and never causes too much trouble for himself... As a result, you create a second-rate senior sister who allows the protagonist to "interact" with her without any trouble, and promotes some useless side plots [awkward laugh] In addition, there is a setting bug: the spirit stones that the immortals lack are used by the Qingchen Division to decorate fluorite lamps [laughing awkwardly]... Is it that the Qingchen Division is a fool and does not know the goods, and does not know how to use it to exchange with the immortals, or to build a relationship; or the immortal family has to pass through the door of death, and the spiritual stones must be dug by themselves

Beautiful, well written, delicate writing style

To be honest, this book is so good and amazing. I was really surprised. This novel has been on my bookshelf for a long time. I only occasionally used it to kill time in the book shortage a few days ago. Then I became more and more obsessed with it. There were a few flaws in the early stage, but it became more and more interesting as it went on. And the protagonist handled many plots very well. To be honest, I couldn't do it in a different place. In short, this book is really amazing, the only drawback is that the update is too slow [Like][Like][Like]

The villains, villains, and supporting characters are all well drawn and fleshed out. It is estimated that it will take more than 350 chapters to enter the Xianxia chapter, although it will not last long. This is a rare good book. I hope it will still be as exciting after entering the Xianxia chapter. Good luck to the author.

The rating is too low. It's a very good story with strict logic. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I didn't feel any discomfort while reading.

I haven't read such a beautiful book in a long, long time. Parents, brothers and sisters can all die. It's really cruel and cruel, but why is it only over 200 chapters? I've read it carefully, but I still finished it in more than a day [face covering] [face covering]