Douluo's Shura Jianchen

This book feels like a long stream while reading, like prose, which makes people feel very comfortable. Sword Bone Douluo's affection for the protagonist is very moving. But there are some plots in it that are not quite right. Although Dugu Bo is the master of the Ice and Fire Eyes, he does not know that many immortal grasses. Also, at the beginning, the protagonist already has the immortal products that can help the Seven Treasures Glazed Pagoda transform into the Nine Treasures Glazed Pagoda. Later, when Dugu Bo said that he did not even recognize the immortal products, some small details deserve improvement. Come on!

It has a sense of literary youth. It's not like other Douluo novels that are so cool and cool. It's very comfortable to watch. Come on [make faces]

Overall, this book is quite good. There are some differences between the character settings and the original work. Personally, I think it is more daily life. The peak of the plot is at the end. The last few chapters are really good to read, especially the part about ascending to the divine world. It is really tear-jerking. The part between Sister Qiuyue and Sister Dongxue really made me cry to death, but the ending is good. Don't just look at the scenery when you go to the lower world every year, but go back to see them more often! ! ! ! !

After reading the first few chapters, it felt like reading prose

Not a harem, very warm and well received Have you forgotten the martial soul fusion skills of Hu Liena and his brother, and where did Xiao Wu's lovesickness come from?

Rhythmic and comfortable to look at

The characters are vividly portrayed

I wonder if it is a single heroine?

How come no one reads such a good book [awkward laughter]

Okay, no nonsense, it's heartwarming

Better work

This book is really good

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I feel awesome

Very good, I don't know why there is no rating (~_~💧)

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

The writing is so beautiful, not bad, not bad

It's rare to see a good-looking Douluo fanfic on Red Persimmon. The author writes it very well.

So far, there are no big surprises, and the plot is okay. I just like that some sentences are repeated frequently. I don't know if the author himself wrote it like this, or he didn't pay attention.

The brushstrokes are delicate and the writing style is a little green but touching. The pace is slow, but not brainless or invincible. The group portraits are vividly described. The content is like tasting clear tea, neither strong nor astringent, as if hidden in the mountains and rivers.