[Reborn and Rising] [Tycoon] [Transforming a County Town] [The Millennium]
An Yuan County Bus Station, 2000.
Zhang Wei clutched a woven bag, ready to board a bus to Guangdong for work.
The moment he set one foot on the bus, he stopped. Memories of his previous life flashed through his mind: heading south for work, driving a taxi, selling insurance, and eventually dying alone in a rented room.
He took his foot back. “I’m not going.”
The next day, he discovered that 287,431 yuan had appeared in his bank account out of nowhere. On the third day, the same amount appeared again.
The money was tied to the population of An Yuan County. The more people there were, the more money he got. If everyone left, the money would disappear.
And right now, the county’s young people were rushing to leave.
Zhang Wei wasn’t going anywhere. He was going to make them all stay.
Everyone in An Yuan County remembers what happened next: the young man who turned around at the bus station and somehow dragged their nearly deserted little county back from the brink.
It's a very good script. If "Guo Shi" is filmed according to the character dialogue, environment description, and protagonist's performance, it will definitely win the highest awards in Berlin, Cannes, Venice, and Oscars, including Best Actor, Best Picture, Best... Win prizes and get soft
It's okay, but it's a bit repetitive. Just change it.
It's okay, but there are a lot of repetitions, or the previous paragraph is like this, and the next paragraph is also like this.