Cannon Fodder Quick Travel: from Dislike to Heartthrob

The writing is very good, and the emotional lines are very specific and detailed. At first, I thought the plot of the original book was very long-winded, but later combined with what the author wrote, it should be the first small world extra. The emotions are really broken down and broken into pieces, very detailed. It's subtle, so it touched me very much. Pei didn't forget his hatred because of a little love, and it also fits his character very well. Brother Chuang is also very clear-headed and brave. I really want to say to Brother Chuang, "Your writing will definitely be popular," but I don't think I will pursue it. Well, it's not that it's not well written, it's just that it was too sad for me. I kept crying after reading it. In fact, it doesn't mean that it's very sad. The story goes to a very natural ending. They have these identities and love and hatred. Their ending is destined to be like that. It's just a bit too sad for me. I wrote a book review as soon as I finished reading it. Come on, author! The writing is very good! (It's really good. I rarely review books, and sometimes the most I can give a review is [eating melon])

Oh my god, I found a treasure. I really found gold in the era of Tomato's crazy tweets on AI. After watching the first world, I can only say that I really, really want to cry. I think the most uncomfortable thing is the protagonist. He traveled to someone else, couldn't be OOC, and was betrayed in the end. I just felt that this was a dead end in the first world. No matter what, the protagonist cannot reveal that he is not the original owner, but the tragedy between Pei Mingyue and the protagonist comes from this [cry] [cry] Pei Mingyue feels that he is being used as a substitute, but he does not know that the protagonist's first love is him. . The story between the protagonist and Pei Mingyue stems from their characters but also ends with their characters. The protagonist felt that Pei Mingyue was only using him in the end, so he had no excuse. . Then the story becomes tragic all the way. . I haven't watched the second world yet. I think the protagonist should be more open-minded in the later stage, but this story of first love really becomes more and more bitter the more you chew it [crying] [crying] The most outstanding part of the article is that the logic of the characters is in place, and the characters and the intertwining between the characters are also very tense. The four characters (Pei, Wei, Shen, Ye) are also deeply portrayed, including the supporting characters (subordinates, the original owner's family) are also very vivid. Then I think I also like the author's writing style. It's not overly rhetorical, but it can be described with profound writing at the most touching moments. All in all, the imagery of the first world is very sufficient. The bright moon, peach blossoms, and the title "I Dream of Xizhou" are really very poetic and not pretentious [send heart] [send heart]. The character of the protagonist is also kind of funny, so sometimes you will really laugh to death from some plots. I cried and laughed after reading the whole article. For example, the ending was really helpless and unexpected. However, after seeing the supplements in the extra chapter, I still felt that it would be a real tragedy if the funny attributes of the protagonist were faded. . But what attracts me the most is this. There is no traditional sadistic story that makes me want to read it again, nor is it the kind of story-telling plot. The funny and tragic parts of the story are well blended. I really like this kind of story. After reading it now, I feel very melancholy, but the focus is still on the love between the protagonists. I am not very impressed with the world view, but I think it is well written. The writing style and characterization alone have surpassed many articles in an instant. There is just one thing that I personally feel a bit regretful about. Didn't the protagonist not know martial arts at the beginning, and then did a lot of embarrassing things? I thought that in the eyes of outsiders, they would make up for it and promote the development of the story. However, after reading it, there seems to be no change. I thought that Pei could detect through this strange thing that the protagonist is not the original owner. [Crying] I can only say that it is a bit regretful. After all, the direction like that is not as profound as it is now. [Ask for more updates] [Ask for more updates] I plan to save up and watch the second world again. I hope the protagonist will get better and better and meet the right person! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

It looks good. I didn't expect the final development of the first world to be like that. The after-sales service is so delicious. I didn't think I could see anything at all, but in the second half I was still thinking that the misunderstanding might be solved later and Meimei followed the usual routine, but it turned out to be unexpected. But after watching the extra episode, I think it is indeed a very good and unforgettable development. If it were just he, there would be no reflection of the grievances and grievances in the world. I have just regained my passion to write a review, but in my mind he and be are still fighting, and I am still thinking about the development of the first world, but in general, after reading the extra, I feel that everything actually fell into place. It's just a little regretful, maybe because I was still waiting at the end, waiting for my parents and brothers to take Shen Nanfeng home.

Elegant! ? The expression is clear and logical, unlike that of a tomato. The writing style is lighthearted and a bit sadistic from the perspective of the protagonist, but overall it is very good in terms of optimistic comments and makes people want to read on. The expression is a little bit bookish (I thought it became a trend after the original owner really had an affair with Yu) In fact, I never understood Pei's magical fighting style before the extra episode (what do you mean, your adopted brother was killed by a mysterious man who killed the family? You suddenly fell in love with him, even if the man didn't kill the family, your brother died suddenly because of it). But after seeing it, I suddenly woke up. It turns out that Pei has sensitively discovered the abnormality of the mysterious man (no) The description is very delicate and silky, and the taste makes people wake up from a dream. It can be said that it is one of the few works in Persimmon that has few routines, logic and no hidden dangers. It feels like a masterpiece that was released after three years of preparation in high school after the college entrance examination. There is also this dull system (although it is weak and dull, but in most cases However, it is so unpleasant) It made me deeply realize that other novels are too obsessed with the battle between man and machine (it is still unknown why a derogatory plot is used while designing a mascot). The protagonist is exhausted in one plane, but in the end there is a second level to belike [laughing and crying] (I also discovered that when reading a relatively long fast-paced novel, you can pretend to read a short story again, so that you will be reluctant to leave when it ends, but you will find that there is a second level, which is actually very surprising and delicious)

As of Chapter 44 of the second world, it is a complete blast. It was a bit difficult to read in the early stage, but it is related to the layered design of the author's article and has a large amount of information. The output of the story background is a bit complicated, but rich enough. Whenever the background of the story is told, the subsequent plot is very exciting and very exciting to watch [laughs]. The first world arouses the reader's emotions, and there is still a hint of sadness after reading it. The second world can be said to be an anti-routine. In short, this flavor is unique. But it's not over yet, looking forward to the follow-up.

I feel uncomfortable. I am one of the rare people who have completely read the extra chapter and the ending of the small world in a quick travel story. After so long preparations, I actually cried when I saw a girl in the extra chapter fantasizing. [Crying] I was really following the death line of the original work. I didn't know the death update of the original work for a while. What's more absurd is the protagonist's death. The protagonist also experienced Shen Er's pain. TT The protagonist definitely had true feelings for the first world. This is a non-exciting hero's game, and the emotional line is so thorough that I almost cried. Full marks to me, please keep writing.

I don't know why the rating is a bit low. One of Nanfeng and Mingyue always thought that their sincerity was being used by the one they loved, and they were just pawns on his road to revenge. The other fell in love with the person who killed his brother on the road of revenge, but tried every means to deny his feelings. After the death of his lover, he became more and more numb, and the revenge plan seemed to have lost its meaning. They were strangled by the martial arts alliance, and they fell into the illusion of expressing their feelings to their lover until they died. After all, the two still missed each other because they did not trust each other enough. The writing style has always been joyful and humorous, but the doomed tragedy is written in a relaxed style. I haven't read a sadistic novel for a long time. When I saw Nan Feng really kill his brother, I was already destined for the ending of be, but I was still destined to fly into the flames and continue to experience their pain as if I was feeling it. Can't two people open their mouths [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] No matter what, double death is also he[cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

I like it so much. It's rare to see this in fast travel movies. The protagonist has his own bottom line, and the shaping is OK. You can see the growth of the protagonist. The emotional line is also rare and realistic. To be honest, I didn't expect Pei and Ye to end like this in the first world line, but it makes sense if you think about it carefully. The characters also have their own shaping outside of love, which is great.

I accidentally saw this novel and clicked in to read it. Some of the previous chapters were mostly talking to Ah Xuan or explaining the original plot. I was a little impatient at the time because I hadn't waited for the main plot for a long time, but after reading it slowly, I thought it was quite interesting. I faked my death and lost my memory and then encountered the novel. When we get to Liu Ruoshu and find out from the reader's perspective that he is played by Pei Mingyue, we can vaguely see their final emotional line. Ye Chuang is really good and is making plans for himself and Liu Ruoshu, so I feel even sadder because I know that Ye Chuang is a straight man and that Liu Ruoshu is pretending. Everything was exposed later. In Ye Chuang's heart, Pei Mingyue used him more than he liked him. In Pei Mingyue's heart, Ye Chuang or Shen Nanfeng had always liked Wei Xizhou. People like Wei Xizhou were separated by a human life. There was indeed some hatred that could not be resolved, but I really felt sad for Ye Chuang. I always felt that his sincerity had been let down. It's so sad that I can't die. The more I think about it, the sadder it becomes. The first world, their stories, their feelings. It's great, I can't stand it anymore. Let him stop in this world in other time realms. It looks really good. [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

I read the second serialized world first, and after enjoying it with great interest, I turned back to the first world, because I was not particularly interested in the martial arts theme. I thought it was a more relaxed style, and most of the previous content was indeed like this, but it took a sharp turn towards the end, and I still couldn't hold back tears after reading the extras. I am very confused inside, so when I write the book review, my mind is also in a mess. I hope I can express my feelings as clearly as possible. The first world is well worth a look. Although the opening chapter described a lot of the content of the original book and the dialogue between Ye Chuang and the system, which made me so bored that I wanted to quit, the content of the original book was quite interesting. In many fast-traveling novels, the emotional lines of the protagonists in the original world line, Gong Shou, are very carelessly drawn and very traditional. But the description in this article is very detailed, and it does not say that as soon as Ye Chuang enters the small world, the original article will fall in love with the protagonist as fast as lightning, and even the two of them did not realize their love until near the end. The author depicts a lot of fights between Ye Chuang and Pei Mingyue. Xiao Ye racks his brains to complete the task, and Pei Mingyue is teasing him. It is during these processes that Pei Mingyue's hatred for Xiao Ye is mixed with a little unconscious love. After all, Xiao Ye is really cute. Precisely because Pei Mingyue couldn't see her own heart clearly, she made one mistake after another, pretending to be Miss Liu, and even though she couldn't help but get closer, she still had to make excuses. Did she want to see Xiaoye's joke about falling in love with her rival after losing her memory, or did she really like Xiaoye and want to get close to him? Pei Mingyue deceived herself, which led to the final tragedy. Xiaoye couldn't say that she was sincere, but the two fell in love but still separated. The reasons were complicated. It can only be said that the gap between them was too deep. Xiaoye has made the decision to stay for the one she loves, but who would have expected that Miss Liu is Pei Mingyue pretending to be? In the end, he committed suicide by taking poison. On the one hand, the mission could not continue. It may also be that he could not face Pei Mingyue or himself who loved the wrong person. He loved someone wholeheartedly for the first time. In the end, he found out that it was just a mirror image. He was kept in the dark and foolishly wrote letters, sent things, and folded peach blossoms. Unfortunately, until her death, Pei Mingyue thought that Xiaoye didn't love him at all, but loved herself with the shadow of Wei Xizhou. Before she died, she had a fantasy that Xiaoye loved herself. Maybe Xiaoye really loved you? Frankly speaking, I don't like the character Wei Xizhou, I even hate it. If he really likes Pei Mingyue, I don't hate him that much. But it was only after Xiaoye was hurt that he realized that he had always liked Xiaoye, ever since he was young. Unfortunately, Xiaoye later fell into Pei Mingyue's hands, and there was nothing he could do. I have always believed that belated affection is inferior to grass, not to mention that Wei Xizhou had no time to express his affection. The author was very careful when creating these characters and stories, which is why they appear so vivid and have so many regrets. Each of them loved so slowly, Xiaoye loved so hard, but found that he had loved the wrong person. Their love just missed, and when Wei Xizhou's Pei Mingyue realized it, it was too late. As a result, one committed suicide by taking poison, one imitated the love story in the storybook, and the other was worse than dead. The tragic ending was no surprise.

I guess this author and I are close friends. How come the novel he wrote is so satisfying to me? [Laughs] It's like another me in the world. Oh my God, it's really shocking and delicious. [Adoration] [Blow kiss] [Adoration]

The emotional line is really beautifully written, and the writing style is also very good and smooth. The original plot line and the current plot are always alternately supplemented. It is a little tiring to watch, but the subsequent plot is completely into the good state. This extra story is very delicious. I really look forward to the world that follows. [Send my heart] The author writes the characters in a three-dimensional way. The dream of giving up freedom also makes people wake up in fear. It is also very good to choose this perspective.

At first, I was not used to the author's writing style and felt it was messy. But later I got used to it, and I kept up with the rhythm. The more I watched, the more I became obsessed with Ye Chuang. Whether he was a real role or not, I felt very sad. It's hard to let go. It's hard to let go. I feel so bad for Ye. Every time, Ye starts with a collapse. Every time, there is a glimmer of hope. And what these slicers fall in love with is never the original in the original plot, but the Ye after role-playing.

It's so beautiful and it satisfies a very picky reader. I originally thought the first world was surprising enough, but the second world turned out to be even better. I took off straight away. Author, don't be tired and don't rest. It's extremely delicious, so fragrant. In the second world, this straight man is so happy that he becomes a heartthrob. But it's not awkward at all. The protagonist is very charming. I'm going to fall in love with Ye Chuang soon (just kidding, I'm not a dream girl)

It's really beautiful, the writing is very delicate, and the emotional changes are really well written and very natural. During the first hour, I felt a little bit dead after watching it. The torture was very reassuring, but my heart hurt a little (no kidding, it was really physical pain) [crying] [crying] [crying] Great author, come on! Update quickly, I love you! I was dizzy in the middle of the night. I wrote the wrong comment in my last comment. It was the first small world.

It's very beautiful. It's a treasure. The writing is very beautiful, but the work is not very rich. Damn it, there are only a few chapters about campus that I want to read. It's not just acting, it's a bit of your own character. I really cried when I saw the first world. Anyway, it's very fat. Oh no, it's not very fat.

When I watched the first world, I jumped into it. I thought it was a light-hearted and funny story. When I saw Brother Chuang falling in love with Miss Liu later, I felt that something was wrong. This affection must be in vain. Sure enough, the subsequent extra episodes made me cry wildly. You, the author, wrote such a sad story😭

Setting the direction of the plot is okay. Please explain it less. I feel like I am looking for the plot in a bunch of explanations and descriptions.

To be honest, I have never had the patience to read books. This is the one I have finished reading in a real sense. It is really interesting and the portrayal of the protagonist is really great. But I don't know why, but the ratings are always not high. It's so uncomfortable. It's obviously a good book. Recommended!

It's so good to watch, the first world is amazing, the love-hate entanglement that can't be sorted out and then messed up is so exciting. It's so good to read, and the writing about both worlds really touched me. What can I say about the first world? It was a bit bloody, but the writing was really good and the characters were very three-dimensional. The heartthrob of the second world is so popular for me, but it's a bit brain-consuming to follow. By the end, I couldn't figure out which timeline it was talking about. I hope there will be a side story about Pei Mingyue and Shang Yun [crying] I really like how these two get along with Chuang

The writing is great and so is the pacing, especially when the extra chapter and the second world are getting better and better. I feel like some guy is here to fry fish with tomatoes. Boss, please hurry up. I love it.

My heart ached when I read the first world, but be is indeed more impressive than he. The characters are well created. The author said that there should be a plot of returning to the previous small world to make up for the regrets. I will follow up seriously. The writing style is very unique among so many novels I have read. It will definitely become popular. Come on!

It's really well written [heartfelt], it's actually the author's first book, and the emotions in it are very delicate, especially the extra chapters. Although I feel uncomfortable because of the knife, it still reads well, and it's not enough to read [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's so good [crying] It's so good that I cried like crazy [crying] [crying] I hope there will be more updates. I will keep chasing it (ps. Did you really not cry when you wrote the extra chapter of the first world [crying] [crying]) Fate has never favored Pei Mingyue.

I haven't written a book review for a long time because I'm too lazy to write, but this time I think it's worth it, so I might as well write one. I hope the author can stick to it. This book is really well written and delicate. It feels like each character has his or her own soul, and there are a lot of plots mixed with a few jokes. The first world is really sweet and cruel. Woohoo~(>_<)~I cried when I read it. It's so beautiful. I hope the author can stick to it and not stop updating.

A very delicious book! The first world really made my heart hurt when I saw it. The relationships that I couldn't figure out were so complex and delicious! The second world is still being watched. The writing in big letters is really amazing, and the feeling of being depressed after reading it is so amazing! ! ! Keep up the great work! I will always support you! ! [Sending Hearts] (I don't know how to write a paragraph review, so my expression may not be clear)

After reading the first small world, I really felt sour and sour. I especially liked the chapters of Pseudo-Spring [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] Will there be a copy of Xiuxian in the future? Teacher [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's so beautiful and delicious, especially the first world. Are you rewriting JJ's writing? When I first read it, I felt that Ye Zi's character was very similar to Su Bao. After reading Zuohua, I realized that I had changed my mind a lot. The way I explained Moon's behavior was almost the same as when I was with JJ. Fortunately, I changed my mind a lot. JJ's behavior a few months ago was really bad. I really like every article you write.

Does the author really have no other books? Still want to see not enough [cry][cry][cry][cry]

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