Quick Travel: Don't Rush to Cook, Do the Plot First

The first world 1V3 is very nice. I like the one with more than one v. But the ending is a bit abrupt. The other worlds look good^V^

It's okay, but the main control is a bit weak. The first world is acceptable, but the ending is a little too rushed. No one recognizes her, and she doesn't need to play anything. She looks like a silly sweetie. In the third world, the main control should be slightly strengthened. After the fourth world, I felt it was confusing when I watched it. Of course, it was explained clearly later. The fifth one is not finished yet. Generally speaking, the author's writing style has been strengthened. I also feel that the main controller has a little secret, but I feel that the main controller does not know that the main god and the system are hiding something from her. I look forward to the real truth.

After a lot of feedback from babies, I decided to change the plots of the first few worlds and adjust them, and I gained a lot. After brainstorming [blowing kiss] I am still very happy that someone is willing to write a lot of feedback. At least they did not give up directly or just give a low score and leave directly. It is helpful to me [crying] (touched) I used to read novels on Tomato, and this time I wrote it on a whim. I didn't think it was necessary to make a lot of money, and then I cut the book if I wasn't satisfied. I wrote this book when I first thought about it. I didn't have an outline when I first wrote it. The plot between the heroines was relatively sloppy, but I feel that I can continue to improve by writing continuously. I am very grateful to the treasures who have survived the previous worlds. After reading the comments, I realized that I have so many shortcomings. In fact, in my heart, there is room for improvement in the previous worlds, but I never know where to start. My rating shouldn't be important. I'll give it four stars first, haha, and then change it when I'm satisfied with it [laughing] Regarding the character of the heroine, what I want to create is a heroine who is a little funny, a little lucky and crazy? I know that I am not yet capable of portraying a heroine role, so my initial thought was that luck is part of strength. In fact, when I first started writing, I wanted to portray the heroine as a weak little white lotus who could only be bullied, but as I kept writing, I stopped thinking about it. I didn't want her to suffer too much, which caused the first and second worlds and even the third and fourth worlds to be a bit abrupt. I slowly changed it without changing too much. There are indeed some places where the supporting characters appear silly and cute due to the needs of the plot. This is exactly where my writing skills are unskilled [blowing kiss] Only when errors are discovered can they be corrected. I usually go back and take a look when I'm fine. Sometimes I can see something is wrong, but I just can't tell what should be changed [laughing and crying] The first world is too short. If you want to add something, you can only add it to the number of words in each chapter. You may be aggrieved to the babies [almost crying] It stands to reason that it is difficult to control the emotions of many people, so I think well but write poorly, but this is not a reason. I also want to see myself writing articles that I myself like to read [Sending Hearts] If you don't like it yourself, how can you ask others to like it too? This is a new endeavor for me. I welcome friends' valuable opinions and careful guidance. To be honest, I was really touched by the long comments in the comment area, but now it seems useless to say too much. Only by making actual progress can I give everyone an explanation. Thank you all for your support [Sending Hearts] Oh no, I found out that it's not the five stars that can't be seen on the cover of the book [Shocked]

It's quite beautiful, the author's writing is very good, and the heroine is very thin and reassuring [laughing] However, because it is a quick time travel drama, it is inevitable that there is a common problem with fast time travel - the pace is fast, and some plots cannot be studied in detail, but the author's writing is quite interesting, and it makes people want to read it [I learned it]

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The beginning of the second world is quite funny

It's okay. It's just that the plot of the Water God was inexplicable when I first started watching it. Come on [thinking]

It's good to read. The author's writing is very good. I really like the plots of Jiu Liu 1V and hope to read more. Thank you to the author for greatly enriching my bookshelf [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss]

This rice is very delicious. I like Painted Skin Ghost the most at the moment. The author has a way of writing little monsters. It's so cute and cute [shy][admired]

It's super good. Don't leave just because there are not many people reading it. It's very well written, especially Water God. After you left, I lived like you. It's so delicious.

It looks good. I love watching it. I want to watch it again.

The most shocking and delicious food in the universe

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Damn it, I forgot to write a book review_(:з∠)_

Beautiful, I like it very much

Very exciting, so exciting! ! ! (That is, whether the second world is Shuangjie...)

What a fragrant rice! Take a big gulp of rice... [Blow a kiss] Humorous and interesting, the plot is very good

I feel very good looking

I'm going to look so good [admiration]

Good, good, good

This book is so fat and beautiful

The writing is okay, but I hope the author can pay attention to the fact that boys can address both boys and girls. When writing about boys in the article, they use boy, and girls start using girl.

Okay, it's still very beautiful.

Hahaha, the author wrote the plot well. Beautiful [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss] I hope there are more small worlds hahaha