Hogwarts: Black Rising

The writing is pretty good. From the perspective of science popularization, I can see that the author is really serious about it. However, some chapters go too far in popularizing science. A small amount of plot is found in a large amount of popular science. After all, anyone who comes to HP Second Creation will understand some background stories. Too much science popularization feels a bit overwhelming, but overall it is still a good HP Second Creation article. Good luck to the author.

The writing is OK, although it may have some AI polishing, but not much. The author also has his own ideas, not just following the plot. I deducted one star because I think the writing is a bit wordy, with long paragraphs of background and setting instructions. This is why I think AI is involved. But despite its flaws, it's still a HP fan that's worth watching.

It is a rare novel that changes the branches of Hermione and Neville. The protagonist is also in Hufflepuff, which makes the quality of Hufflepuff students become the highest among the four major colleges. I also like Hufflepuff very much, so I give it a high score. In addition, since it is known that Zhang Qiu is the heroine, and Hermione and Ron have not crossed paths, then who will Hermione be with? I am very curious [exploration] Okay, I read the introduction again and found out that there are multiple female protagonists, which is good. Will there be a Shura field later?

Among most Harry Potter fanfics I've read, this one can be said to be 99% rare. First of all, the author's supplementary settings alone are difficult for most fan fiction writers to match. Let's put it this way, Harry Potter written by jk is a story, mainly based on plot, and this book not only has its own original plot, but also completes the world view. It has written not only a story, but also constructed a complete magical world from the side. Although it only has a few hundred chapters at present, it can be said that the future can be expected. Then comes the character creation. The author should be a senior fan of the original work, and he should be writing based on the character settings of the original work. The most prominent one is Zhang Qiu. After all, the Harry Potter movies did change part of the plot, but it also affected some of the characters. I hope the author can give them a good ending. Finally, the author's writing style is very good, but I personally think that his logic should be unmatched by most fan fiction writers. I won't spoil too much about the protagonist's character. You just need to know that he is a semi-invincible growth-type character. If you like, you can take a look.

All I can say is that the author wrote very carefully. For this carefulness, I currently score 4 points [laughter] [like]. Let's see what happens next. No, [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] I really have never seen Hermione being assigned to Hufflepuff. I must give this author a creative point. I hope it won't end badly or be cut in half or something.

The content is okay, and the update speed is also great, one chapter per day.

It's okay, although some settings have been added, it won't have a big impact. It's just that the update progress is really too slow. Don't write such detailed background introductions (such as Quidditch). Focus on the plot. Otherwise, if the update pace is so slow, you won't be able to wait too long.

Maybe it's because it's a new book, but I think this one is very good Since HP itself is a fantasy book for teenagers, its fans basically have shortcomings of poor writing ability, such as the flashy magician (good-looking and handsome, but not aesthetically pleasing), or some ruining the original work, or too fuzzy logic All in all, this book seems to be logically reasonable, consistent with romanticism, and consistent with basic human nature.

In fact, I feel that the writing is quite good, and it can be seen in many places that the author has really put his thoughts and efforts into it. The only drawback is that the update is a bit slow. It has only been a day since I read it, and I will soon be able to keep up with the big army.

Don't you want Hibiscus Veela? What a pity

I really like the floating island written by the author. You can try writing a fanfic about Bone King.

It's actually quite good now. Some things are explained at the end. Even a novice in the setting can understand a little bit. Then the update of the big chapter is very good. I don't know if it will increase the score, so I praise it well. Ah, there are very few book reviews. Come on, the author, don't stop updating. It's good [Chigua]

The author added a lot of personal settings, but it is surprisingly beautiful.

There's no reason for the good reviews, I just think it's more comfortable to watch.

It's actually pretty good.

Not bad, just too little! We've only reached chapter 24 and it's really not enough to read, so give it a try! You can easily find it in a while [Chigua]

The writing is okay, but it's not very refreshing. I can read it to pass the time.

Very interesting, come on, come on, come on! ! !

Not bad, many settings of the original work have been rationalized, and it's quite enjoyable to watch.

If you clarify the harem, it's a good article, [laughs evilly]

Not bad so far

Come on, the writing is not bad.

I've read Chapter 40 and it's pretty good.

5 Stars to encourage and prevent interruption of updates I have read the latest chapter. Among the dozens of fanfics I have read, the quality is really high. The unreasonable parts of the original work have been modified and supplemented as reasonably as possible and consistent with the logic of the original work. I really like reading this book and support the author.

Well written! Like

I think it's ok for now

The progress is a bit slow, and the main plot is basically not advanced. The progress can be speeded up.

One-third of the text is the author's explanation that has nothing to do with the plot.

The book is okay, not to mention how good it is, at least I can read it.

Not bad, interesting. I like it a lot. Keep up the good work, author.