Qing Leng Daojun's Notes on Rebirth

Which boss has been reincarnated? This effort, plot development, character description, and image outline are completely unlike a newcomer. 99% Of Tomatoes are not at this level. [Chigua] It's been a long time since I've read such a refreshing fairy tale.

Thank you all book friends for your support. I recommend good books and wish you a great success! Dear brothers and sisters, I don't want to say much to express my gratitude. I mainly want to talk about this book. This book is currently facing a rather embarrassing situation - poor traffic, and the total number of readers is decreasing day by day. Such a state is far inferior to the peak period, and it can be said that it has reached a moment of crisis. I would like to shamelessly ask all the beautiful and handsome readers who have not participated in the rating to give this book a five-star review - this is crucial to whether the traffic of subsequent book tests can increase. I have generally browsed the current book review section, and some have given encouragement and affirmation to the author, while others have criticized it - in short, it is very pertinent, and the author is continuing to improve. But it is true that some book reviews are "malicious negative reviews", which have nothing to say, and invisibly lower the rating of the book (wry smile) Once again, I ask for your five-star reviews. For long reviews with specific language evaluations, the author will also read them carefully and respond! Lord Mo Tong, I pay my respects.

The writing style is a bit literate, but it reads well. The world view is very broad. It is worth mentioning that the foundation builder in this book is really a big boss. Even the peak master of the sect where the male protagonist belongs is a qi practitioner [laughs]. Having said that, although this book has multiple female protagonists, I actually hope that the main plot is that the male protagonist starts a career, is reborn, and controls the situation in the hands of the Tao Lord. The love line can be secondary, otherwise it would be a pity for such a big world view.

It looks good. Apart from other things, the writing is very good. The world view is also great. The combat power does not feel like it will collapse too quickly. It just feels a bit lengthy at times. I hope the author can continue to write and complete this book. Don't leave it unfinished. I can't watch anymore, it's too long-winded. The plot is also motionless. I can talk about one thing several times, and the fighting scenes don't feel exciting. When I first started watching it, I thought it was relatively fresh. The writing is quite good. After so many scenes, it feels like nothing has happened in the plot. It's just a bunch of words piled here. It's really confusing. And anyway, the protagonist also feels the same. He will always have the same character. I don't want to watch the following plots. What about men dressing up as women? Mainly because I really can't stand the author's writing. It's long and smelly, and there's nothing refreshing about it. It's really a bit toxic.

I have seen the latest chapter, and overall it is very interesting. The plot content is quite attractive, the setting and world view are relatively complete, there are no bad points, but the pace is a little slow. After reading more than 200 chapters, the male protagonist is not particularly strong, and his strength growth is relatively slow, and there are relatively few emotional lines. Although the label is multiple female protagonists, there is currently no obvious multi-female protagonist (based on the content of 200 chapters, I personally guess that if there are multiple female protagonists, there should be these: two junior sisters Li Wanzhao, Li Wantang, Master Jiang Taosheng, Zhexian Yu Qingxiao and Mirage Mengling) Finally, the author gives a big boost [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It feels like the leader Jing Keshou, and the writing also has the flavor of immortality. It's beautiful. The second volume started to be a bit flashy. The author ran out of ideas and started sewing things blindly. The behavior of the protagonist is not in line with the reincarnation of the real king and the character of the first volume. I wanted to write a fairy protagonist, but I didn't make a good outline and didn't have the corresponding writing skills. Although I updated it three times a day, it was like water. I hope I can stop and think about how to write, otherwise I will be sorry that the first volume was so good.

The psychological description of the characters is very detailed and not verbose, and the writing style has a delicacy that is not belonging to tomatoes. The foreshadowing of the plot and the explanation of the actions are very natural. The overall world view is grand, but the combat power value is not very high perhaps because of the lower realm? At present, neither the protagonist nor the villain behaves brainlessly, and there is no female protagonist who is purely sympathetic. I hope that the author can get in touch with the Li sisters more during the male protagonist's bottleneck period and portray their characters. It would be better if there is some daily life or extra stories. It is a great book! [Adoration]

@ Mo Tong Zhenren, the author, you have blocked me, then you have to finish this story well. I really like to read such a good immortal cultivation novel for a long time. Come on, author, I am optimistic about you [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

The setting of the male protagonist is definitely based on "Xianye" + "Daodao Chaotian", which is not bad.

Attracted by the title, looking forward to looking forward to looking forward to it!

I feel that it has a monastic charm, and proper text modification is a must. However, objectively speaking, it may not be suitable for Tomato's writing style. People here generally like to read refreshing articles, so the author should treat this low score rationally.

It's pretty good-looking. It has a few minor flaws but it's not a major problem. I don't know what those people think because they say it's ugly because of a small problem. I really can't appreciate the fine grain. Overall, the book is good.

The quality is very good. It is basically consistent with the author's description. It completely exceeds expectations. The description is very careful. I am very satisfied with this book. However, the cited references are a bit boring and I will not read them carefully. I hope it can be improved [Like][Like][Like]

I've finished watching it, the plot is very appealing.

Go to Chapter 226 and summarize some advantages and disadvantages. Advantages: The world view is relatively grand and complete, the stage plot is acceptable, and the writing is good. Disadvantages: Inadequate characterization (emotional descriptions are weak and characters are not three-dimensional enough), the language throughout the book is too difficult and obscure (too many esoteric words and phrases make it difficult and tiring to read), and the pace is slow (too much meaningless content. Two chapters a day are updated and can sometimes be deleted without affecting the plot). Overall, I can give it five points of support. I hope the author can optimize the following chapters after reading this review.

The combination of male fairies and classical immortality is really eye-catching AI expansion is too complicated. It either introduces magic weapons or traces magical powers. It is not a simple introduction. The classical Chinese text is almost full. The plot cannot be advanced at all, and the character image is becoming more and more pale.

Five stars, it looks comfortable, I like the character of the protagonist and the setting very much, but it would be nice if there were more updates. The update is too slow to read these, so no one is keeping up, and a little bit is simply not enough.

Yes, I hope the character will not change. If I am dissatisfied with the situation, the character will collapse and become greasy. Come on, it's a good book that suits your tastes.

The world view is huge and worth a closer look! Handy!

Not bad, not bad. Although it is obviously the template of Xianye, from the perspective of online writing, this one is more enjoyable. It just so happens that Xianye is still being updated slowly. As long as the quality does not decline, it is not bad to follow the two books together (ps: the names of the people are not changed, isn't it a bit too outrageous)

The plot is online, but the progress of the main plot is a bit slow. One of the things that attracted me is that these fairies are real fairies. I just want to see their emotional lines and the entanglement between the cold protagonists, but there is not much written about this aspect. Please update soon.

It seems to be a very good novel. The writing has a very "fairy" flavor. The character setting and plot structure are very good. It reminds me of the feeling when I first started reading fantasy. I personally think it is fairy grass [blowing kiss]

It's very interesting, and the plot is very exciting!

You have a big brain, come on!

It's my type, so cool

It's my type, it's very pretty

I was attracted by the title, the writing is very good and beautiful (♥∀♥)

It's very interesting, the plot is very good, it's very exciting!

Well written, the characters are great, and the writing is strong

I was attracted by the title, the subject matter is novel, the writing is very good, and it's very interesting.