I Am the Villain Prince, What Happened to My Six Wives at the Beginning?

After reading a lot of comments and suggestions, I reviewed the plot for myself, and found that my thinking was too simplistic, and I took it for granted and imagined an enlightened fictional dynasty. It was indeed damning. There are also some foreshadowings that were laid out a little hastily, and the transitions in some sections were not natural enough, because I was not thoughtful enough. The villains I wrote before were indeed urban. This is the first time I changed my historical perspective, and there are too many shortcomings. In the future, I will try my best to polish the details, control the rhythm, and live up to every reader who follows the update. Finally, thank you all for your advice, I love you. Thank you readers, Baozi, for being willing to tolerate me even though I have so many shortcomings. I wish everyone better and better. All goes well.

It feels like a female channel, but the writing style is really good, not too censorship. Most of your fans are men, so write more comfortably, show the power of the prince, and be more manly.

It's okay, it's not a standard cool novel, it's 65% cerebral and 20% cool, and 5% is the author helping the protagonist forcefully make the unreasonable into reasonable. If you want to watch something pure and cool, you can go. It has a bit of a cool literary feel of female videos, and the struggle for power is endless, and there seems to be modern elements behind it? It's the kind of drama where you suddenly watch a fight for heir power, and then you suddenly get a modern element, which makes it feel like a drama. [Thinking] I didn't see much of the big poisonous spots. Personal evaluation: It's an okay little cool article. As a follow-up, the later chapters are a bit like a female protagonist. Although it is a male protagonist, I feel constrained everywhere. If I can't stand this kind of plot, I think I can leave.

It's okay. It's very satisfying to watch those fast-paced movies that take down the heroine all at once, but if you watch too many of them, it becomes a bit boring and you have no desire to continue watching. This kind of emotional line develops gradually, which is quite beautiful against the fast pace. And I feel that the author is more active than the readers, which is goodദ്ദി(• ˕ •マ.ᐟ

It is rare for a female author to write historical and plot-driven harem novels. Although the whole novel is mainly about romance, and more about the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists, the contrast between the subject matter and the writing method is quite good. The advantages and disadvantages of female-oriented writing in male-oriented novels depend on whether the author can grasp it, otherwise it will be blocked at both ends. So far, I think it is acceptable, which is eye-catching, and there are almost no competitors in the same type of novels. It has an inherent advantage, and the author's writing, plot, and characters can also be of an above-average level [Explore] Of course, there are also shortcomings. Some parts are too detailed, such as the increase in favorability, which is often +1/+2. Humans are not machines, and emotional and psychological changes are not so precise. Then there are many times in the article where the psychological states and actions of the heroines and supporting characters are described in a single line, with five or six lines in a row. It is a delicate writing style unique to female videos, but I think that since it is a male channel, this style of writing should be appropriately reduced. It does not mean to abandon it, but to describe the key plots in detail. The more times it appears, it gives me the feeling of watching Gong Douwen. It is laborious to watch and can easily affect the perception [Thinking] All in all, this article is quite novel and interesting. You can see the delicacy of the female channel and the power and wits of the male channel in the harem at the same time. This is difficult to see in a single male channel and female channel. Considering that there are too few articles of the same type (or it should be said that female authors are resistant to writing male channel themes), this article has great potential and is worthy of appreciation. The author continues to work hard, and I hope you can integrate it more naturally and appropriately in the future [eating melon]

It's very interesting. I can tell from the first few chapters that the author is not very used to it, but it gets better and better as I go on. I really like the interaction between the protagonist and the heroine, and the main plot is also very good. I'm curious about the ages of the protagonists. I hope the author keeps writing and doesn't give up. It's been a long time since I've seen such an interesting book. Come on!

Very nice! I originally thought it was a typical villain counter-attack story, but I didn't expect it to be a solid one. Every character in the book has its own core, even a supporting character has its own characteristics. This shows that the author is very attentive, and the writing is also delicate. At least I can read every paragraph carefully, instead of just passing through three lines at a glance.

This novel is definitely a masterpiece among the same type of prince novels! The core villain's counterattack setting is very fresh, and the configuration of the six wives at the beginning does not seem messy. The author accurately depicts the character and ability of each heroine. There is no role-playing role, and the scene where everyone works together to protect the husband is particularly heartwarming and touching. The plot of Machiavellian plot is smooth and easy to understand, and the interesting points are well arranged. It not only has the tension of fighting for the heir, but also intersperses with warm and delicate emotional interactions; the design of the beauty system fits the plot logic, and the clean setting of all the members is a bonus. Since the serialization, the plot has been very complete, and it has remained so popular that it has even been adapted into a comic series, which proves the excellence of the work and is well worth reading.

There are new things to see, and the creativity is very good. But I don't quite understand it. Imperial power shouldn't be supreme in the early stage. The conditions in the northern border make sense. Who does this person in Huajianlou mean to let the prince talk to her? No, I still feel that Liu Ruyan in Huajianlou is too poisonous. Even if you have a background, can you tell me whether you are from the royal family or someone the royal family does not dare to offend? Without mentioning it in the previous article, I will just see a prince negotiating terms with a leading figure? It's too poisonous to see this

I really like this article. The description of emotions is very delicate, and the interaction with the ladies is also very interesting. It's really a monkey in a chain, hahahaha. The ladies have distinct personalities and have high IQs. The author is very good at writing. Anyway, I think it is very good. I have never eaten any delicacies from the mountains and seas. This article is very delicious to me. Come on, the author is great.

No matter what others say, I think the pace is very good and the plot I like to watch. I keep following the updates until I catch up with the big team. People in the comments section say that the prince has to undergo the test of being a coward. I think it's just an imaginary dynasty. What's wrong with writing about the plot with the heroine? If you want to read a cool article about the supremacy of imperial power, you can change the book. All books can be suitable for the taste of trolls. Just state the facts to avoid other people who don't like it. You have to leave the comment section to look for existence and various ridicules to show that you are very capable. If you have fun reading the pictures in the novel, you must not be happy the whole time, right? Haha.

It is a rare good book with no running accounts. The setting makes a good start and is very attractive to read. The subsequent development is also very interesting. My favorite part is the dialogue between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, which very much embodies the male protagonist's personality charm and the female protagonist's emotional transformation towards the male protagonist, and moves the female protagonist step by step to truly enter their hearts. The system setting is not too overwhelming like some other works, which makes this book more readable and makes people look forward to the subsequent performance of the male protagonist. I wish the author better and better, and I look forward to seeing your updates and reading a few chapters in my free time [laughs] [sending heartfelt wishes]

Now that I have finished reading it, the author's writing is quite good and there are no poisonous points for the time being. I think the author does not need to worry too much about how to write male and female videos. If they are mixed in, it will be confusing. The protagonist role is about the protagonist and the Destiny Daughter and Destiny Son. Just focus on these characters. For now I came to see that the author is very good at writing about the emotions of characters. The Daughters of Destiny and Sons of Destiny have their own unique settings. The current eight (Princess Dali can't tell yet) are all pretty good. I'm curious about the subsequent characters. I hope there won't be any bad points. Please, please, please say important things three times! Here are two small suggestions. The author can reduce some modern content. After all, the genre is not urban, and it will look strange! In recent chapters, the scenes between the protagonist and the six ladies have been a bit less (but it is also possible that the author is laying the groundwork) Writing a group portrait is quite difficult, but I really like the characters of the protagonist and the Sixth Lady (the follow-up may be 12 people [laughing]). I hope you won't give up because of writing chores. Come on, author, I will continue to pursue it (the short drama is very interesting, please be sure to update it)

The author writes very well, and the romance is top-notch, probably because she is a female author. The characters, emotions, and psychological activities are described very delicately. This is the highlight of the book. However, although the plot is about the plot of a male channel, the plot is not direct enough and too boring. The male channel can be more direct, and the background of the protagonist can be simpler. The male channel does not need too flashy identity hidden clues. The male protagonist should be made more manly and masculine. The overall plot of the male protagonist is held up by rules and regulations. Most of the characteristics of the male channel are breaking the rules, which is the unique cool point of the male channel. Come on, author, this is one of the few villain stories that is very interesting in terms of romance. If the advantages of men and women are combined, it will be a rare and good book. No male author can write such a satisfying emotional line.

Although the overall political game part is not that brilliant, it is still quite good. I especially praise the author's grasp of the heroines' characters. It is quite brilliant. Although it is limited by the restriction of multiple heroines and cannot describe the heroines' personalities and character arcs in a large amount of space, the characters are still quite vivid and full of characters. The writing is also difficult to read, but there is too little description of the appearance of the heroines and too much blank space. I have to say that female authors are surprisingly good at writing works with multiple female protagonists. They can better grasp the feeling of the harem than male protagonists. After reading it carefully, let me briefly talk about the biggest advantage of this book. In fact, the harem relationship formed by the female protagonist and the male protagonist written by the author is quite realistic. Although he forcibly married 6 girls in the early stage, he did establish relationships with each of the girls step by step. The male protagonist did not rely on the so-called cheating or persuasion [laughter], but treated the female protagonists as well as possible under the premise of forming a community of interests with him through events, and he served as a platform for them to shine. Whether it's Xie Qingwan's poetry club or Su Yao's housekeeper, etc. This will allow every girl in the harem to have a distinct image, which is more reasonable. The male protagonist is not just an object of reliance or worship for them, but also a partner on the way to realizing his career or ideal. After all, the stability of a harem is not just the love for the male protagonist. Love is occupation, but affection and harmony are stability. This makes it more realistic and allows people to take on the role. Although it is a bit less satisfying, it can be said that the author has already written the most important and essential part of the harem novel. Only veteran harem novel authors such as Ji Cha can write it so well. As a newcomer, the author can write it so well. It is already very impressive. I hope to keep up the good work, please give me more storylines about Yaoyao and Ling'er (the housekeeper and the shady doctor are so compatible) [Adoration]. I will definitely give the author a gift when it is finished. [Sinister smile]

The writing is good, but some settings and plots need to be polished. The short drama flavor is a bit heavy, and I hope it gets better in the future. Then there is the system. It is said to be a system, but it feels like it can be regarded as the kind of cheat in other novels that absorbs a certain amount of luck and then returns rewards.

Although it is a villain novel, dealing with the protagonist of Destiny is more like a branch plot. Unlike other villain novels that deal with the protagonist of Destiny, and the protagonist of this book does not go through the rebirth system; the beginning is not very good, the protagonist is a bit frustrated, and the plot rhythm and conspiracy layout are not interesting, but it can be seen that the author is in It's getting better and better; the writing is good, the characters are well portrayed, and the characters all have their own personality traits, especially the female protagonists who are responsible for being a good friend and protecting their husbands. The interactions between the male protagonists and the female protagonists are well described. The male protagonist doesn't tend to take advantage of others when he should, and he also has a strong awareness of lightning protection. Overall, it has pros and cons, and the author interacts a lot and takes suggestions, so it's still worth a read.

It's well written. I saw a comment on the Hongguo👀 comic that Shen Youniu was afraid to read the original work. I took a look and found out that it was not there. I was shocked. I have to say that the male comics written by the female author have a different flavor [laughing] The second season of the comic is too good. I don't know if the next door will change it. The quality of the third season is much lower. It's all about talking plots [face covering]. Based on this book, I feel that the following The story line is very big. Can this AI comic be done well? Various problems are prone to occur when the story line is long. I was fine at the beginning of the book, but there are takeaways and Zhentian Lei in the back. The scope is a bit too big. I am afraid that the comic series will not be done well. I have to say that the author's writing is really good. I just hope that the publisher will not make random changes and just follow the original work. It has only been updated to more than 100 chapters. Come on, the author is very [like][like][like]

It's quite interesting. This is one of the few harem stories that I find interesting. This writing is definitely top-notch among Tomato novels, but 12 heroines is too many, and there are too many characters to write about. I hate characters being marginalized.

After watching the early stage, I can actually give it 8.8 Points from an objective point of view, mainly because it has no poisonous points and is too stable. The author has some writing skills, the logical conception is reasonable, and many characters have been successfully created. There are also some seemingly unreasonable methods that can be rounded off later. I expressed some opinions earlier, but you used them rationally later, which is a bit of a slap in the face. There are no traditional slap-in-the-face scenes of cool novels, which is an advantage, but I always feel that there are some shortcomings. Although the protagonist has won a few waves in the power contest, there are not many opportunities to show off in front of others. In one sentence, there are a lot of foreshadowings, the rise is too slow, and it feels like the writing is too detailed. There are mostly witty fighting scenes in the early stage. Except for the high-spirited marriage of six destined daughters at the beginning, there are fewer passionate fighting scenes later on. If you are young and frivolous without passion, it is a highlight to pick six. Personally, I hope that the author can write with all his strength and keep reading, reading less good books. Following the latest chapter, the story begins to expand and spread out across the world, and becomes interesting. The character creation is very successful, and the author has a good foundation. When reading, it is obvious that it can be different from other novels. The supporting characters in many works only assume a functional position and have no independent persona and personality. Their faces are blurred and cannot be remembered soon after watching them. The supporting characters in this book are all stand-up, and you can feel what kind of person they are and how they do things. It's just that the author is too stubborn. Although the protagonist is powerful, he rarely goes into battle to kill enemies and takes too few risks.

This is my first review, just give me some suggestions and serve as a reference. The writing style is good, and there is no special literary youth problem. The emotions are very good, but the pace is a bit slow. I talked about Guangli Martial Arts School for several chapters. I recommend watching a certain Teddy, but it is difficult to learn the bad parts.

At first, I read the first ten chapters with the mentality of passing the time, and found more and more surprises, and I was immersed in the stage set by the author before I knew it. This book has many advantages. First of all, the plot is very exciting. In order to survive and marry several princesses, in order to defeat the son of destiny, he set up a trap, in order to understand his life experience and draw out the Liu family's hidden clues, for me, this is already out of the ordinary. (I have only read more than 200 chapters at the moment. If the subsequent plot is not very good after reading it, I will add comments, but at the moment I personally think it is very good). Secondly, the characters have worked hard. Each of the princesses has a distinct personality, with skills, professional knowledge, ability, literary talent and military force. Each one has a shining point, and each one is a comrade-in-arms who shares the pressure for the protagonist. The group portrait drama is afraid of chaos, and the author is afraid that the author will focus on one person and marginalize the others, but the author grasps the balance, everyone is singing on the stage, and everyone is showing their true appearance to the readers. Finally, I hope the author will work hard, take care of himself, and give the hero and the ladies a satisfying ending, give the readers a satisfying ending, and also give himself a satisfying ending.

Overall, it's a very enjoyable Huang Shu story, with the six ladies having distinct characteristics. 1 Su Yao who is too upright and has a dumb voice 2 Shen Ling'er, a curious and well-behaved baby who likes to take drugs 3 Murong Xue, the princess of the North who is a bit violent and protective of her husband 4 The arrogant royal sister with superior martial arts Sister Lin 5 The source of intelligence in Huajianlou, the courtesan Ruyan and the great emperor Liu Ruyan (one of the twins) 6 A wall of talents and a description that is less like a puppet Xie Talented Girl 7 Not a biological sister, but some yandere princess Gu Sister (actually Liu Ruyan's sister) Twin Two) This article has many advantages, but its shortcomings are that the plot is a bit slow and the ink is not crisp enough. It is said that there are 12 female protagonists. I've only seen the seventh one so far. Although she is a female author, her writing style is very elegant, so please be patient and read it. Non-toxic and non-toxic.

Well, overall it feels good, and among male videos, the emotional line is quite delicate. I think the characters of each heroine are relatively distinct. This book belongs to the ancient fantasy and conspiracy genre, but it is not particularly brain-burning. For those who like a fast pace, the pace of this book may feel a bit slow. Personally, I think the writing is pretty good and you can take a look.

Author, you made me break the habit again. As expected, this happened only 0 or countless times. I used to only read novels with at least one million words. I didn't want to experience the feeling of chasing through books for a long time because I didn't read enough. Now because I read comics , I couldn't hold it back, because I watch both male and female channels. Generally, those who want to watch delicate emotions go to female channels. Male channels only watch cool stories and plots. Of course, male channels also feel that they are well-written, but very few. I fell into this novel again. How long will it take to follow this [crying]

The quality of this book is okay But hehe, can you let me play a small role? My name is an old trick As a grassland man, Beimang should also be a copy of the New World dungeon, a grassland king Tuoba Mang. Then there is another prairie heroine who is perfect [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] I would like to express my recognition of this work with this nine-star review. The plot outline of the book is well-conceived and the story direction is clear and clear. What is particularly valuable is that the author maintains an open creative mind, humbly listens to readers' suggestions, actively optimizes content, and always maintains an active creative state. The whole work is logically self-consistent, the plot is steady and steady, and there is never any deviation or breakdown. Character creation is a highlight of this book. Whether it is the upright Son of Destiny or the antagonistic villain protagonist, the emotional expression is delicate and abundant, the character's life background is also fully explained, and each character has flesh and blood. As a female author who masters the subject matter of male videos, her works not only retain the narrative characteristics of male videos, but also incorporate the unique and delicate touch of female writing, forming a distinctive feature. Compared with the fast-paced and refreshing novels that are popular nowadays, the narrative rhythm and emotional expression of this book are more delicate, which makes some readers who prefer strong and refreshing plots feel a little uncomfortable. There is no standard answer to aesthetics. Each reader has different experiences and preferences, so the perspective on the story naturally varies. There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand readers, and it is unrealistic to force a work to cater to everyone's tastes. If you can stick to the original intention of creation and carefully carve out the story and characters, it is an excellent work worthy of recognition. @ Hammer hammer must work hard.

The writing is fine, with ups and downs, but not much fluctuation. The plot of the heroine is decent, but Destiny's Child lacks a bit of flavour. It's all about behind-the-scenes calculations. The first leaf takes too much effort. It makes up history. It's too empty. It's easy for a dandy prince with a favored concubine to kill a useless protagonist. After all, it's a female channel. It's subtle enough. 4 Stars to support the evacuation [I learned it]

This is one of the best books I have read recently about people dressing up as villains. At the beginning, you collect half of the harem and then slowly conquer it. At present, each heroine has her own unique emotional line, which does not make the plot a mindless stallion novel. Therefore, in many reviews, I didn't pay much attention to issues such as "the heroine has a bad attitude towards the prince" mentioned above. After all, being a prince in ancient times does not allow you to have many adventure experiences to enhance the heroine's relationship like in Western fantasy. I think there is nothing wrong with handling it like this. If it doesn't work, everyone can just watch the heroine's video. If you see this comment later xdm, you can try reading it. The author's writing is quite good. I don't know why the score of 7.4 Is too low. I'm about to read the latest chapter now, Kaiyang! (The author would like to work hard to update, can you do ten chapters a day [crying])

To be honest, every character described by the author has its own characteristics, and the description of the character is really good. I used to watch the comic and then switched to the novel. I watched more than 300 episodes of the second season of the comic and finally finished the novel. I also read some of the novels. As expected of the female author, the characters are detailed and distinct.

I've watched half of it, and it's very well written, both in terms of plot and foreshadowing. It's also a gold mine, but the male protagonist's life experience has never been clear, so I deduct one point. In the era of feudal imperial power, the most taboo things were blood relations and the integrity of the throne. The male protagonist could only be named Gu when he ascended the throne, but the male protagonist was not a prince. The male protagonist was born four years before the Liu family was wiped out. I was curious about how powerful the male protagonist's parents were to make Concubine Chen willing to take the risk of drinking oxytocin and giving birth to her own daughter in exchange for the male protagonist. She was even willing to make arrangements to help the male protagonist ascend the throne. This shows that there is a certain legitimacy for the male protagonist to ascend the throne, but because the male and female protagonists cannot be related by blood, the male protagonist cannot be named Gu, but the male protagonist cannot be named Liu, otherwise the result would be too vulgar with so much foreshadowing. So I'm stuck. I hope the author can solve this problem perfectly. The more preset conditions, the fewer possibilities there are to choose from, and it is rare to change half of the story to change the protagonist's surname. This greatly reduces the impression, so I boldly guess that the protagonist can only be named Gu, so the problem can only lie with the emperor. I just think this is very interesting and there are different viewpoints that I can bring forward and talk about. Rational analysis, do not promote individuals, welcome book friends to discuss together.