Cultivation: Stop Scolding Me, the Cannon Fodder Is Reading the Comments

An article about cultivating immortality, it is very well written... With constant exchanges of favors and tactful plots, and a sticky plot. The narrative is a bit streamlined but the descriptions are very slow, with no focus or climax. Let's talk about the barrage. The two sides saw viewers who looked like different versions of the plot, but they also saw the real-time situation of the two characters at the same time. This was very contradictory. If it was the audience of two different versions of the plot, wouldn't there be a logical problem in seeing the situation on both sides? And it didn't appear again soon. Is it a bit "redundant"? Finally, let's talk about the characters. Different character backgrounds are narrated for free, and the psychology of each other is written simultaneously. However, there are many "abnormal" behaviors that make the whole reading process without a highlight. It is a lot of mess, sparse narration and the Riddler's technique, which makes it difficult to read.

It's okay, but there are a lot of bad guys. It's not that good that the female supporting character of Danmaku Golden Finger is also there.

Nice! ! ! More [shy]