The Endless Transmigration Journey Begins in Chaldea

Everything else is okay, but the pace is a bit too fast, including the dialogue and plot development. It feels like fast forwarding. Fuyuki's special points were solved quickly, including the first dungeon Demon Slayer.

It's okay, keep updating. I hope the heroic spirit I designed won't be too abstract.

With the encouragement of five stars, let me complain first. This is really the smallest of the lucky books I have read. There are currently several issues with seeing Ultraman come back from the end of the world. First: This setting of losing part of a world's memory is a big poison. Second: The introduction says that the person summoned by Demon Slayer is called Enichi Tsukuni, and it is indeed called Enichi Tsukuni, but I have told you clearly from the beginning that it is not the case. Although the plot behind it is very good, it is very comfortable to watch, and the explanation is very reasonable. But I do feel a bit cheated by the introduction. Third: The three holy crystals that were missing when entering the Ultraman world were almost obviously a big thunder. In the end, a part of the memory seal was revealed. Hei Zhen and the protagonist were sealed together. It can be seen that the author has thought carefully about this plot because the holes can be filled in before and after. However, it can only be said that the plot of defeating the people around him and reversing time to come back should be avoided as much as possible. Moreover, the character design of Hei Zhen in this paragraph is too good, but the introduction is a harem story. . . . Then I returned to Chaldea and saw that Gudazi was injured. I felt that he appeared because he messed up the original timeline. In addition, Lao Wang said not to use Nexus too much, so his mentality was a bit sick. In addition, I saw in the introduction that there was an original singularity in the back, which should not appear in the same human being. Emmm (This is the only book I have seen so far that clearly explains the reasons for jeep training instead of just making jokes. This one looks really good) This is what I read with a semi-shuangwen mentality. If it's not the case, then just think I didn't say it.

The writing is quite good, a bit refreshing, and the author's control is okay. As of now, I haven't found anything too toxic, so I recommend reading it.

Absolute good luck, the loneliness of being in the cold, teach you to love...

It's beautiful and a rare masterpiece. Although there are a lot of typos, the storyline is eye-catching. Unfortunately, I've already seen the latest chapter. I'll update it quickly and I can't sleep at night! [Please update]

It's pretty and funny.

At least I like this.

I hope book friends will be merciful and if they are dissatisfied, they can communicate instead of just giving it a star or two.

Yes, it's pretty good among foreign persimmons. There are more.