From Templar to Blood Princess

It's okay, I hope the author writes less about the Riddler plot, it looks like Zhongli faked his death

No one gave me 5 stars to encourage me. Just reading the introduction, I thought it was a classic Western Post. The settings of Luo Ling and Wen Di are actually pretty good, but when I actually read it, it was quite different. I saw that half of it was basically all the way through the main plot. This may be the reason why no one was there. It was marked as 100, but in actuality, there was no progress at 400,000 words. The author writes a very immersive world with a novel setting that is (probably) quite brain-burning. I felt a little nervous when I read it. The writing is good and the description of the battles is good. The plot is compact but too compact. For a 100-year-old who is either investigating or fighting in daily life, there is almost no close estimate. There is only one or two chapters left after an incident is completed. I feel that the love line and the main line are 91 points. At present, it is not very suitable for turning into a hundred novels. Although there is very little description of the love line, I can still find out from the lines that the protagonist and Wendy will be a couple. But at this time, the author has written 800,000 words and I don't know if either party has made it clear. It's a bit too slow. I have read several books and the plots are compact and also tend to be of this type, but the main line is correct. According to this progress, I don't know how long it will take for Wendy to know Luo Ling's former identity, but the author can insist on writing more than 80 words, which is considered very good. I hope the author can understand his own problems and shortcomings and write a better book later.

Suggestions are welcome when the new book is released, any reasonable points will be corrected~

Rarely good article. Whether it is the plot, character creation, or the use of writing techniques, it is a rare and good article.

I have a weird feeling. Is it using AI? 🧐

Great book, I'll comment later. I finished listening to the book. It was quite interesting. It can be seen that the author of this book must have spent a lot of energy and also injected some of his own opinions and thoughts. It is better than the mindless and refreshing articles on the market now, and has more connotation than those. It's a pity that in this fast-paced era, everyone pursues online articles that are fast, refreshing, and exciting. With such a slow pace, the market and big data have no choice. Emotionally, I hope that the author will complete the book, but rationally, I believe that the author should cut the book. There are only more than 3,000 readers. It is difficult to imagine that the author has spent so much time, but the returns are not proportional. How can he persevere? Although there are some minor problems when reading, the book is a good book. But capital and the market did not choose it.

There are some Riddlers. Secondly, the protagonist feels that he is not capable enough but always tries to be too strong. Moreover, the protagonist is rather reckless. Let's see if the protagonist will grow in the future.

A good beginning, with a visual impact

Come on, author, it looks good, be sure to keep updating.

The novel is quite good, but I felt it was a bit scary to read alone in the middle of the night. It was like watching a ghost movie [face covering]. It felt like it was all suspenseful and weird.