Pigman: I Traveled Through Time and Became a Little Football Hero

The protagonist talks a bit less and plays less roles. I think more can be added. Of course, I am just making suggestions. Whether or not to change it is the author's decision. In any case, there are very few people writing this kind of book, so it would be good to read some (~￣▽￣)~ To be honest, there are really too few scenes for the protagonist, very pitiful. If the author simply wanted to write the story of Pig Man, then he could not add the character of Lin Xi, and just write about their daily training under Sasuke, etc. To be honest, since you have added such a character in this book, Then you should create this character well and perfectly. Although this is difficult for a new author, you should have thought about it when you created this character. After creating it, you gave him few roles and almost no words or discussions. What is the difference between this book and the original version of Pig Man? What's the difference if this character is added or not?

It's super beautiful. The author must make more chapters! !

Strengthen the protagonist, and think carefully when updating. Don't always think randomly, otherwise, it will lead to poor work. Can you also strengthen the takeout box?