Project Moon: Starting as a Guide to the Human Body

Half a Spider Nest person, the only commentator of the ring finger body sect, Xiao Liangxiu's loli sister, an investor in the research institute, and a real mad woman who was cultivated by the W train. The protagonist's character is a pure urbanite and can be directly inserted into the mirror world as a personality. The interaction with the parents is not OOC, and the plot is progressing steadily. I will say more [Adoration]

Guess you're looking for: "Huh...😮(After seeing Alaya wanting to eat at McDonald's)" "You really have two moments?😄" "Looks like he's not the one who ruined my feelings, huh? 😼" French fries refill＋6🍟 "If you keep holding on like this, the fried chicken will be put in my stomach!😎" McDonald's Single Meal8＋12＋5🍔 Dinner plate capacity 1＋2🍔 ⅠChicken McNugget＋6, fries＋6, spicy chicken wings＋6, spicy chicken drumstick＋6, cheeseburger Convert to McDonald's Big Mac, ketchup explodes 3 times, weight +2, food not to be wasted🪙 "How's it going? Can you still eat it? 😆" McDonald's thick potato＋6🍟 I'll buy you a big one, so don't spoil my mood! 😈 Since I came here just to play with Uncle Lei🍔 You have to be prepared to eat all you can at McDonald's! 😈 [Super tiger spends money to buy randomly] 3+4+4+4+4+4+4+6 Dinner plate capacity 3＋4🍔? It hurts, you are the only one for me. I have no desire except you. Pain, you have been faithfully accompanying me, and you have not changed at all until now. When my soul wanders at the bottom of the abyss. Only you are by my side and protecting me. How can I blame you? Pain, you will never escape from my side. I am finally able to express my respect for you. Now I recognize your existence. And you are so beautiful just by existing in this world. Pain, you are like that person who never leaves the hearth of my poor heart. More passionate than my beloved lover. I know that on the day I die. You will get into the depths of my heart. Lie down next to me.

This is probably the best Tsuki fanfic I've seen recently. It does not follow the main line blindly, it has its own content and does not overwhelm the main theme. Moreover, the cities described by the author can allow readers to feel the twisted but real sense of living people, rather than simple background panels or modern reproductions in some rose articles. The author also handles the background of the article very carefully, controls the urban timeline very accurately, and fills in the blank spaces in the game very reasonably. The author also depicts the characters vividly and with personality, and there is almost no OOC situation. I highly recommend everyone to read it. It feels a bit pity that the author's updates and quality have obviously dropped a lot in the later period, but this is still a good book and I highly recommend reading it [crying]

The cute daily life of Spider Nest, the heroine really has a personality ~ an excellent narrator. The author is also very insightful in his artistic understanding of the Human Body Movement, which is rich in philosophy and emotion. Although there are some minor flaws in some settings, they are innocuous! Rating: A+! ! !

It looks good, and I feel that the author really has a talent for ring fingering, and the protagonist's character is also a born urbanite. But with this direction, I feel that the protagonist will probably face a lot of heavy girls, and they will be arrogant! This is what I want to see!

Objectively speaking, it is much better than the beginning of most monthly books, and there is huge room for improvement, but subjectively speaking, it is too "sharp", not a plot knife, it is still Shiomiya, from the initial doubts, to dissatisfaction to anger, and then to silence in the second plot. This book is very good, but because it is so good, it easily reminds me of the tragedy of the original work [facepalm]. All I can say is that I hope there is no knife behind him, at least it won't be the death of Five-Finger's father again. I think that when the moment finally comes, Yoshihide will practice instead of running away. And Alaya. Finally, Shiomiye... I hope I can have some sweets soon. After all, Shiomiye has been suffering from Xiaojin for half his life. (There are rewards for giving out sweets and eating them🤓👆, and there are punishments for eating them with knives😡) After making a bold prediction, he was seriously injured later (actually it was not a big deal). Shiomiya saw that his only hope was almost gone, and he was completely desperate. Then I was thanked for further pua (bushi). Of course it is not like this and it doesn't matter. We are already mature readers and can write our own knives for the author to eat [please update]

A+! The subject matter is novel and more everyday, and overall it is quite humorous, and the corners of your mouth can't help but curl up as you watch it. The writing is good, especially in the transition scenes. There are no redundant words, and the scene changes smoothly as you watch. The plot does not follow the original plot, it is much better than some YJ books It's very attractive. After reading it, I thought about the inner cover. I finished it in less than one afternoon. If you continue to write like this, if nothing else happens, it will be at least the best work in the Yueji area. More people will spread it, pass the art exam smoothly, and even become a "master".

Great... Really great. (Wiping tears) Please forgive me for being rude, these works shine like urban stars, lest they end. I'm so touched... (Covering eyes) Oh no, I'm really sorry. The emotion in your works can even revive dead trees. Even a back alley rat who doesn't understand art will be moved by it. (Crying) The evaluation is A+, and it deserves to be A+.

A+! Absolutely A+! The interactions between the characters are not OOC at all, and the hooks are just right. Many of the plots that are not stated clearly in Yueji are also written very coherently. Although it can be seen that there are a few places where the lines are deliberately altered, it does not prevent this from being a super good book. The tightness of the content is also successfully grasped. It is sweet when it is daily and when it is narrative. The narrative is time-consuming, and I neither feel tired nor boring. At least I am deeply attracted by the plot hook (ps: I have been looking forward to the interaction between Yoshihide and the protagonist during the LCB period). It is very good, without any poisonous points, and the behavior of the protagonist is not a deus ex machina. It completely conveys the urban flavor. Author, I love your mouth! !

It's very beautiful. From the perspective of Spider Nest, it cuts into the plot of Lobotomy Company very well. Moreover, the protagonist himself is a ring artist, not a time traveler. He has his own pursuit - to revive the body school, which also gives the characters a very reasonable motive for participating in Lobotomy Company.