Monthly Plan: Start with the Human Body School Explainer

Half a Spider Nest person, the only commentator of the ring finger body sect, Xiao Liangxiu's loli sister, an investor in the research institute, and a real mad woman who was cultivated by the W train. The protagonist's character is a pure urbanite and can be directly inserted into the mirror world as a personality. The interaction with the parents is not OOC, and the plot is progressing steadily. I will say more [Adoration]

Guess you're looking for: "Huh...😮(After seeing Alaya wanting to eat at McDonald's)" "You really have two moments?😄" "Looks like he's not the one who ruined my feelings, huh? 😼" French fries refill＋6🍟 "If you keep holding on like this, the fried chicken will be put in my stomach!😎" McDonald's Single Meal8＋12＋5🍔 Dinner plate capacity 1＋2🍔 ⅠChicken McNugget＋6, fries＋6, spicy chicken wings＋6, spicy chicken drumstick＋6, cheeseburger Convert to McDonald's Big Mac, ketchup explodes 3 times, weight +2, food not to be wasted🪙 "How's it going? Can you still eat it? 😆" McDonald's thick potato＋6🍟 I'll buy you a big one, so don't spoil my mood! 😈 Since I came here just to play with Uncle Lei🍔 You have to be prepared to eat all you can at McDonald's! 😈 [Super tiger spends money to buy randomly] 3+4+4+4+4+4+4+6 Dinner plate capacity 3＋4🍔? It hurts, you are the only one for me. I have no desire except you. Pain, you have been faithfully accompanying me, and you have not changed at all until now. When my soul wanders at the bottom of the abyss. Only you are by my side and protecting me. How can I blame you? Pain, you will never escape from my side. I am finally able to express my respect for you. Now I recognize your existence. And you are so beautiful just by existing in this world. Pain, you are like that person who never leaves the hearth of my poor heart. More passionate than my beloved lover. I know that on the day I die. You will get into the depths of my heart. Lie down next to me.

This is probably the best Tsuki fanfic I've seen recently. It does not follow the main line blindly, it has its own content and does not overwhelm the main theme. Moreover, the cities described by the author can allow readers to feel the twisted but real sense of living people in person, rather than simple background panels or modern reproductions in some rose articles. The author also handles the background of the article very carefully, controls the urban timeline very accurately, and fills in the blank spaces in the game very reasonably. The author also depicts the characters vividly and with personality, and there is almost no OOC situation. I highly recommend everyone to read it.

The cute daily life of Spider Nest, the heroine really has a personality ~ an excellent narrator. The author is also very insightful in his artistic understanding of the Human Body Movement, which is rich in philosophy and emotion. Although there are some minor flaws in some settings, they are innocuous! Rating: A+! ! !

It looks good, and I feel that the author really has a talent for ring fingering, and the protagonist's character is also a born urbanite. But with this direction, I feel that the protagonist will probably face a lot of heavy girls, and they will be arrogant! This is what I want to see!

Objectively speaking, it is much better than the beginning of most monthly books, and there is huge room for improvement, but subjectively speaking, it is too "sharp", not a plot knife, it is still Shiomiya, from the initial doubts, to dissatisfaction to anger, and then to silence in the second plot. This book is very good, but because it is so good, it easily reminds me of the tragedy of the original work [facepalm]. All I can say is that I hope there is no knife behind him, at least it won't be the death of Five-Finger's father again. I think that when the moment finally comes, Yoshihide will practice instead of running away. And Alaya. Finally, Shiomiye... I hope I can have some sweets soon. After all, Shiomiye has been suffering from Xiaojin for half his life. (There are rewards for giving out sweets and eating them🤓👆, and there are punishments for eating them with knives😡) After making a bold prediction, he was seriously injured later (actually it was not a big deal). Shiomiya saw that his only hope was almost gone, and he was completely desperate. Then I was thanked for further pua (bushi). Of course it is not like this and it doesn't matter. We are already mature readers and can write our own knives for the author to eat [please update]

A+! The subject matter is novel and more everyday, and overall it is quite humorous, and the corners of your mouth can't help but curl up as you watch it. The writing is good, especially in the transition scenes. There are no redundant words, and the scene changes smoothly as you watch. The plot does not follow the original plot, it is much better than some YJ books It's very attractive. After reading it, I thought about the inner cover. I finished it in less than one afternoon. If you continue to write like this, if nothing else happens, it will be at least the best work in the Yueji area. More people will spread it, pass the art exam smoothly, and even become a "master".

Great... Really great. (Wiping tears) Please forgive me for being rude, these works shine like urban stars, lest they end. I'm so touched... (Covering eyes) Oh no, I'm really sorry. The emotion in your works can even revive dead trees. Even a back alley rat who doesn't understand art will be moved by it. (Crying) The evaluation is A+, and it deserves to be A+.

A very excellent work, with excellent content description and considerable attainments in art. In time, it will definitely become a masterpiece among Yueji fans. But beautiful jade still needs to be carved, so, A-. A+, needless to say.

A+! Absolutely A+! The interactions between the characters are not OOC at all, and the hooks are just right. Many of the plots that are not stated clearly in Yueji are also written very coherently. Although it can be seen that there are a few places where the lines are deliberately altered, it does not prevent this from being a super good book. The tightness of the content is also successfully grasped. It is sweet when it is daily and when it is narrative. The narrative is time-consuming, and I neither feel tired nor boring. At least I am deeply attracted by the plot hook (ps: I have been looking forward to the interaction between Yoshihide and the protagonist during the LCB period). It is very good, without any poisonous points, and the behavior of the protagonist is not a deus ex machina. It completely conveys the urban flavor. Author, I love your mouth! !

It's very beautiful. From the perspective of Spider Nest, it cuts into the plot of Lobotomy Company very well. Moreover, the protagonist himself is a ring artist, not a time traveler. He has his own pursuit - to revive the body school, which also gives the characters a very reasonable motive for participating in Lobotomy Company.

This book introduces you to outsiders from the Spider Nest, commentators on the ring, and angel investors who joined the research institute. Senior executives (most likely future ministers) dismantled half of their own bodies to make their first life-long work, Helentina (made from their own body and flesh). The blade seems to have a self), causing him to become a body artist with the height of a child (the body is also art). Even if he spends 500 billion years in the W train, he is in a good mental state, kills Carmen with his own hands, likes to take pictures with a camera, and has a gentle personality? Xie Fulina, who is casual (and sinister) and cares about the other five elderly people in the empty nest and Xiao Liangxiu (will Liangxiu be turned into a third work in the future?)

You are the one with the most unique experience among the fans I have read. However, there are still some shortcomings in the aspect of look and feel. The processing of the timeline has not been announced. A clear time point can accommodate some problems; and regarding the explanation of characters, readers you know may not all know the moon plan. If you want more people to read your work, you can make some explanations of the identity of the character under reasonable conditions, and supplement the relevant settings, such as adding a little xxxxx at the end of each chapter. What is it? Create some suspense about the setting and so on. The protagonist's wrapping paper is a good suspense In addition, there is no need to completely follow the original settings about the characters, but don't go too far. After all, people will change, right? But don't put the cart before the horse. There is a cause and an effect. Don't do something for the sake of it. Many authors have committed this problem. Finally (actually there are a few more, but I am too lazy to write them), my suggestions are just for reference, but I hope the author can see me, and you A+🥰

I wanted to save a day and read a little bit, but I unconsciously scrolled to the last one... So I decided to review it! Let me start by saying that I think this book is very well written! There are some interesting plots that fit the main line without being too OOC, as well as the author's own thinking and adaptation of the settings. I am looking forward to the next plot. It is very strange to see Xie Fulina unknowingly participating in the interweaving of other story lines. There are also many and frequent updates, and each chapter is of good quality and not too laggy. I was attracted by the current cover. In fact, I had a strange mentality at first to try whether it was history or gold, but it was obvious that the author moved me with the content of this fanfic and his own notes. Come on, author In addition, I feel that Xie Fulina is so cute, and the warmth of the interaction with other characters in the plot is vaguely revealed. Under the sad plot of the original work, I really look forward to Xie Fulina's choice and the changes of other characters.

Hands down, A+! Body pie is a timeless mouthpiece! Great flavor, no need for too much salt! Xie Fulinna's character of white and gray and black is really delicious. How can Ring Ring be a normal person?) It's been a long time since I read a novel that suits my taste. Although my father's generation is still the same, there have been many changes in subtleties, but I think the final direction will not change much. Yoshihide will eventually leave the Spider Nest. What would Yoshihide think if he discovered Xie Fulina's true thoughts by then? Will Yan Jianye survive? Yes, she will. After all, I really hope that Lao Yan will have a good ending and that she can be free. And Brother Baozi, will he make a guest appearance in the future? If there is, it will probably be after the Kong family incident. After seeing such a scene, maybe you will have a deeper understanding of art.) Will Liangxiu still get on the bus in the future? It's hard to imagine what it would be like to get in the car and stare at Honglu with big eyes (but I think I will forget everything, but at least Brother Baozi still remembers it) Will Lobe choose to join the company? Actually, I don't really want to become a box spirit (although you are a box spirit in a certain sense). The main reason is that you have seen a lot of Lobobrain plots while working in a company. Will you meet Albina later? The two of them should be able to chat easily. With Sevrina on the other side of the thumb, Lucio should be able to live a little easier (at least it will be better than the main world. Right) And in the end, will Xie Fulina choose to change her body? At 9 years old, I am still too short. I seem to have been persecuted many times for this reason :)

The daily life and plot are both advanced. Although it is a bit slow, it is more exciting and benefits mankind at 6 o'clock every day, so four stars. Why do I give five stars? Of course, it's because there are so many original interactions. I personally think that the most precious thing about fan fiction is the author's innovation, which is the author's unique EGO. The richer the EGO, the more it can become an excellent work of art, so today's latest chapter is rated A. If you want to work hard A+ first, update 4 while ensuring quality [please update]

It's really good. The story is original and interesting, and the perspective is also very good. I hope the author will keep writing and write faster [angry] [angry] [angry]

The main characters are well portrayed. Although it is a bit crazy, it is still within the acceptable range. But later on, I don't know why it gives people the feeling of a landmine girl, and it feels like a big mine will explode at a certain moment. Personally, I think it probably started when Yoshihide and Baoyu saw them processing materials late at night. But overall, this book ranks in the top 3 among the many 084 fanfics I have read. I hope the author will write better and better.

A+! It is one of the few fan fictions that almost perfectly integrates the protagonist into the original story. My favorite among them is the description of the relationship between the protagonist and Shiomiya and Yoshihide, which has a delicate feeling. The subsequent plot between the protagonist and the descendants of Spider Nest is also exciting. I hope that the protagonist will not stay away from the spider nest for too long during the lobe period. I am a little tired of watching the fifty days, and I still want to see more plots related to the spider nest.

A+ Absolute A+ When I have read almost 5500 hours of history, this work has firmly captured my spirit with a charm that is more dazzling than the city stars and more brilliant than the colors. Your work stands out among many monthly fans. Maybe other creators should also look at this scenery to get inspiration.

You! A+! Your rating is A+! I never expected that you can see such an otherworldly masterpiece outside the city. It is interesting and artistic at the same time. The novel plot and unique text complement each other. Combined with the singularity of L Company, the artistic value of this work has been raised to a higher level. This work has been collected by the ring master. I hope you will continue to work hard and create greater works!

It's very good-looking, super good-looking. I hope the author will write more. I rarely read articles with such a small number of words, but after all, it is a niche subject, and it is a rare AI-free article on Tomato. While the author maintains the quality, it would be better if he writes more::ೖ(⑅σ̑ᴗσ̑)ೖ::

When I first read this book, I wanted to give it five stars, but I always felt betrayed, so I didn't dare to give it five stars. But now that this book has been rated, I will give it five stars as a little bonus to celebrate. (Actually, when I wrote this comment, my heart kept crying, and it gave me a feeling of eternal doom. I'm sorry, I have fallen in love with another Prison Bus fan. What can I say about this book? It's relaxed, happy, sunny and uplifting. It's originally a daily entertainment book, and it's very enjoyable to read.

Delicious rice ✧⁺⸜(●˙▾˙●)⸝⁺✧, my parents wrote so cute QAQ, but when I think of all of them having to be borrowed by Sister Liang, I feel so pity awa, I want to see Xiao Xie lead the spider nest to a harmonious and friendly family, but I think this is impossible ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅

! ? Sorry, I'm rude (wipes eyes with handkerchief). This is so impactful. I feel like I resonate with the moment you created it, as if I have become the paint that makes up this wonderful paradise. You are swaying it freely, writing freely, and concealing the mystery. Me, I haven't been touched like this for a long time. It's such a blessing. A+, no doubt A+, I am looking forward to your unique master lecture.

This is a very satisfying book. I really want to see Xie Fulina come to the mirror world and see Wuliangye.

Very good. Starting the second creation from the Spider Nest is very novel, bold and feasible (there is a huge blank period to write). There is no OOC among the five parents, and the interaction between the parents is also good. It seems very comfortable so far, and there is no mention of the protagonist being unparalleled in the city. I hope the author can persevere and write the ending [Like] It won't look good if we start to cobble together the main plot. Is it still impossible to escape the cycle of second creation in the monthly plan?

No one can match your art. Even the ring masters can't help but be moved to tears when they see your works! Such an otherworldly masterpiece, even compared with the collection of books in the Ten Associations, will be an extremely wonderful masterpiece. This work has been collected by the ring master. I hope you will continue to work hard and create greater works! [Like][Like]

Fast forward to Thaw·Daughter's Representative Rean AAA roll wholesaler Laowa Loyalty, righteousness and hope for both worlds are an adult. "Renaissance of Humanities and Arts" [Smile] Master Card Full of hope... Still alive [laughing evilly] Haki Salt I really want to know how to fight the boss at the back?

The evaluation given by Ring Zhi is... A+! Your... Your works are simply a new life in the city. I am extremely shocked by this kind of work and feel that I am worthy of the name of Ring Zhi. This kind of creation of yours is undoubtedly a star in the city!