Great Tang: I Reveal My Identity from the Start

The protagonist of a modern high school boy who traveled to the early Tang Dynasty is lively and innocent, but too "lively" and unscrupulous. He is a modern kid king. Moreover, the historical knowledge he knows is relatively "general". Official history, unofficial history, fake history, and game history are all told to the ancients. He knows a little bit about everything. He is worthy of being a modern boy who pays tuition and fees. (So ​​this book might be more suitable for the protagonist's modern peers?) 😂

The only drawback is that most people after the modern college entrance examination are adults! Must be over 18 years old! In ancient times, it was even more impossible to be a child.

Hello, I would like to give you five points first. I have read Chapter 15 so far and would like to give you some personal suggestions, just for reference. Mainly about the protagonist's words and deeds. I understand that modern people talk about equality, but the story is set in 2026. When the protagonist faces his superiors and leaders, can he be a little more restrained and less childish in his words and deeds? This will be more realistic and less likely to upset readers. You can use some plots and inner monologues later to slowly show the protagonist's mental journey from immaturity to maturity, so that the character's growth line will be clearer. Also, I personally found the beginning to be a little less engaging. The background setting of the early years of Zhenguan and the age of the protagonist are already very good selling points, but the protagonist's words are a bit insignificant from the beginning, which may dissuade some readers. Therefore, I sincerely recommend that you explain it in advance in the introduction: the protagonist will appear immature in the early stage, but will gradually grow in the later stage. This is a deliberate arrangement. Let readers be mentally prepared before starting to read, and their acceptance will be much higher. In fact, the contrast and growth from childishness to maturity and stability, and doing things in an orderly manner are also a different kind of fun. If you can write it down, it will be a big bonus. The above are just some personal opinions. Whether you accept it or not is up to you. I hope the writing will get better and better.

It's not bad. It's a light-hearted and pleasant picture. After all, this is not a main character who just works for Li Shimin even if he is exposed. Then technology advances by leaps and bounds, and gunpowder and cannons come out at the mouth. Then the classic time-travel routines, rich people make money in glass pits, perfume makes women money, and then they have to lead troops to fight, three-step time travel, and the unsystematic time-travel novel is written like an assembly line The tone is basically relaxed and pleasant, and the officialdom games are basically summarized in one or two chapters. After all, the level of wits depends on the author's level. Some authors really can't understand officialdom and family ingenuity and have several chapters. However, the main character's mental and age issues are indeed written very casually. It is said that he has experienced the hardships of his original family before time traveling and is still an adult who has completed the college entrance examination. However, after time traveling, except for the desolate time when he went to Prince Qin's Mansion at the beginning, he really turned into a child and played carelessly. He bickered with Li Shimin and the second generation on a daily basis, and occasionally thought of developing new things. It was quite routine. As for the first few chapters, it was basically fun to read and purely set.

When autumn comes, on the eighth day of the ninth month, hundreds of flowers will bloom. Chang'an will be filled with incense, and the city will be covered with golden armor, copper, iron, and steel. I once hid at the foot of Mount Sumeru. I don't need to practice backwards on the top of Yin and Yang. How can I not have water and fire to temper the edge, kill immortals with power, kill immortals, trap immortals with red light everywhere, the transformation of the ultimate immortal is infinite, and the blood of the great Luo Jinxian is stained.

First comment. You are too slow to update twice a day. I couldn't see your posts, so I looked for books by other authors. I was afraid that I would fall in love with other authors. It's not too tiring for an author to update a hundred times a day, right?

I have read quite a few novels about traveling through the Tang Dynasty, and I was not attracted to it until I read the book. It must be a good book. Recommend

It is well written. It contains young people who are confident and lively. It also reflects the personalities and ways of modern people and ancient people. It also clearly defines each person's vivid personality and temperament, and they also know how to respect and awe, unlike some books. He keeps boasting that he is the best, looking down on this and that. The whole book shows that he is unscrupulous and has no scruples. Come on, I think highly of you, and I hope the author will get better and better in the future.

Good-looking, her beauty finally matches her age

Too little, not enough