Crayon Shin-Chan: the Eldest Brother of the Nohara Family

It's very good. The author's writing is very interesting, the characters are very vivid, and he is also very good at blending the plot without affecting the perception. It can be said that the level is very high. However, I still want to suggest that the author try not to write about the relationship between the male and female protagonists. I still want to read about ordinary daily life, and I can also point out the "lazy life" in the title of your book. If you really want to add a female protagonist, you should try to maintain the current standard without disturbing the current Nohara family. Don't really become an adult and go out to be independent. Here I suggest that you try to add a female protagonist to the current level without disturbing the Nohara family. We don't want a heroine with too many big protagonists (child body). Just have a heroine who is about the same body type/age, like Doppema and Matatami in the theater version. Then a vow to be together when we grow up is enough. I don't really want it to turn into a romance novel. Finally, just write about growing up together near the end. Of course, the above is my opinion. It depends on how the author arranges the plot. Things changed later on. The proportion of the protagonist's "superpowers" involved in daily life was too large. For example, in the part where he was followed by Satoru, the protagonist seemed to have entered an abnormal copy and directly tried to hit people. He was almost shaping into a reckless man. There are many such scenes. It's not that he's not a good family man, but it's just too much stress to get along with him normally. Not only is he too "godly", he's also annoying to watch.

Not bad, everyday style. I just want to ask, is Xiao Ai the heroine? [Shy]

It seems good so far. The author forgot about the system in the first ten chapters. It was clear that time passed but he didn't sign in. He only signed in when the system appeared for the first time, but then he remembered it again, and most of the things he signed in were quite useful. In terms of plot, I think the protagonist's role is sometimes more and sometimes less. When there are few roles, the role of the protagonist may be to watch Xiaoxin or complain. When there are more roles, he just revolves around him. Overall, it looks okay. It's a good fan. I can only say that this is a common problem when writing fan fiction. I have read about 300 chapters so far. It was interesting to read at the beginning, but as you read more and get deeper into the plot, you will find that the changes in the plot are getting smaller and smaller. If you look at the original work, I think it's normal to set the protagonist to be twins with Xiaoxin and have exactly the same appearance. We should design a model with a completely different appearance from Xiaoxin, so that the sense of substitution will be stronger. It's hard to imagine someone who looks like Xiaoxin but is not his person doing other things.

The daily changes are very good, but some parts of the theatrical version are not very well written. The power of Kamen Rider and magic is used too much. Even if it strengthens the villain, it still affects the perception. Just like the Adult Empire, I feel like it was written really well without using the power of Kamen Rider! There is no need to use it in most subsequent theatrical versions. Of course, I'm not saying that I hate Kamen Rider or magic. I'm still looking forward to the follow-up performance of King ZZZ in the dream world. It's a professional counterpart. Come on, author!

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So far, this is the best Crayon Shin-chan fanfic I have ever read. It is a Crayon Shin-chan fan with a world view. It tests the author's understanding of Crayon Shin-chan's style. I have read some Crayon Shin-chan fanfics written by other authors, and it is difficult to grasp a balance. Either the jokes go too far or some plug-ins are added that are not suitable for inclusion in Crayon Shin-chan, which makes it look nondescript. However, this book has a good grasp and makes people feel comfortable to read. I hope the author can continue to work hard and write at least a few million words [laughing]

The writing is very good, and it is considered Crayon Shin-chan's best work. Everyday life is very interesting, and most of the time the protagonist is like a child, unlike others who are still children and have to pursue a career or something. Moreover, the author is so capable, updating four or five times a day, updating thousands of words every day [Love]

It feels pretty good. I don't get tired of watching it in my daily life. As I watch it, I see the latest version. When I encounter the theatrical version, I quickly read the theatrical version [face covering]. Overall, I used my abilities to protect a family in trouble. I feel pretty good. I properly educated those who made mistakes and stopped them.

Recommended. The role of the teacher is well created. Generally speaking, it is not too OOC. The protagonist is very interesting. The update speed of the teacher is also quite acceptable. Yuya is also growing up in different ways. The interaction between the characters is humorous and not lacking in warmth. The Nohara family is very There is love, and there is also a sweet relationship between Mr. Matsusaka and Dr. Delang. It warms the heart of those who read it. The daily writing is also very unique, and the theatrical version is also very well written. There are not many Crayon Shin-chan fan stories on Tomato, but it is not an exaggeration to say that this novel is one of a million. All in all, this novel is well worth reading.

It's one of the top three among Crayon Shin-chan. It's all about romance, it's funny, and the characters are all very well coordinated. It's not completely overshadowed by them. It's not like those other books, although they have high ratings, but they're basically good at writing. Otherwise, it would be beautiful. Hiroshi's brother's love story. Although this book has some references, it's completely written. Show your own style, comfortable, leisurely, funny and understanding of your parents. It prevents Xiaoxin from doing bad things. It is not completely laissez-faire like other books. I usually just give 5 stars to good books without commenting, but I think this book is a masterpiece among Crayon Shin-chan. I want more people to read it. I wish the author will write better and better.

It's good-looking, really good-looking. The content inside is very funny. Sometimes I laugh so much that I can't breathe. At least that's what I think the people are the same. The plot is rather awkward. Without it, it's a bit duller, but it's also more pure. It brought me some happiness, so I like it so far. Of course, I have only read more than ten chapters, and I don't know what the content will be next. Anyway, I am really satisfied now. Keep up the hard work, author, and I will always pay attention to you [laugh][laugh][laugh]

Come on, it's well written. It's already considered a very good work among Crayon Shin-chan fans. It would be better if you could write about the theatrical version in detail. I've read a lot of novels, but few can write about the theatrical version in detail. But no matter what, come on, don't give up!

The writing is really good. It not only retains Xiaoxin's innocence, kindness and humor, but also controls Xiaoxin's bad habits very well, without interfering too much with his growth. The protagonist is a qualified brother. After all, Xiaoxin's plot sometimes really gets people excited, especially when he is teasing Nini's mother. In this aspect, the protagonist does a particularly good job.

It can be regarded as the Crayon Shin-chan fan novel that I have read that best suits my taste. Others either have the main character occupying too much space and it is almost impossible to see Shin-chan and his family, or they are like an assembly line, or they start talking about that pjb relationship again. What can I say about this novel? It's just like the protagonist's own thoughts, integrating into the peaceful life of this family. Although there are a lot of cheats, it makes me want to see some linkages or something. In other words, the theatrical version was processed too quickly and was a bit watery, but in daily life, I think it's very good, and it doesn't feel toxic to me personally.

This book is really good. Whether the characters are not OOC at all, or the plot is very reasonable and integrated into it. If I were asked to find faults, I can say a lot about those books, but this one is different. This one is really good. Because I don't know how to write good reviews, so I racked my brains to write this little word. Please forgive me.

It's very good. It integrates the theme we want. The protagonist is naughty but not the adult effect we want. It is original and very good. The most important thing is that even with this change, I feel that it still fits the theme of Yiibi Xiaoxin.

Very good, very good. Although the main direction is to follow the original work, Crayon Shin-chan is interesting in the original work, and adding the protagonist does not violate the harmony. It is just a failure to make it bigger, because it seems to have no use, anyway, he can become a Kamen Rider. Don't underestimate the five-year-old children in Crayon Shin-chan [Angry] Overall, they are very beautiful [Like] [Like] [Like]

It looks good. Please don't stop updating. After all, there are too many fan fictions that have stopped updating due to the drop in traffic. I will update slowly bit by bit. As long as I keep updating, there won't be much of a problem. I hope I can stick to it. ૮₍◜ෆ◝.₎ა …A few more reasons to add - 1. The plot is a bit bland, which does not mean that the plot is not written in place, but that it is briefly mentioned as soon as it reaches a certain key point. Sometimes the protagonist's inaction and unreasonable places are too straightforward to explain, and the writing style also has a bit of a white text, which is actually unnecessary. There are so many awkward things, maybe it would be better to write the protagonist to be more integrated into this world, instead of waiting for the plot to resolve any conflicts; 2. Around Chapter 190, before Xiaokui was born, the protagonist directly said his name. I remember that it was clearly determined by throwing a paper airplane, right? And the home field of some theatrical versions should be Xiaoxin, right? Even if you want to highlight the differences between the protagonists, you can let the protagonists and Xiaoxin play together. Why do you have to engage in such a scene-stealing plot? After about 200 chapters, I can't stand it anymore. In summary - it's too embarrassing.

A very nice Crayon Shin-chan fanfic, and the daily aspects are well written. The movie version will include content about Kamen Rider's transformation. Since I haven't watched Kamen Rider, I can't really get the fun of it. So I still like to watch daily plots. I will watch more and more.

[This book has also been rated. I would like to shamelessly ask you to give it five stars, and I will thank you with 10,000 words tomorrow.] This is what the author said. If you insist, just give it five stars. After all, I enjoyed watching it [Eating Melon]. The characters are not broken so far, and they are pretty good... It's just that the writing is a bit slow and the writing is a bit sparse. How about you update ten chapters tomorrow [laughing]

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This is one of the better Crayon Shin-chan fics I've read. It's relatively relaxed for daily use, but also has a bit of combat power. It's more in line with my taste. If it's just for daily use, I think it would be a bit bland.

Yes, there are no major changes to the original plot, and there are no personality changes to the characters in the original plot. It is still as interesting as ever. The protagonist also enjoys it and lives a good life. That's enough.

Nice looking, love watching Of course it would be better if there were more scenes with Xiao Ai [blowing kiss]

It's good. I want to see Xiao Ai and Nana Zi. Please update it soon.

Come on author, it's the first time I've seen someone who can blend in and talk to Xiaoxin and say funny things together. It feels like they are really a family, not like in other books where they can't blend in at all. Not only is the content good, but there are also many updates. It's amazing.

A good Crayon Shin-chan fanfic

It's very life-like, and the protagonist can be funny and serious at times, which is great. I feel like the protagonist was a sultry type in his previous life^⎚˕⎚^

The plot line is well written. I hope the author comes back and beats that woman up in the Ninja Movie version. I find that woman very distasteful

I just watched a little bit. The plot is surprisingly good and interesting. The system does not have many roles, and the rewards given will be naturally integrated into the plot and become something similar to the setting. For example, a character wearing glasses is actually an assassin who can play darts. The protagonist is similar to the Nohara family who has a lazy but lucky and very strong child. I think it's very interesting and I highly recommend this book.