A Lazy Life in Crayon Shin-chan's World

It's very good. The author's writing is very interesting, the characters are very vivid, and he is also very good at blending the plot without affecting the perception. It can be said that the level is very high. However, I still want to suggest that the author try not to write about the relationship between the male and female protagonists. I still want to read about ordinary daily life, and I can also point out the "lazy life" in the title of your book. If you really want to add a female protagonist, you should try to maintain the current standard without disturbing the current Nohara family. Don't really become an adult and go out to be independent. Here I suggest that you try to add a female protagonist to the current level without disturbing the Nohara family. We don't want a heroine with too many big protagonists (child body). Just have a heroine who is about the same body type/age, like Doppema and Matatami in the theater version. Then a vow to be together when we grow up is enough. I don't really want it to turn into a romance novel. Finally, just write about growing up together near the end. Of course, the above is my opinion. It depends on how the author arranges the plot. Things changed later on. The proportion of the protagonist's "superpowers" involved in daily life was too large. For example, in the part where he was followed by Satoru, the protagonist seemed to have entered an abnormal copy and directly tried to hit people. He was almost shaping into a reckless man. There are many such scenes. It's not that he's not a good family man, but it's just too much stress to get along with him normally. Not only is he too "godly", he's also annoying to watch.

The daily changes are very good, but some parts of the theatrical version are not very well written. The power of Kamen Rider and magic is used too much. Even if it strengthens the villain, it still affects the perception. Just like the Adult Empire, I feel like it was written really well without using the power of Kamen Rider! There is no need to use it in most subsequent theatrical versions. Of course, I'm not saying that I hate Kamen Rider or magic. I'm still looking forward to the follow-up performance of King ZZZ in the dream world. It's a professional counterpart. Come on, author!

Not bad, everyday style. I just want to ask, is Xiao Ai the heroine? [Shy]

It seems good so far. The author forgot about the system in the first ten chapters. It was clear that time passed but he didn't sign in. He only signed in when the system appeared for the first time, but then he remembered it again, and most of the things he signed in were quite useful. In terms of plot, I think the protagonist's role is sometimes more and sometimes less. When there are few roles, the role of the protagonist may be to watch Xiaoxin or complain. When there are more roles, he just revolves around him. Overall, it looks okay. It's a good fan. I can only say that this is a common problem when writing fan fiction. I have read about 300 chapters so far. It was interesting to read at the beginning, but as you read more and get deeper into the plot, you will find that the changes in the plot are getting smaller and smaller. If you look at the original work, I think it's normal to set the protagonist to be twins with Xiaoxin and have exactly the same appearance. We should design a model with a completely different appearance from Xiaoxin, so that the sense of substitution will be stronger. It's hard to imagine someone who looks like Xiaoxin but is not his person doing other things.

It's very interesting, and it's the best Crayon Shin-chan fanfic among the Tomato novels. I have read several books before, but they have all been discontinued, and this is the only one left. But it feels a little too dependent on the original plot. I think it would look better with a little innovation. But overall, the plot and characters fit the original work, the atmosphere is full, the writing is smooth and natural, the imagination is interesting, the details are well drawn, and the reading feels very immersive. The characters are vivid and not OOC, and the story rhythm is comfortable. The more you read, the more you get hooked.

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It feels pretty good. I don't get tired of watching it in my daily life. As I watch it, I see the latest version. When I encounter the theatrical version, I quickly read the theatrical version [face covering]. Overall, I used my abilities to protect a family in trouble. I feel pretty good. I properly educated those who made mistakes and stopped them.

The writing is very good, and it is considered Crayon Shin-chan's best work. Everyday life is very interesting, and most of the time the protagonist is like a child, unlike others who are still children and have to pursue a career or something. Moreover, the author is so capable, updating four or five times a day, updating thousands of words every day [Love]

So far, this is the best Crayon Shin-chan fanfic I have ever read. It is a Crayon Shin-chan fan with a world view. It tests the author's understanding of Crayon Shin-chan's style. I have read some Crayon Shin-chan fanfics written by other authors, and it is difficult to grasp a balance. Either the jokes go too far or some plug-ins are added that are not suitable for inclusion in Crayon Shin-chan, which makes it look nondescript. However, this book has a good grasp and makes people feel comfortable to read. I hope the author can continue to work hard and write at least a few million words [laughing]

Recommended. The role of the teacher is well created. Generally speaking, it is not too OOC. The protagonist is very interesting. The update speed of the teacher is also quite acceptable. Yuya is also growing up in different ways. The interaction between the characters is humorous and not lacking in warmth. The Nohara family is very There is love, and there is also a sweet relationship between Mr. Matsusaka and Dr. Delang. It warms the heart of those who read it. The daily writing is also very unique, and the theatrical version is also very well written. There are not many Crayon Shin-chan fan stories on Tomato, but it is not an exaggeration to say that this novel is one of a million. All in all, this novel is well worth reading.