Shen Du, a graduate student in the Department of Architecture, became the daughter of a criminal. She couldn't bear the unreasonable drainage in the leaky exile camp. Starting from digging trenches, she used a construction drawing that transcended the times to turn the ruins into a place of residence, and was also involved in the whirlpool at the heart of the dynasty. Yellow River flood control, new city planning, the crisis of the imperial mausoleum... She used rulers and drawings to fight against the decayed rules, and walked from prison to the emperor, making the entire court look at her with suspicion. And what she wanted was never rehabilitation or wealth, she just wanted to build the better world in her drawings on this ancient land.
Reader comments
The setting is very novel, but the narrative is too prose. In my opinion, many of the descriptions are inappropriate for the subject matter of a novel. The dialogue between the characters just keeps talking about who is who, which makes me feel uncomfortable and flat. But the setting is really novel, and the author's portrayal of the heroine's abilities is beyond praise. She is really capable, and I hope it will get better and better.
It's such a happy and down-to-earth article. It's a bit inappropriate to say happiness. After all, the heroine is open to the outside world, but after reading a few chapters, everyone's heart is uplifting and very positive. In the past, when I read infrastructure novels, I wished that the main character would make rapid progress and be recognized immediately. But here is the feeling of a trickle of spring. It is particularly powerful. The author's writing skills are very good, the rhythm of the writing is very comfortable, and the title of the novel is very tomato. However, the quality of the work is far beyond the local level. It has the reading feeling of a serious novel, not impatient or impatient, and is super praised! I rarely write book reviews, and this is the first time I've read a few chapters before typing! I don't know why the more I watch it, the more excited I am. I also want to swing my hoe twice. I have already recommended it to my friends!
There is no bullying of men and women, plundering, burning, killing or looting. I was originally worried that the heroine would encounter some bullies, but it was just a light haha, but the description of the disaster was too vivid and deeply felt, a bit uncomfortable and tiring.
The various metaphors are well written, but the same writing method is repeated repeatedly, which makes the senses tired and makes you feel like you are driving on the Shandong Expressway. There is no obvious climax and ups and downs throughout the story. It will indeed be dull when you read the later part. The heroine grows up and has more and more items in her arms, but the author does not need to emphasize it every time. It is a bit like a reward for completing the game haha.
Recommend. There is no system, no superpowers. Just be down-to-earth, do things, solve problems, and live. Very down to earth. Like. The heroine is professional.
It's like the style of excerpted prose in Chinese textbooks, long paragraphs. Fortunately, the whole text is not long. The tone of the full text is described as bitter, which is very appropriate. There is a little sweetness in the bitterness, not the sweetness of sugar water, but the sweetness of life illuminated by hope. Finally, I feel that the heroine is pure and pure. When she is not fixing things, she is on the way to fix them.
The plot is interesting, there are no cheats, it relies on its own ability, and the male protagonist does not appear to be in love in dozens of chapters, so I have the desire to read on. , There are not many similar books. But there is a small discovery. The author likes to use a sentence pattern: This thing is so and so, but it is not. . . The kind of how, but. . . How about. There are often two sentences of this kind of description in a paragraph, and perhaps more sentence changes can be used to describe it.
The content is still good, a little twisty and too narrative, but there are quite a lot of scientific things and I can keep reading.
So far, it gives me a light and hopeful feeling. Every bit of it feels very ordinary, but every step seems to have been planned. I can't wait to see what happens next.
The simple and warm words depict the strong feelings of family and country. The heroine with professional knowledge helps others and herself, never forgets her original intention, and always insists on using what she has learned to build roads and canals to help the world and bring peace to the people.
In just 200,000 words, it brings a lot of warmth and touch.
Shendu is like her own collection of rammed earth, hard rocks, flowing rivers, sand from the Gobi, and snow from northern Xinjiang. She has been calmly building the canal step by step, spade by brick, to ferry herself, her family, and millions of people across the river. The full text is very stable and light, with the feeling of a history book. It writes about such a grand thing, but the details are so meticulous that it is like looking at it with a microscope, as if the story really happened. The author did not write it but wrote down everything he saw. When he saw it, he wrote it down.
The narrative style of a science and engineering man is pretty good
The writing is really good, not like a novel, but a biography of a character
The author is so good at side descriptions. The touch, smell, vision and hearing are extremely detailed to the smallest detail. It's as if a person is personally present at the scene. The protagonist has been doing things down-to-earth. Although it seems a bit flat, but as the article said, capable people will be seen everywhere.
Well written! I feel like the author has something in mind. The writing is concise, the plot is compact, and the eloquent story makes people want to read on. I support it!
More professional and delicate
Solid structure and good looking
How come such good writing is not rated by anyone? ! Strong recommendation
The storyline is good
It was the first time I saw this writing method. I calmed down and looked at it. It was very delicate. I usually listen to books, but this book feels completely different from reading it to listening to it.
I haven't finished reading it yet, but this book is so well written. This is my first review, dedicated to good books.
It's pretty good, suitable for watching slowly with a calm heart.
The style is rare, I like it very much, the reading is very visual, like watching a TV series
It's been a long time since I've seen a novel with such good writing. I'm halfway through it now, and there's not a single word of nonsense. To describe it inappropriately, it's so good that it doesn't look like a novel you can see on Tomato.
Very light, very slow, very quiet.
Abandoning all redundant narratives and focusing only on important events, the seemingly silent article actually contains a variety of turbulent emotions.
The writing style is so delicate that my glasses got wet many times! !
The heroine is actually cold-faced and cute. She feels very gentle, but she is actually tough. What she wants to do will not change because of anything. She will be smooth and smooth. She has her own logic and is emotionally stable.
Awesome, exquisite realism. Many minute details have shaped the bones of the story.
Very nice. The overall narration is very attractive and the description is very detailed. I haven't seen the male protagonist yet, so it's good. I don't know if it's a CP-free article.
The structure is clear, the content is true, and the writing is good
It's been a while since I've reviewed a book. It's also because my personal tastes are different.
Anyway, I like it very much
The setting is very novel, but the narrative is too prose. In my opinion, many of the descriptions are inappropriate for the subject matter of a novel. The dialogue between the characters just keeps talking about who is who, which makes me feel uncomfortable and flat. But the setting is really novel, and the author's portrayal of the heroine's abilities is beyond praise. She is really capable, and I hope it will get better and better.
It's such a happy and down-to-earth article. It's a bit inappropriate to say happiness. After all, the heroine is open to the outside world, but after reading a few chapters, everyone's heart is uplifting and very positive. In the past, when I read infrastructure novels, I wished that the main character would make rapid progress and be recognized immediately. But here is the feeling of a trickle of spring. It is particularly powerful. The author's writing skills are very good, the rhythm of the writing is very comfortable, and the title of the novel is very tomato. However, the quality of the work is far beyond the local level. It has the reading feeling of a serious novel, not impatient or impatient, and is super praised! I rarely write book reviews, and this is the first time I've read a few chapters before typing! I don't know why the more I watch it, the more excited I am. I also want to swing my hoe twice. I have already recommended it to my friends! There is no bullying of men and women, plundering, burning, killing or looting. I was originally worried that the heroine would encounter some bullies, but it was just a light haha, but the description of the disaster was too vivid and deeply felt, a bit uncomfortable and tiring. The various metaphors are well written, but the same writing method is repeated repeatedly, which makes the senses tired and makes you feel like you are driving on the Shandong Expressway. There is no obvious climax and ups and downs throughout the story. It will indeed be dull when you read the later part. The heroine grows up and has more and more items in her arms, but the author does not need to emphasize it every time. It is a bit like a reward for completing the game haha.
Recommend. There is no system, no superpowers. Just be down-to-earth, do things, solve problems, and live. Very down to earth. Like. The heroine is professional.
It's like the style of excerpted prose in Chinese textbooks, long paragraphs. Fortunately, the whole text is not long. The tone of the full text is described as bitter, which is very appropriate. There is a little sweetness in the bitterness, not the sweetness of sugar water, but the sweetness of life illuminated by hope. Finally, I feel that the heroine is pure and pure. When she is not fixing things, she is on the way to fix them.
The plot is interesting, there are no cheats, it relies on its own ability, and the male protagonist does not appear to be in love in dozens of chapters, so I have the desire to read on. , There are not many similar books. But there is a small discovery. The author likes to use a sentence pattern: This thing is so and so, but it is not. . . The kind of how, but. . . How about. There are often two sentences of this kind of description in a paragraph, and perhaps more sentence changes can be used to describe it.
The content is still good, a little twisty and too narrative, but there are quite a lot of scientific things and I can keep reading.
So far, it gives me a light and hopeful feeling. Every bit of it feels very ordinary, but every step seems to have been planned. I can't wait to see what happens next.
The simple and warm words depict the strong feelings of family and country. The heroine with professional knowledge helps others and herself, never forgets her original intention, and always insists on using what she has learned to build roads and canals to help the world and bring peace to the people. In just 200,000 words, it brings a lot of warmth and touch.
Shendu is like her own collection of rammed earth, hard rocks, flowing rivers, sand from the Gobi, and snow from northern Xinjiang. She has been calmly building the canal step by step, spade by brick, to ferry herself, her family, and millions of people across the river. The full text is very stable and light, with the feeling of a history book. It writes about such a grand thing, but the details are so meticulous that it is like looking at it with a microscope, as if the story really happened. The author did not write it but wrote down everything he saw. When he saw it, he wrote it down.
The narrative style of a science and engineering man is pretty good
The writing is really good, not like a novel, but a biography of a character
The author is so good at side descriptions. The touch, smell, vision and hearing are extremely detailed to the smallest detail. It's as if a person is personally present at the scene. The protagonist has been doing things down-to-earth. Although it seems a bit flat, but as the article said, capable people will be seen everywhere.
Well written! I feel like the author has something in mind. The writing is concise, the plot is compact, and the eloquent story makes people want to read on. I support it!
More professional and delicate
Solid structure and good looking
How come such good writing is not rated by anyone? ! Strong recommendation
The storyline is good
It was the first time I saw this writing method. I calmed down and looked at it. It was very delicate. I usually listen to books, but this book feels completely different from reading it to listening to it.
I haven't finished reading it yet, but this book is so well written. This is my first review, dedicated to good books.
It's pretty good, suitable for watching slowly with a calm heart.
The style is rare, I like it very much, the reading is very visual, like watching a TV series
It's been a long time since I've seen a novel with such good writing. I'm halfway through it now, and there's not a single word of nonsense. To describe it inappropriately, it's so good that it doesn't look like a novel you can see on Tomato.
Very light, very slow, very quiet. Abandoning all redundant narratives and focusing only on important events, the seemingly silent article actually contains a variety of turbulent emotions.
The writing style is so delicate that my glasses got wet many times! !
The heroine is actually cold-faced and cute. She feels very gentle, but she is actually tough. What she wants to do will not change because of anything. She will be smooth and smooth. She has her own logic and is emotionally stable.
Awesome, exquisite realism. Many minute details have shaped the bones of the story.
Very nice. The overall narration is very attractive and the description is very detailed. I haven't seen the male protagonist yet, so it's good. I don't know if it's a CP-free article.
The structure is clear, the content is true, and the writing is good
It's been a while since I've reviewed a book. It's also because my personal tastes are different. Anyway, I like it very much