[Text without cp+summoning vest+supernatural+weird]
When An Rong was twenty years old, he inherited a supernatural agency and was bound to a system.
System: After completing the mission, you can create a vest with explosive combat power to help you work.
An Rong: Is there such a good thing?
So he pinched four...
System: Don't worry, they are naturally attracted to you.
An Rong believed it.
Until one day, the vest number one blocked him in a corner, his gray eyes were frighteningly heavy: "It's not a setting."
Vest No. 2 Put away all his playful smiles: "Master is the title I want to call myself."
Vest No. 3 Grabbed his wrist, his palms hot: "I will become stronger."
Vest No. 4 Stood on tiptoe and whispered in his ear: "Brother..."
An Rong's back was pressed against the wall, and his heart was beating fast.
... Did the system get the wrong script?
Reader comments
It looks pretty good, but does the word "not" appear too frequently? It looks awkward. I roughly counted it, and it appears more than ninety times in chapters 1 to 9 alone. Chapter 3 is especially the hardest hit area, appearing 23 times. It's really easy to get bored when the same word appears too many times. I hope it can be changed (っ◞‸◟c)
The plot is well written, and the text has a gentle narrative feel, which is very daily. The writing style can be strengthened.
I wish An Rong and the others stay together year after year. The author works hard and looks forward to the next book.
It looks pretty good, but does the word "not" appear too frequently? It looks awkward. I roughly counted it, and it appears more than ninety times in chapters 1 to 9 alone. Chapter 3 is especially the hardest hit area, appearing 23 times. It's really easy to get bored when the same word appears too many times. I hope it can be changed (っ◞‸◟c)
The plot is well written, and the text has a gentle narrative feel, which is very daily. The writing style can be strengthened. I wish An Rong and the others stay together year after year. The author works hard and looks forward to the next book.