[Game-world fantasy, pets, first-person perspective]
Her name is Listening, and she's so socially anxious that she doesn't even dare to choose a name for herself.
She finds a crow and calls it Zero.
She doesn't know that, in its previous life, the crow was an overworked office drone who worked until the early hours of the morning.
She also doesn't know that the crow has already failed three times trying to stay alive.
All she knows is that when the whole world is chasing her, the crow perches on her shoulder and taps her ear with its wing.
As if to say, “I'm here.”
Later, Zero awakens a unique class: [Fool].
Its power isn't combat, but “deception”: deceiving identities, deceiving auras, even deceiving the rules themselves.
He takes the form of a long-dead dwarf blacksmith and rekindles a forge that has been cold for three hundred years.
He enters the cursed heart of the Land of Eternal Night, making its twilight sun rise for the first time.
When he stands before the truth of the world, he decides to carry out one final disguise before the sun of Heaven.
After making his way to the truth of the world, he discovers that the one who set all fate in motion came from Heaven.”
“He decides to deceive the sun of Heaven one last time.”
Not to become a god.
Only so the girl who once found him can breathe freely in this world.
This is Listening's story, too. But at its heart, it's the story of a crow deceiving the whole world for the sake of one girl.
It all began one winter afternoon, when a frozen crow fell and crushed a slime. This is a very slow-paced story.
At the beginning, the description content and writing style were quite refreshing, but as you read more, you will find that the author particularly likes to use "it's not..." And "but..." That appeared many times, which made me a little impatient. Generally speaking, the problems are as follows: First: The writing style is a little fresh for the first time, but the sentence description is bloated and can be simplified. Second, the plot advances a bit slowly, and some paragraphs are too long, which affects the reading experience. Third, it can increase character interaction and psychological description of the protagonist, and highlight the protagonist's human nature.
Overall, it is very good. If the questions are changed, it can be a very good book.
Thank you so much for the author (ฅ>ω<*ฅ)
Hey, someone discovered that I open a trumpet account [laughs] [shy]
A+ It is undoubtedly a good light novel, and the world view is worth exploring deeply. However, some descriptions seem deliberate, and the emotional outburst needs to be foreshadowed, which is a little rushed.
It can be quite interesting, but the protagonist's promotion is too slow. If you want to write more relaxedly, don't put pressure on me [laughs][laughs][laughs]
I take back my previous comment. After the world view really unfolds, it is very beautiful [Blowing Kiss], but there are some small flaws. The author should correct it, right? [Laughing] The writing style is also good [Like][Like][Like] But there are too few people reading it, so it won't be updated, right? [Crying][Crying][Crying] Don't do it, come on! ! ! Author, I believe in you [sending heart] [blowing kiss] [plus one on bookshelf]
Although it is very interesting to watch, to be honest it is not to my liking. Maybe I have watched too much. But I still give it 4 stars because if you haven't read it for 30 minutes, it won't be counted in the rating.
It's very beautiful, and the author's writing style has a gentle feel to it.
I heard that in ancient times, there were wise kings who could take advice and work hard to govern, so I gave the author suggestions to make future books and data prosperous.
Personally, I feel that the content of this book has an awkward feeling of "telling sorrow for the sake of writing new words". This is caused by too much lyricism and insufficient writing power. Therefore, I suggest that the author works harder to write the book to develop his own style.
Casual and plain, it can be used to calm your mind just like Tai Chi. [ Eat melon ] [ eat melon ] [ eat melon ]
This book gives me a very different feeling. It's very light and has a different feeling. The description and shaping of the characters are pretty good. The psychological description is clear and light, but it just feels hollow. The world view is unclear. There are very few scene descriptions. Some settings are very abrupt, but compared to other Tomato novels, it's already ruthless.
It's a very good book. I like the narrative method very much. It's very comfortable to read. I hope to continue writing.
This book gave me a lot of surprises. The articles are really good. Although most of the other articles I read would give me a five-star support, but I must say that this one is really different. At least so far, the style is very unique and suits my taste. Come on! [Praise]
At the beginning, the description content and writing style were quite refreshing, but as you read more, you will find that the author particularly likes to use "it's not..." And "but..." That appeared many times, which made me a little impatient. Generally speaking, the problems are as follows: First: The writing style is a little fresh for the first time, but the sentence description is bloated and can be simplified. Second, the plot advances a bit slowly, and some paragraphs are too long, which affects the reading experience. Third, it can increase character interaction and psychological description of the protagonist, and highlight the protagonist's human nature. Overall, it is very good. If the questions are changed, it can be a very good book. Thank you so much for the author (ฅ>ω<*ฅ) Hey, someone discovered that I open a trumpet account [laughs] [shy]
A+ It is undoubtedly a good light novel, and the world view is worth exploring deeply. However, some descriptions seem deliberate, and the emotional outburst needs to be foreshadowed, which is a little rushed.
It can be quite interesting, but the protagonist's promotion is too slow. If you want to write more relaxedly, don't put pressure on me [laughs][laughs][laughs] I take back my previous comment. After the world view really unfolds, it is very beautiful [Blowing Kiss], but there are some small flaws. The author should correct it, right? [Laughing] The writing style is also good [Like][Like][Like] But there are too few people reading it, so it won't be updated, right? [Crying][Crying][Crying] Don't do it, come on! ! ! Author, I believe in you [sending heart] [blowing kiss] [plus one on bookshelf]
Although it is very interesting to watch, to be honest it is not to my liking. Maybe I have watched too much. But I still give it 4 stars because if you haven't read it for 30 minutes, it won't be counted in the rating.
It's very beautiful, and the author's writing style has a gentle feel to it.
I heard that in ancient times, there were wise kings who could take advice and work hard to govern, so I gave the author suggestions to make future books and data prosperous. Personally, I feel that the content of this book has an awkward feeling of "telling sorrow for the sake of writing new words". This is caused by too much lyricism and insufficient writing power. Therefore, I suggest that the author works harder to write the book to develop his own style.
Casual and plain, it can be used to calm your mind just like Tai Chi. [ Eat melon ] [ eat melon ] [ eat melon ]
This book gives me a very different feeling. It's very light and has a different feeling. The description and shaping of the characters are pretty good. The psychological description is clear and light, but it just feels hollow. The world view is unclear. There are very few scene descriptions. Some settings are very abrupt, but compared to other Tomato novels, it's already ruthless.
It's a very good book. I like the narrative method very much. It's very comfortable to read. I hope to continue writing.
This book gave me a lot of surprises. The articles are really good. Although most of the other articles I read would give me a five-star support, but I must say that this one is really different. At least so far, the style is very unique and suits my taste. Come on! [Praise]