Raising a daughter, living a slow life, the protagonist changes everything except becoming a person, and the daughter will not get married.
The "ordinary" young man who was deceived by his sister's insurance does not necessarily have to show off his talents in a different world by becoming a slime.
However, picking up a seriously injured and dying little girl changed the trajectory of his destiny. Maybe this adventure will be exciting?
The world view of this book follows the previous book, but if you haven't read it, it won't affect your viewing. Finally, I hope you all enjoy reading it.
I am just writing for fun if I am not sensible. If I stop updating, I will be stunned by the prisoner.
Reader comments
In Chapter 118, after the monsters in the circus attacked the protagonist's group, it was a bit difficult for the protagonist's group to deal with it. If the protagonist hadn't taken action in time, Leah would have been seriously injured, or even worse. As a result, the attacking group apologized afterwards and it was over. After returning, Leah also blamed the protagonist for lusting after the most powerful one among the attacks, saying that he shouldn't lust after his friends. I remember that Leah only went in to act as a translator, and that dragon was the most hostile. Even after the explanation, she was still very wary of the protagonist group. How could she become friends? And even if Leah didn't take the route of complete revenge, she would have had a better solution after being hunted, framed and wanted. Why did she feel like she was indifferent later on.
The previous readings were good and very exciting, but after reading this one, I felt like a thorn was stuck in my throat, which was very uncomfortable. No, will the person who hunts you down in the future be your friend as long as he apologizes after attacking you?
The name changes erratically. When we first met, he was a dragon, and while we were chatting, he suddenly turned into a jellyfish. When he was introduced later, I realized that it was a jellyfish dragon. Then when the protagonist group fought with this jellyfish dragon, suddenly Vares used a water cannon. There was no foreshadowing or introduction at all. Do you think this change of name really does not affect the reader's experience of reading the novel. I was still wondering who this Vales was and how he suddenly appeared, but after reading the context, I realized that this was the fucking jellyfish dragon.
Except for the circus part, everything else is good, the storyline, character description and creation are all good.
In Chapter 118, after the monsters in the circus attacked the protagonist's group, it was a bit difficult for the protagonist's group to deal with it. If the protagonist hadn't taken action in time, Leah would have been seriously injured, or even worse. As a result, the attacking group apologized afterwards and it was over. After returning, Leah also blamed the protagonist for lusting after the most powerful one among the attacks, saying that he shouldn't lust after his friends. I remember that Leah only went in to act as a translator, and that dragon was the most hostile. Even after the explanation, she was still very wary of the protagonist group. How could she become friends? And even if Leah didn't take the route of complete revenge, she would have had a better solution after being hunted, framed and wanted. Why did she feel like she was indifferent later on. The previous readings were good and very exciting, but after reading this one, I felt like a thorn was stuck in my throat, which was very uncomfortable. No, will the person who hunts you down in the future be your friend as long as he apologizes after attacking you? The name changes erratically. When we first met, he was a dragon, and while we were chatting, he suddenly turned into a jellyfish. When he was introduced later, I realized that it was a jellyfish dragon. Then when the protagonist group fought with this jellyfish dragon, suddenly Vares used a water cannon. There was no foreshadowing or introduction at all. Do you think this change of name really does not affect the reader's experience of reading the novel. I was still wondering who this Vales was and how he suddenly appeared, but after reading the context, I realized that this was the fucking jellyfish dragon. Except for the circus part, everything else is good, the storyline, character description and creation are all good.
The pace is pretty good and the plot is smooth.