The rating just came up and it will go up in the future.
Logic graduate student Su Xiao woke up and traveled to the world of Afanti.
Before she could figure out what was going on, what was going on, what was going on, and what was going on, she was teased in the street by the greedy Master Bai.
Su Xiao calmly said: "Where is the evidence? Where are the witnesses? Where is the land deed?"
Mr. Bayi:? ? ? This woman doesn't play by the rules.
Afanti, a crowd of onlookers, silently put away the words that were on his lips - this girl seems to be more ruthless than him.
Later, a new legend spread in the city of Kashgar: There was a woman beside Avanti, she looked like a fairy, and her brain was half a beat faster than Avanti.
Master Bayi walked around when he saw her, the judge broke out in a cold sweat when he saw her, and the king said "can't afford to offend" after hearing her deeds.
Only Afanti knew that this woman not only stole his lines, but also his heart.
"Afanti, you lost your CP."
"No, I picked it up."
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Well written, the author's Afanti is so charming, smart, just, and kind. It's exactly the Afanti I remembered from my childhood. The heroine is also very good, smart, calm and not obsessive. The plot develops very naturally, and the emotional scenes are not abrupt. You can find them in daily life (I personally think that Afanti fell in love with the heroine at first sight, so that's why he took his parents. The fabric left for him is used to make clothes for the heroine) This kind of silent dedication behind the scenes is very touching. [Blow kiss] After reading this novel, I suddenly fell in love with Afanti, and then I searched the entire Internet and found that there are no novels about Afanti. [I almost cried] I hope the author can keep writing and not stop updating🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
Judging from what the author has written so far, there are no shortcomings overall. Although he is friends with Afanti, the author did not write him as a very handsome person.
And his feelings for the heroine are not the so-called love at first sight, but a long-lasting one, which is a very rare type nowadays.
And the prince among them is right. The heroine is a kind of possessor who sees beautiful things, but there is no plundering like in common novels. What does the hero do to her?
Just write the prince as a contradictory individual, a contradictory individual in line with human characteristics.
And the heroine's skin color is not the same as before when she lives in that place, but changes to a light wheat color according to the geographical environment. This is very consistent with the realistic environmental factors and is more realistic.
So generally speaking, what the author has written is very good. As long as the author keeps working hard, I believe this work will be seen by more people.
It is a very niche subject, but the writing is very vivid. Whether Xiaoxiao helps solve things every time or gets along with Afanti, it is not out of the ordinary. The plot is very natural and logical. The sense of cp gradually emerges, which is much better than writing about love at first sight. Moreover, in terms of written expression, it makes people feel very comfortable when reading. The language is very simple. I hope I can finish it and don't stop updating.
It's very life-like and humorous, but there is too little sugar, the logic is very strong, and the emotional part is not fast-paced, but the sprinkle of sugar is super sweet! ! ! Trust me! ! ! Because I saw the reminder from the beginning! ! !
It turns out that Afanti is such a person. It turns out that in the world of Afanti, there is such a warm story. It turns out that there are authors in this world who can write beautiful stories [love] [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post]
I don't like to post comments all of a sudden, but I really like this book. It's light, just like the story books I read before, it can make people calm down and look forward to every day of life. It's light, as if only Su Xiao, Afanti, the people of Kashgar City, and me are left in this world. But there are many things about it that have left a deep mark in my heart. I am looking forward to the next story of Kashgar City. I want to taste the naan from Wushurbowa and Anarkao. I also want to eat it (I will buy a baked naan later). I want to see the pomegranate red clothes. The red, yellow, blue and green are intertwined together, like the clothes that wear the colors of the entire bazaar. I want to walk through the bazaar myself.
So, author, you have many silent readers who are looking forward to new stories every day. Think about tomorrow's things tomorrow. You must persevere. Your talent deserves to be seen by more people.
Hehe, it looks good. If you like it, please update it. I believe you are a potential stock. Maybe some people haven't read it or don't read fanfics, but you can really do it. I really like your novel. When the time comes, if no one really cares, you can just be my exclusive wife. I will always support you.
Rating, it must be rated to satisfy my great wish. This book is really well written, with a very slow pace, and it lightly tells about the "new" world that the heroine sees and feels and the lovely people in this world. Hope it can be updated until the end
Such lovely words! ! I finally believe that words have warmth! ! It's so heartwarming! !
I think maybe love is the bag of my Shourbois, the golden soup cooked with saffron, the hand-picked rice that needs to be chewed slowly, the sound of Aunt Harguli chopping the chopping board, the rustling of old mulberry leaves, the gust of wind in Kashgar, a handful of soil, and a group of people. The warmth between people turns into a sweet and bright smell of pomegranate through words
Not only between Afanti and Su Xiao, but also between Anal and Wushouerbua, Wuershoubua and Afanti. There are many lines between people in Bazaar. Every little love becomes a big portion of Bazaar's hand-meal. Everyone puts a little in, everyone takes a little away, but it is different from the original. There is a little bit of everyone in it, and everyone also has a little bit of other people.
"I like it very much." I have read your stories for many years. The Afanti in those stories is smart, just, and humorous. But the Afanti in those stories is not as complete as you. They only wrote about the side of you helping people solve problems, not the side of you squatting in the yard making mutton soup. They didn't write about the side of you talking to the donkey. One side. I didn't write about the side you bought the burnt naan." This passage, starting from the small slices, and then cutting it layer by layer, made me look at Afanti from another perspective, and think about Afanti's wisdom in another way. It is not just one person's, but is known to all the elders in Kashgar.
You know, I just learned that there are only three types of days, today, yesterday and tomorrow. Let's talk about tomorrow's things tomorrow.
Let's talk about Afanti first. Zhuge Liang's reputation in the Western Regions is indeed not in vain. In the author's writing, I saw a lively, witty and intelligent Afanti, but at the same time he also had his troubles and sorrows. Let's talk about the heroine. The heroine and Afanti are simply sapiosexual. Sometimes they always solve problems one step ahead of Afanti. This feeling of sympathy is the most heartwarming. There is a sentence in it that I specially underlined: "She saw the pattern with her eyes, and he translated the pattern with his brain." Meaning. She saw the tree, he saw the woods. She found the key, and he opened the lock. "I hope the author will not stop or stop updating, because there are very few Avanti fan fiction on Tomato. In short, I will continue to follow it.
It's a tie. I'll give you 2 reminder charms and 2 inspiration capsules. I'll be number one on the list, right?
I also like this sentence very much (a two-way sapiosexual love, who can't read it without saying a word):
"That road is very long. Can a donkey walk it?"
"Let it rest if it can't walk. After resting, continue walking."
"What about you?"
"I follow the donkey."
A very unique choice of materials, and the interaction between the heroine and Afanti is very warm. Although the author's writing skills are still a bit immature, I don't think it's a big problem in Tomato 🍅 (there are actually many more immature books). On the contrary, the re-creation of such a familiar character shows the author's more three-dimensional image of Afanti in addition to the "symbol of wisdom". Although this kind of book may not cater to the taste of most people, because everyone likes novels with more ups and downs in life. But I think the author will find readers willing to read quietly. Thanks to the author for his words, 5 stars for support
It's such a niche subject, I never thought there would be fanfics about Afanti hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! The writing is very delicate, and when I read it, I felt like the sun was slowly stretching into the gaps between the lush grape trellises. People were sitting in the shade of the grape trellis, holding a steaming bowl of mutton soup or milk tea in their hands 🥺🥺🥺 (subjective feeling)! Every short story feels like I'm reading that kind of short fable [Thinking] By the way, I'm really hungry for the naan, mutton soup, baked buns and other delicacies in the book. Oh my god, the writing is so delicious. I'm so hungry after reading it. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha 🆘[face-covering][face-covering][face-covering] I hope more and more friends can read this book🥹🥹🥹
Very, very, very delicate writing style and story. If I were a person who grew up on the grassland, I would use simple and passionate words to describe it, but I was born in Jiangnan, where there is mostly humid air and gentle wind. The words I speak are subtle and long.
The story is very good and the people are very nice. I hope the author will keep creating and tell me if there are any difficulties. I don't want such a good work to be wasted due to practical factors.
It's a good read, with a kind of warmth that flows steadily. It's really comfortable to read this book after I'm exhausted from work. I haven't finished it yet, but the author's writing style is okay. It's just that I'm not used to writing about small things like this, such as the aroma of saffron-flavored mutton soup floating in the yard, and holding a cat on my lap and touching it. I generally understand the author's reasons for writing these things, but it's a bit too frequent to write them every day. Especially for this kind of long-running book with such a plot, it's really tiring to read it over and over again. If you want to continue the previous chapter, you really don't have to write such a long line. The novel is not a listening book. It is quite convenient to go back and read the plot. I will continue the review after I finish reading it.
The backend is pretty good, but it feels a bit rushed? There is no explanation as to why he fell from the sky and returned home so suddenly, but it is nice to have a strong human touch, and it was really a bit boring to watch.
The author must keep writing [cry][cry][cry]
It's not enough [I also strongly recommend]
A very novel story. I didn't feel that the author wrote Afanti OOC. It has the flavor of the protagonist of a folk tale. The character of the heroine can also be established, and I feel that she is a smart and kind person. I have only read Chapter 11 so far, so the rating is false.
It's the first time I've seen a fan of Afanti, it's very interesting, I like [flying kisses] [flying kisses] [flying kisses]
It's really good-looking. I'm intp. The author's Avanti is really super charming. The people in the bazaar and the relationship between Avanti and the heroine gave me a feeling of quiet years that I longed for. It's really good. Why didn't I watch it? It doesn't make sense [Please update][Please update][Please update]
I feel that the author's writing is very philosophical and thought-provoking. It is not like a running account. The story is very coherent. The dialogue between the heroine and Afanti is very consistent with the character. It is not a mindless love story. It is about emotions arising from getting along. It feels very much like sapiosexuality.
There is no occ in Afanti at all, and the heroine is also very good. I like to see the interaction between Afanti and the heroine. I hope that Afanti and the heroine can progress faster [Send heart]
Well, yes, it's sapiosexual, hmm√😁
Nice! It feels like reading a fable, the author's words contain great wisdom! ! ! The writing is vivid and natural, telling you everything slowly ~ I really like the author's narrative ~
Hahaha, Gugugu likes it
It's really super beautiful, and the emotional line is very heart-warming~(￣▽￣~)~ The character of Afanti is also perfectly captured and very real.
I always listen to it as a bedtime story, such as the Grimm's Fairy Tales, which are too scary at night, and this is just right.
Agree with their evaluation, the story is interesting [blowing kiss]
The author's words are very gentle, and those who read them feel warm in their hearts.
It's beautiful. Su Xiao and Afanti's writing is very charming.
It's well written, and people who read it will feel warm in their hearts [laughing][laughing]
Well written, the author's Afanti is so charming, smart, just, and kind. It's exactly the Afanti I remembered from my childhood. The heroine is also very good, smart, calm and not obsessive. The plot develops very naturally, and the emotional scenes are not abrupt. You can find them in daily life (I personally think that Afanti fell in love with the heroine at first sight, so that's why he took his parents. The fabric left for him is used to make clothes for the heroine) This kind of silent dedication behind the scenes is very touching. [Blow kiss] After reading this novel, I suddenly fell in love with Afanti, and then I searched the entire Internet and found that there are no novels about Afanti. [I almost cried] I hope the author can keep writing and not stop updating🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
Judging from what the author has written so far, there are no shortcomings overall. Although he is friends with Afanti, the author did not write him as a very handsome person. And his feelings for the heroine are not the so-called love at first sight, but a long-lasting one, which is a very rare type nowadays. And the prince among them is right. The heroine is a kind of possessor who sees beautiful things, but there is no plundering like in common novels. What does the hero do to her? Just write the prince as a contradictory individual, a contradictory individual in line with human characteristics. And the heroine's skin color is not the same as before when she lives in that place, but changes to a light wheat color according to the geographical environment. This is very consistent with the realistic environmental factors and is more realistic. So generally speaking, what the author has written is very good. As long as the author keeps working hard, I believe this work will be seen by more people.
It is a very niche subject, but the writing is very vivid. Whether Xiaoxiao helps solve things every time or gets along with Afanti, it is not out of the ordinary. The plot is very natural and logical. The sense of cp gradually emerges, which is much better than writing about love at first sight. Moreover, in terms of written expression, it makes people feel very comfortable when reading. The language is very simple. I hope I can finish it and don't stop updating.
It's very life-like and humorous, but there is too little sugar, the logic is very strong, and the emotional part is not fast-paced, but the sprinkle of sugar is super sweet! ! ! Trust me! ! ! Because I saw the reminder from the beginning! ! !
It turns out that Afanti is such a person. It turns out that in the world of Afanti, there is such a warm story. It turns out that there are authors in this world who can write beautiful stories [love] [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post]
I don't like to post comments all of a sudden, but I really like this book. It's light, just like the story books I read before, it can make people calm down and look forward to every day of life. It's light, as if only Su Xiao, Afanti, the people of Kashgar City, and me are left in this world. But there are many things about it that have left a deep mark in my heart. I am looking forward to the next story of Kashgar City. I want to taste the naan from Wushurbowa and Anarkao. I also want to eat it (I will buy a baked naan later). I want to see the pomegranate red clothes. The red, yellow, blue and green are intertwined together, like the clothes that wear the colors of the entire bazaar. I want to walk through the bazaar myself. So, author, you have many silent readers who are looking forward to new stories every day. Think about tomorrow's things tomorrow. You must persevere. Your talent deserves to be seen by more people.
Hehe, it looks good. If you like it, please update it. I believe you are a potential stock. Maybe some people haven't read it or don't read fanfics, but you can really do it. I really like your novel. When the time comes, if no one really cares, you can just be my exclusive wife. I will always support you.
Rating, it must be rated to satisfy my great wish. This book is really well written, with a very slow pace, and it lightly tells about the "new" world that the heroine sees and feels and the lovely people in this world. Hope it can be updated until the end
Such lovely words! ! I finally believe that words have warmth! ! It's so heartwarming! ! I think maybe love is the bag of my Shourbois, the golden soup cooked with saffron, the hand-picked rice that needs to be chewed slowly, the sound of Aunt Harguli chopping the chopping board, the rustling of old mulberry leaves, the gust of wind in Kashgar, a handful of soil, and a group of people. The warmth between people turns into a sweet and bright smell of pomegranate through words Not only between Afanti and Su Xiao, but also between Anal and Wushouerbua, Wuershoubua and Afanti. There are many lines between people in Bazaar. Every little love becomes a big portion of Bazaar's hand-meal. Everyone puts a little in, everyone takes a little away, but it is different from the original. There is a little bit of everyone in it, and everyone also has a little bit of other people. "I like it very much." I have read your stories for many years. The Afanti in those stories is smart, just, and humorous. But the Afanti in those stories is not as complete as you. They only wrote about the side of you helping people solve problems, not the side of you squatting in the yard making mutton soup. They didn't write about the side of you talking to the donkey. One side. I didn't write about the side you bought the burnt naan." This passage, starting from the small slices, and then cutting it layer by layer, made me look at Afanti from another perspective, and think about Afanti's wisdom in another way. It is not just one person's, but is known to all the elders in Kashgar. You know, I just learned that there are only three types of days, today, yesterday and tomorrow. Let's talk about tomorrow's things tomorrow.
Let's talk about Afanti first. Zhuge Liang's reputation in the Western Regions is indeed not in vain. In the author's writing, I saw a lively, witty and intelligent Afanti, but at the same time he also had his troubles and sorrows. Let's talk about the heroine. The heroine and Afanti are simply sapiosexual. Sometimes they always solve problems one step ahead of Afanti. This feeling of sympathy is the most heartwarming. There is a sentence in it that I specially underlined: "She saw the pattern with her eyes, and he translated the pattern with his brain." Meaning. She saw the tree, he saw the woods. She found the key, and he opened the lock. "I hope the author will not stop or stop updating, because there are very few Avanti fan fiction on Tomato. In short, I will continue to follow it. It's a tie. I'll give you 2 reminder charms and 2 inspiration capsules. I'll be number one on the list, right? I also like this sentence very much (a two-way sapiosexual love, who can't read it without saying a word): "That road is very long. Can a donkey walk it?" "Let it rest if it can't walk. After resting, continue walking." "What about you?" "I follow the donkey."
A very unique choice of materials, and the interaction between the heroine and Afanti is very warm. Although the author's writing skills are still a bit immature, I don't think it's a big problem in Tomato 🍅 (there are actually many more immature books). On the contrary, the re-creation of such a familiar character shows the author's more three-dimensional image of Afanti in addition to the "symbol of wisdom". Although this kind of book may not cater to the taste of most people, because everyone likes novels with more ups and downs in life. But I think the author will find readers willing to read quietly. Thanks to the author for his words, 5 stars for support
It's such a niche subject, I never thought there would be fanfics about Afanti hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! The writing is very delicate, and when I read it, I felt like the sun was slowly stretching into the gaps between the lush grape trellises. People were sitting in the shade of the grape trellis, holding a steaming bowl of mutton soup or milk tea in their hands 🥺🥺🥺 (subjective feeling)! Every short story feels like I'm reading that kind of short fable [Thinking] By the way, I'm really hungry for the naan, mutton soup, baked buns and other delicacies in the book. Oh my god, the writing is so delicious. I'm so hungry after reading it. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha 🆘[face-covering][face-covering][face-covering] I hope more and more friends can read this book🥹🥹🥹
Very, very, very delicate writing style and story. If I were a person who grew up on the grassland, I would use simple and passionate words to describe it, but I was born in Jiangnan, where there is mostly humid air and gentle wind. The words I speak are subtle and long. The story is very good and the people are very nice. I hope the author will keep creating and tell me if there are any difficulties. I don't want such a good work to be wasted due to practical factors.
It's a good read, with a kind of warmth that flows steadily. It's really comfortable to read this book after I'm exhausted from work. I haven't finished it yet, but the author's writing style is okay. It's just that I'm not used to writing about small things like this, such as the aroma of saffron-flavored mutton soup floating in the yard, and holding a cat on my lap and touching it. I generally understand the author's reasons for writing these things, but it's a bit too frequent to write them every day. Especially for this kind of long-running book with such a plot, it's really tiring to read it over and over again. If you want to continue the previous chapter, you really don't have to write such a long line. The novel is not a listening book. It is quite convenient to go back and read the plot. I will continue the review after I finish reading it. The backend is pretty good, but it feels a bit rushed? There is no explanation as to why he fell from the sky and returned home so suddenly, but it is nice to have a strong human touch, and it was really a bit boring to watch.
The author must keep writing [cry][cry][cry] It's not enough [I also strongly recommend]
A very novel story. I didn't feel that the author wrote Afanti OOC. It has the flavor of the protagonist of a folk tale. The character of the heroine can also be established, and I feel that she is a smart and kind person. I have only read Chapter 11 so far, so the rating is false.
It's the first time I've seen a fan of Afanti, it's very interesting, I like [flying kisses] [flying kisses] [flying kisses]
It's really good-looking. I'm intp. The author's Avanti is really super charming. The people in the bazaar and the relationship between Avanti and the heroine gave me a feeling of quiet years that I longed for. It's really good. Why didn't I watch it? It doesn't make sense [Please update][Please update][Please update]
I feel that the author's writing is very philosophical and thought-provoking. It is not like a running account. The story is very coherent. The dialogue between the heroine and Afanti is very consistent with the character. It is not a mindless love story. It is about emotions arising from getting along. It feels very much like sapiosexuality.
There is no occ in Afanti at all, and the heroine is also very good. I like to see the interaction between Afanti and the heroine. I hope that Afanti and the heroine can progress faster [Send heart]
Well, yes, it's sapiosexual, hmm√😁
Nice! It feels like reading a fable, the author's words contain great wisdom! ! ! The writing is vivid and natural, telling you everything slowly ~ I really like the author's narrative ~
Hahaha, Gugugu likes it
It's really super beautiful, and the emotional line is very heart-warming~(￣▽￣~)~ The character of Afanti is also perfectly captured and very real.
I always listen to it as a bedtime story, such as the Grimm's Fairy Tales, which are too scary at night, and this is just right.
Agree with their evaluation, the story is interesting [blowing kiss]
The author's words are very gentle, and those who read them feel warm in their hearts.
It's beautiful. Su Xiao and Afanti's writing is very charming.
It's well written, and people who read it will feel warm in their hearts [laughing][laughing]
Very interesting, very interesting