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[Old version of Returning the Pearl➕Black Protagonist Group➕Slapping and Tucao]
[Qinger CP: Substitute, not Xiao Jian]
[Zhihua CP: If you don't change, you will still be the fifth elder brother, don't enter if you don't like it]
Zhihua and Qing'er, one worked hard to marry into the Forbidden City in their previous life, and the other worked hard to leave the Forbidden City.
Zhihua died in Jingyang Palace.
Qing'er died in Dali in her dream.
None ends well.
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On the night of her rebirth, Qing'er was forced by Xiao Yanzi to meet Xiao Jian.
Xiao Yanzi threatened: "My brother will die of lovesickness!"
Qing'er: "Then let him die."
*
At first, the fifth elder brother felt that Zhihua was scheming at a young age.
Love of vanity is useless.
He didn't like her, but he had no choice but to marry her.
Later, he sat on the dragon throne.
Seeing Zhihua in charge of the Sixth Palace with ease, he accepted concubines for him one after another with a smile on his face.
Only then did he realize that his queen was good at everything except not loving him.
Reader comments
There is no OOC, the dialogue and even the original voice automatically play in the mind. When I was a kid, I was also a fan of the main character group. I felt that Zhihua was ruining people's emotions, but I really liked her tearful scene. It was so beautiful. Looking back now, it seems like she was the only one participating in the royal power competition, while everyone else was playing house. Qing'er, I think she is the blood bag of the protagonist group. She always tells the truth. She suffered a lot with Xiao Jian. Meeting the protagonist group is her retribution.
It's quite interesting. I like to read various stories about supporting characters becoming protagonists, regardless of whether I've read the original work or not. The CP assigned to Qing'er feels okay. It's okay for her to be happy with Zhi Hua picking up such a man.
Originally I was quite willing to watch the plot, but Zhihua and Yongqi's flirting was a bit disgusting.
It's great. My blood pressure went up when the original protagonists saw them. Why didn't I notice they were so subversive before? [Petrochemical]
The author's description of them is neither OOC nor deviated from Aunt Qiong Yao's way of expression. The words and tone of the characters' words can be easily imagined in the mind's mind, their movements and expressions at that time, if you don't mind the blood pressure, you can see it (this is for the original protagonist group, why didn't you think someone was so unreasonable before? It's amazing)
It's good to watch. The process of taming a scumbag is so exciting to watch. The male protagonist feels sober and addicted to the female protagonist, but he is stubborn and refuses to admit it. If he doesn't admit it, he will not have a wife to hold him. You still have to see if your wife is really you, so you can control her hard [OK]
This rare old version of Huanzhuzhihua Qing'er's fanfic also adds the plot of Hanxiang and Mengdan. The heroines are kind but not stupid and no longer live for love. Girls help girls. The writing is appropriate. The author's writing style is good and the description is very delicate. It is simply not enough.
OMG it's actually the same author who wrote Lu Ping's Rebirth. I wonder why Qiong Yao is so sophisticated in her taste and how she pokes the protagonist's heart so coolly. The rhythm of the plot is very well written. When I was a child, I was scared to death by the madness of Little Swallow. When I grew up, I saw that it was indeed crazy. The author wrote it very well, and there was no sense of deliberate darkness. All the plots happened according to the original characters [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] I support the author and hope to write something like this in the next book to relieve my anger.
Teacher, you must keep writing. The setting of twins is very novel, the plot is natural and smooth, and the writing is also good. Moreover, the character design is not broken at all, and the lines are so immersive that I stayed up late yesterday to finish watching it. Too few updates
In fact, I personally don't like fan fiction, because if it's not written well, it won't fit the original work, and it will be like a latecomer trying to forcefully change the fate of others. But I really like this book. The author thoroughly understands the characters in the original book, without being separated at all. He unconsciously substitutes the characters in the TV series, including the strategy for Yongqi. At first, I really thought it was impossible, but now that I read it, I suddenly realized that Yongqi has been trained. The whole process is not abrupt at all. In short, it is really great. Originally in Huanzhu, I was amazed by Qing'er and rushed towards Qing'er, but now I am a little impressed by Zhihua. (◍•ᴗ•◍) Also, the author, please give me your best.
This is my first time writing a book review, and I really think the author wrote it very well. I will read this kind of second creation when I am bored, but most people write stupid and cool things. The author's article is really great. It cannot be said that there is no OOC at all, but how can I avoid OOC after I have already made a second creation? The author has written very well, very Qiong Yao flavor. When watching it, I can even imagine the actor's voice. I did not substitute for the first and second parts, but the third one, because although the first and second parts are not very realistic in my eyes, they are not particularly outrageous. The third part is really hard to describe. At that time, I thought, will the flute and sword in the second part really make Qing'er chase the horse on a rainy day? Qing'er wouldn't do this either, she has dignity. I didn't like Zhihua back then, but Qin Lan is really good-looking
A kind word can warm you in three winters, but a bad word can hurt you in six months! I hope you will encourage your babies and be merciful when rating them! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
Ignoring lightning protection, malicious negative reviews, clearly stating who the male protagonist is, and asking "why not change the male protagonist", looking for "imperial power is supreme" in the fan fiction of Huanzhu, a work about love that is too great, defaulting to preventing disasters for the author for the rest of his life.
After reading the first few chapters, let's give my score first.
The writing is very good, and the characters are not OOC. The Qiong Yao flavor is too strong, and the Taiwanese accent can be heard in my head [Thoughts]
It's so well written, I hope there will be more updates! I couldn't stop watching it, and I couldn't bear to watch it. In fact, I have always liked Qing'er and felt sorry for Zhihua. Before I was not married, I just thought the love between the protagonists was beautiful, but now I look at them and they are all selfish! How can Mian Yi have family ties without her father? Knowing how difficult it is to be a mother, can Qing'er be happy if she marries Xiao Jian for so-called love? Life becomes daily necessities!
I thought it looked good at first glance, but when I clicked on it, I discovered that Lu Ping's Rebirth was also written by the same author. Hahahahahaha, the author's writing style and conception are really great! ! ! ! Recommend!
A rare good book, funny and crazy, I like the scene of dog training (a good book refers to this kind of book☞🈶Original work, the author writes a story about the rebirth of a supporting character based on the characters in the original work), no OOC, and even many words look like voice notes [face covering] such as: Little Swallow, you have to be patient and patient! Mouth~ Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha not a brainless cool article, but it is very refreshing to watch and very irritating. If there is such a cheat around you, you will want to kill her directly emmm In modern society, you should stay away. . The author grasps the psychology of the protagonist group very well: Xiao Yanzi's background is actually selfish and indifferent. She enjoys privileges but pretends not to care. I like how the author has written about Xiao Yanzi's agility and sensitivity. She is very good at seeking advantages and avoiding disadvantages, and pretending to be stupid and good. Ziwei is indecisive, and she has her own standards for good and evil. I won't go into details one by one, but those who are unfamiliar with it can take a look. There are some minefields, and the author has cleared them up from the beginning. The most controversial one may be Zhihua's child. Some novels will choose to completely abandon the white-eyed wolf in the previous life, because after raising it personally, it is found that it is not good at all. What is written here is that Zhihua did not raise children in her previous life, so the children are unfilial. She will always love her children.
I'll give you 5⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐, please order more [look] Are there any finished meal replacements? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
I quickly tied it up, but I couldn't get enough of it, so I looked for other articles of the same type to read, and after comparing them, this one was the most interesting.
The author's dialogue about Qiong Yaowei is so wonderful that you can even feel the sound when watching it. The characters' personalities are very relevant, and it's really what they would do.
It's so beautiful. It's my favorite among the Huanzhu fanfics. The characters' tone of voice is in line with the original character setting, and the plot transitions smoothly without any abruptness. The main thing is that it's refreshing and fun. The occasional cold humor is so interesting.
It's very interesting and interesting. The characters, language, and acting style are all great. I can't find any novels about foreign persimmons. This one is really good. The author, please use the 180 chapters of the manuscript to smash it in my face. Don't you think you are too lazy when you update it once a day? ! As long as I work as hard as I did in the college entrance examination, I will not be satisfied with it now!
I finally discovered that this author loves to give himself weekends off!
What's going on, Ann? !
The writing is really good, and the characters of the two heroines are completely highlighted. One is smart, clever, knowledgeable, and the other is dark, smart, and well-mannered. After watching the whole drama, I felt sorry for them the most. Finally, there is a good-looking fanfic. I hope the author will add more [love][love][love][love][love]
I follow it every day. It's really very good-looking. I hope it will be updated a lot. The Zhihua here is very clear-headed and knows what he wants. He doesn't have any feelings for Yongqi. After chasing so many Huanzhu fanfics, this one is still the best. Ahhhh, it will be updated a lot more [Bird Food God's Work] [Bird Food God's Work] [Bird Food God's Work]
All the subjects of fan fiction are self-advocating, so I just abandoned my brain and started immersed reading. Not to mention, the visual sense is too strong, very Qiong Yao style, so far it seems to be okay, I give it a five-star review. (The probability of finding gold is so high these days. I haven't written a book review for a long time. Hey, hey, please like and recommend)
The writing is good, the lines are very realistic, and the plot connection is not laggy! ! ! I really want to see the main characters in the third part being tortured
The characters are so consistent, I can even imagine the tone of their speech, very Qiong Yao flavor
It's not OOC, it fits the character, and the tone is not obtrusive at all. It's very natural. Sometimes when I read an article, the actor's voice will naturally appear in my mind. I guess I can catch up on the latest chapter today. Nice
It's really good to watch. The author's writing style really made me immersed in it. It's not disconnected at all from Aunt Qiong Yao's way of creating lines for the characters. Every character is very three-dimensional, and none of them are out of character. It seems like every character should speak like this. I really like Zhihua, but I'm so anxious to read two of them every day. I've already joined the team to encourage people to read more. I saved up five or six chapters a few days ago and finished them all today. It's not enough, ma'am. It's not enough [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [ Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]
After reading Tomato for so long, I couldn't help but give a review for the first time. This is the best among the Huanzhu fanfics I've ever read. Every character is very fitting, not exaggerated, not unbelievable, not just abusing people or something. All in all, it's very interesting!
I don't know why the rating is so low. If you're passing by, you can come and take a look. It's very important not to have OOC. Qiong Yanyao's spoken language is also well understood. When Xiao Yanzi speaks, I think of Huang Yi in orange-red clothes. Who knows? It's so vivid [Sending Hearts]
This only represents the feeling I had when I first started reading the first five chapters: a very awesome fanfic. I don't know the subsequent plot but I can already tell the quality. I don't know the dialogue of the characters but I thought Qiong Yao wrote it herself. It's exactly like that. I feel that this author is very good at imitating the tone and behavior of the characters of the original author, which is really good. The same goes for Lu Ping's article, which is authentic.
It's tied, and now I'm scratching my head and eagerly wanting the author to update 300 chapters a day!
Both Qing'er and Zhihua have become "black", but they are so interesting! Zhihua trains Yongqi like a dog (which is gradually taking shape), and Qing'er wants Xiao Jian to be sterilized (so far, it has not been successful). So far, the pace of the story is refreshing and not frustrating at all.
When the author describes the crazy foursome, his lines are very Qiong Yao style!
It's a very interesting fanfic. In fact, Huanzhu has always been in my long-term memory, and I haven't read all of it seriously, but I have always disliked Little Swallow. I thought it was too noisy, and when I grew up, I thought it was too pretentious. This is really interesting, and the human nature is also well grasped! It was fun to watch [laugh][laugh][laugh]
Looks good^ω^ The details are well described. I want to see Zhi Hua training a dog [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]
There is no OOC, the dialogue and even the original voice automatically play in the mind. When I was a kid, I was also a fan of the main character group. I felt that Zhihua was ruining people's emotions, but I really liked her tearful scene. It was so beautiful. Looking back now, it seems like she was the only one participating in the royal power competition, while everyone else was playing house. Qing'er, I think she is the blood bag of the protagonist group. She always tells the truth. She suffered a lot with Xiao Jian. Meeting the protagonist group is her retribution.
It's quite interesting. I like to read various stories about supporting characters becoming protagonists, regardless of whether I've read the original work or not. The CP assigned to Qing'er feels okay. It's okay for her to be happy with Zhi Hua picking up such a man. Originally I was quite willing to watch the plot, but Zhihua and Yongqi's flirting was a bit disgusting.
It's great. My blood pressure went up when the original protagonists saw them. Why didn't I notice they were so subversive before? [Petrochemical] The author's description of them is neither OOC nor deviated from Aunt Qiong Yao's way of expression. The words and tone of the characters' words can be easily imagined in the mind's mind, their movements and expressions at that time, if you don't mind the blood pressure, you can see it (this is for the original protagonist group, why didn't you think someone was so unreasonable before? It's amazing)
It's good to watch. The process of taming a scumbag is so exciting to watch. The male protagonist feels sober and addicted to the female protagonist, but he is stubborn and refuses to admit it. If he doesn't admit it, he will not have a wife to hold him. You still have to see if your wife is really you, so you can control her hard [OK]
This rare old version of Huanzhuzhihua Qing'er's fanfic also adds the plot of Hanxiang and Mengdan. The heroines are kind but not stupid and no longer live for love. Girls help girls. The writing is appropriate. The author's writing style is good and the description is very delicate. It is simply not enough.
OMG it's actually the same author who wrote Lu Ping's Rebirth. I wonder why Qiong Yao is so sophisticated in her taste and how she pokes the protagonist's heart so coolly. The rhythm of the plot is very well written. When I was a child, I was scared to death by the madness of Little Swallow. When I grew up, I saw that it was indeed crazy. The author wrote it very well, and there was no sense of deliberate darkness. All the plots happened according to the original characters [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] I support the author and hope to write something like this in the next book to relieve my anger.
Teacher, you must keep writing. The setting of twins is very novel, the plot is natural and smooth, and the writing is also good. Moreover, the character design is not broken at all, and the lines are so immersive that I stayed up late yesterday to finish watching it. Too few updates
In fact, I personally don't like fan fiction, because if it's not written well, it won't fit the original work, and it will be like a latecomer trying to forcefully change the fate of others. But I really like this book. The author thoroughly understands the characters in the original book, without being separated at all. He unconsciously substitutes the characters in the TV series, including the strategy for Yongqi. At first, I really thought it was impossible, but now that I read it, I suddenly realized that Yongqi has been trained. The whole process is not abrupt at all. In short, it is really great. Originally in Huanzhu, I was amazed by Qing'er and rushed towards Qing'er, but now I am a little impressed by Zhihua. (◍•ᴗ•◍) Also, the author, please give me your best.
This is my first time writing a book review, and I really think the author wrote it very well. I will read this kind of second creation when I am bored, but most people write stupid and cool things. The author's article is really great. It cannot be said that there is no OOC at all, but how can I avoid OOC after I have already made a second creation? The author has written very well, very Qiong Yao flavor. When watching it, I can even imagine the actor's voice. I did not substitute for the first and second parts, but the third one, because although the first and second parts are not very realistic in my eyes, they are not particularly outrageous. The third part is really hard to describe. At that time, I thought, will the flute and sword in the second part really make Qing'er chase the horse on a rainy day? Qing'er wouldn't do this either, she has dignity. I didn't like Zhihua back then, but Qin Lan is really good-looking
A kind word can warm you in three winters, but a bad word can hurt you in six months! I hope you will encourage your babies and be merciful when rating them! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] Ignoring lightning protection, malicious negative reviews, clearly stating who the male protagonist is, and asking "why not change the male protagonist", looking for "imperial power is supreme" in the fan fiction of Huanzhu, a work about love that is too great, defaulting to preventing disasters for the author for the rest of his life.
After reading the first few chapters, let's give my score first. The writing is very good, and the characters are not OOC. The Qiong Yao flavor is too strong, and the Taiwanese accent can be heard in my head [Thoughts]
It's so well written, I hope there will be more updates! I couldn't stop watching it, and I couldn't bear to watch it. In fact, I have always liked Qing'er and felt sorry for Zhihua. Before I was not married, I just thought the love between the protagonists was beautiful, but now I look at them and they are all selfish! How can Mian Yi have family ties without her father? Knowing how difficult it is to be a mother, can Qing'er be happy if she marries Xiao Jian for so-called love? Life becomes daily necessities!
I thought it looked good at first glance, but when I clicked on it, I discovered that Lu Ping's Rebirth was also written by the same author. Hahahahahaha, the author's writing style and conception are really great! ! ! ! Recommend!
A rare good book, funny and crazy, I like the scene of dog training (a good book refers to this kind of book☞🈶Original work, the author writes a story about the rebirth of a supporting character based on the characters in the original work), no OOC, and even many words look like voice notes [face covering] such as: Little Swallow, you have to be patient and patient! Mouth~ Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha not a brainless cool article, but it is very refreshing to watch and very irritating. If there is such a cheat around you, you will want to kill her directly emmm In modern society, you should stay away. . The author grasps the psychology of the protagonist group very well: Xiao Yanzi's background is actually selfish and indifferent. She enjoys privileges but pretends not to care. I like how the author has written about Xiao Yanzi's agility and sensitivity. She is very good at seeking advantages and avoiding disadvantages, and pretending to be stupid and good. Ziwei is indecisive, and she has her own standards for good and evil. I won't go into details one by one, but those who are unfamiliar with it can take a look. There are some minefields, and the author has cleared them up from the beginning. The most controversial one may be Zhihua's child. Some novels will choose to completely abandon the white-eyed wolf in the previous life, because after raising it personally, it is found that it is not good at all. What is written here is that Zhihua did not raise children in her previous life, so the children are unfilial. She will always love her children. I'll give you 5⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐, please order more [look] Are there any finished meal replacements? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
I quickly tied it up, but I couldn't get enough of it, so I looked for other articles of the same type to read, and after comparing them, this one was the most interesting. The author's dialogue about Qiong Yaowei is so wonderful that you can even feel the sound when watching it. The characters' personalities are very relevant, and it's really what they would do.
It's so beautiful. It's my favorite among the Huanzhu fanfics. The characters' tone of voice is in line with the original character setting, and the plot transitions smoothly without any abruptness. The main thing is that it's refreshing and fun. The occasional cold humor is so interesting.
It's very interesting and interesting. The characters, language, and acting style are all great. I can't find any novels about foreign persimmons. This one is really good. The author, please use the 180 chapters of the manuscript to smash it in my face. Don't you think you are too lazy when you update it once a day? ! As long as I work as hard as I did in the college entrance examination, I will not be satisfied with it now! I finally discovered that this author loves to give himself weekends off! What's going on, Ann? !
The writing is really good, and the characters of the two heroines are completely highlighted. One is smart, clever, knowledgeable, and the other is dark, smart, and well-mannered. After watching the whole drama, I felt sorry for them the most. Finally, there is a good-looking fanfic. I hope the author will add more [love][love][love][love][love]
I follow it every day. It's really very good-looking. I hope it will be updated a lot. The Zhihua here is very clear-headed and knows what he wants. He doesn't have any feelings for Yongqi. After chasing so many Huanzhu fanfics, this one is still the best. Ahhhh, it will be updated a lot more [Bird Food God's Work] [Bird Food God's Work] [Bird Food God's Work]
All the subjects of fan fiction are self-advocating, so I just abandoned my brain and started immersed reading. Not to mention, the visual sense is too strong, very Qiong Yao style, so far it seems to be okay, I give it a five-star review. (The probability of finding gold is so high these days. I haven't written a book review for a long time. Hey, hey, please like and recommend)
The writing is good, the lines are very realistic, and the plot connection is not laggy! ! ! I really want to see the main characters in the third part being tortured
The characters are so consistent, I can even imagine the tone of their speech, very Qiong Yao flavor
It's not OOC, it fits the character, and the tone is not obtrusive at all. It's very natural. Sometimes when I read an article, the actor's voice will naturally appear in my mind. I guess I can catch up on the latest chapter today. Nice
It's really good to watch. The author's writing style really made me immersed in it. It's not disconnected at all from Aunt Qiong Yao's way of creating lines for the characters. Every character is very three-dimensional, and none of them are out of character. It seems like every character should speak like this. I really like Zhihua, but I'm so anxious to read two of them every day. I've already joined the team to encourage people to read more. I saved up five or six chapters a few days ago and finished them all today. It's not enough, ma'am. It's not enough [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [ Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]
After reading Tomato for so long, I couldn't help but give a review for the first time. This is the best among the Huanzhu fanfics I've ever read. Every character is very fitting, not exaggerated, not unbelievable, not just abusing people or something. All in all, it's very interesting!
I don't know why the rating is so low. If you're passing by, you can come and take a look. It's very important not to have OOC. Qiong Yanyao's spoken language is also well understood. When Xiao Yanzi speaks, I think of Huang Yi in orange-red clothes. Who knows? It's so vivid [Sending Hearts]
This only represents the feeling I had when I first started reading the first five chapters: a very awesome fanfic. I don't know the subsequent plot but I can already tell the quality. I don't know the dialogue of the characters but I thought Qiong Yao wrote it herself. It's exactly like that. I feel that this author is very good at imitating the tone and behavior of the characters of the original author, which is really good. The same goes for Lu Ping's article, which is authentic.
It's tied, and now I'm scratching my head and eagerly wanting the author to update 300 chapters a day! Both Qing'er and Zhihua have become "black", but they are so interesting! Zhihua trains Yongqi like a dog (which is gradually taking shape), and Qing'er wants Xiao Jian to be sterilized (so far, it has not been successful). So far, the pace of the story is refreshing and not frustrating at all. When the author describes the crazy foursome, his lines are very Qiong Yao style!
It's a very interesting fanfic. In fact, Huanzhu has always been in my long-term memory, and I haven't read all of it seriously, but I have always disliked Little Swallow. I thought it was too noisy, and when I grew up, I thought it was too pretentious. This is really interesting, and the human nature is also well grasped! It was fun to watch [laugh][laugh][laugh]
Looks good^ω^ The details are well described. I want to see Zhi Hua training a dog [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]