Hand over the Evil Witch, the Country and I Will Help the Poor First

7-8.5 Points The subject matter is quite good. Maybe I wanted to write it after watching the cartoon [face covering] Anyway, the protagonist is quite flexible. Only people like this can survive in the past [Like] He can be regarded as the righteous version of Wei Xiaobao [face covering] Let's talk about the protagonist's recklessness. You have to understand the qualities of a veteran and a poverty alleviation cadre stationed in a village. Finally, I want to see a killing spree and let the kingdom burn.

After reading it for a while, I feel that the plot and reaction of the people of Dongda Time Travel are very realistic. The plot is compact and has a sense of substitution. However, please note that there are a lot of public intellectuals and colonists in the comment area who are madly angry. I just read the book review for a while and I laughed out loud.

I can feel that there are some traces of AI. Many paragraphs that have a strong AI flavor but do not affect the basic logic have been retained. However, it seems to be quite smooth overall. I probably generated a lot of paragraphs and picked the appropriate ones and revised them. At present, except for the description of the AI ​​flavor from time to time, it is still readable.

The actual target score should be 8-8.5 Points. The world setting and plot are very interesting, but the logic is a bit immature, but it is not a lightning point. If you don't consider logic and just read it as a refreshing article, it will be okay. The author should be a novice or a young person, so full marks are given for encouragement, and I hope he will write more and more maturely in the future.

The logic is smooth, and even if there are imperfections, it will not feel fragmented. Every little push and climax is very different. The writing and thinking are no nooks and crannies. There is no way of opening a harem, and it is serious about poverty alleviation and revolution. The quality is very high! Very rare

It's interesting, really good, the writing is fluent, and the emotional output is on point. I feel pulled in the back. I feel like the latest chapters describe the emotions of scientific researchers when Sony and the others came here too hard, which makes me feel that we are just treating them as tools and not treating them as real people. They were confused when they first came here, but when the author described our side, there was a sense of being too eager for success. Even based on the premise that it only took 12 hours, I think more of the plot should be described from Yan Nanxing's position. At first glance, the fanatical portrayal of scientific researchers feels like we are studying and exploiting them like new oppressors. If we want to deal with sympathy, we only describe the young female researchers crying lightly. My summary of these new chapters is that overly vigorous descriptions make the core hollow and hypocritical. What is actually described is imperialism put on the cloak of being a good person.

I saw echoes of "Let That Witch Go" in this book. If the author's writing is better, it could be surpassed. The shortcoming of Release the Witch is that the nature of society is similar to that of a presidential system and is not perfect yet, but this book makes up for this. Moreover, the author's description of systems and ideas is particularly vivid. But at the same time, the author also has many shortcomings: 1. The description of technology is not specific enough 2 The rhythm is slightly confusing 3. There are many worldview introductions with unclear meaning in the article (you can refer to The Witch for this point. The worldview is only introduced when reading historical documents. Normally character dialogues and monologues are basically not introduced). This is very important. If the author sees it, I hope to add it for reference!

Hand over the evil witch, the country and I will help the poor first Written by Quan Doujin Alien world, red, poverty alleviation, these elements are all my favorite themes, and the initial development of the plot is also quite interesting. The creation of characters also has their own characteristics. What's the problem? Maybe it was too full of emotions, but the corresponding plot couldn't match such emotions. In other words, after the beginning, where there are almost two witches, the development of the plot is a bit flat. So, 4 to 4 and a half stars.

It's a good-looking, rare novel about poverty alleviation in a different world. The protagonist is no longer a man-machine and a door-opening tool, but the main decision-maker and executor. It's good, but there are too few more.

It's well written. I found another very well written book, but Chapter 18 is a little bit toxic. I hope it can be changed. As I looked at it, I suddenly felt that I wasn't so interested anymore. Goodbye, hope you can be popular.

The score is a bit low, but if you look at the chapters, they were released in too short a time. It is a good book, and the basic setting is very attractive. It is a mainstream guide to a different world, but among so many books, the writing is very good. Then, the hole dug is relatively big, and the world background setting is very large. I don't know if it can be rounded out in the later stage. At the same time, let's talk about the shortcomings. There is no need for the character names to be related to other games or anything. It looks very dramatic. The original look and feel is good, but suddenly a rock bird and Fiona are a bit unbearable. Also, there are not many updates at present, but this is also a common problem of Tomato. Good books are always updated very rarely, and there is not enough to read.

Compared with the overflowing portals and national-level crushing national documents, the book will focus more on ideological transformation and limitation, calling on numb people to jointly resist exploitation and tyranny. Therefore, the content will be different from those in the past, with portals connecting countries. The main characters will have different content.

The writing is passable, it's not AI, the characters and so on are quite normal and logical. But I want to ask, if this book reaches the middle and later stages, will there be other novels of the same type that travel across the country? In other words, there is a character who travels to the protagonist's world.

Very interesting, the application of Marxist philosophy in a different world, As a poverty alleviation cadre, the protagonist travels to another world where the church and nobles oppress the people. The protagonist establishes a farmer's household, uses the "time and space channel" to obtain state aid, leads the people to resist oppression, and move forward step by step under the guidance of Marxism-Leninism. Very interesting book.

So far, the writing is very good. I stayed up all night and read it. I don't like reading articles that are crazy and cheat all the way. This article is neither too big nor too small, and it is just right. Some crises and some difficulties can be solved in the end.

It looks great to me now! The subject matter is excellent, and the setting is also perfect. Although there is room for improvement in terms of wording, sentence construction, and characterization (I wrote a lot of critical paragraphs while reading the book), it is not a flaw at all. I don't understand why the score is so low. Could it be that it poked someone's lung tube [note]

In the early stages of a new book, you can still pass the time and encourage the author [Read carefully] Free novels are not easy It can kill time and satisfy the desire for redemption, but there are still many details. The protagonist's many actions are risky, and many readers may not understand it. I don't know what the final score of this book will be [please take a closer look]

There are some routines at the beginning of the early chapters, but the flaws are outweighed. The middle and late chapters start to feel fun, and the settings also have certain innovations. Currently, more than 70 chapters have been updated. There are still many settings and world views to be improved. I am very optimistic about this book.

It's so good. I want to read a book of the same type as The Witch, and it's in a true red color. I love reading revolutionary classics.

The subject matter is interesting and the identity of the protagonist is also very unique. It's that the emphasis on plot conflicts and good character creation is sometimes a bit off, relying a little too much on character dialogue to push the plot, and the writing style is a bit immature. I hope it can progress more smoothly.

I think living things should be able to teleport, including people. Otherwise, how could the seeds be brought back to the other world? I hope the author can be more rigorous. I want to see the steel torrent of the motherland galloping on the land of the other world as soon as possible.

It's quite interesting. The content and subject matter are both good. However, some of the dialogues are a bit rigid and stiff. They should have been brushed by AI. The plot is quite good. Judging from the subject matter, this book is not a male-friendly novel. The pace is relatively slow. After all, the theme is developmentalism and building a home. It is impossible to stand on the top of the world as soon as Long Aotian comes in.

Even if there is a little AI description, it is not offensive. I read the latest, and I personally think it is pretty good. The current number of witches and the progress of the interaction between the two worlds, character portrayal, and plot continuation are just right. Although I would like to have more witches with different abilities, this will cause the pace to accelerate and the quality to drop. I hope the author pays attention to this part. I highly recommend this book [I learned it] [OK]

Liangcao~ You can write more about the modern situation, I want to read it. It's just that the number of words is too short now, I'll read it later if I need some fattening up. There is no distinction between priority and secondary... The witches are the ultimate highlight. In the current chapter, the witches have become marginal...

It's okay. For an old bookworm, it's quite comfortable to watch. The logic is smooth and there's nothing sinister about it.

It's interesting. The story is very realistic. The protagonist is not a big deal, but he has a kind heart, so he does things very rationally, even a little tactful, but only in this way can he get things done.

Poverty alleviation in a different world is very good. There are many difficulties and bad people, and there are many different characters. I hope the protagonist team will go well in the future. It just hasn't been fattened up yet. The author will update it more.

Why is it so small? It's not enough to read. It's the same as the other one [crying] [crying] Is this the reason why it's not that I like Lolita, but that the person I like happens to be a Lolita now? [Crying] [Crying]

It's very well written. The beginning is a bit similar to Let the Witch Go, but this one adds red thoughts, which makes it more interesting.

I feel like the characters are more fleshed out and realistic