Succubus Beta Wife Is Crying and Fierce E

It's good-looking. The characters are very novel. The teacher's writing is very good. I haven't seen such a book in a long time. (A small suggestion: the exclamation marks appear a bit too often and the emotions are a bit too strong. Some of them can be replaced with periods.) But it's really good-looking. Just a small suggestion [crazy]

It's super good-looking. I like the characters of the two protagonists very much, but Xiao Su is too straight. When will the young couple make progress? Urgent, urgent, urgent. My writing style is still a bit rough, I hope it gets better and better, please do your best [Love]

It's good, but can you add more information about how Wu chases Su? If you like someone, it's not just about seduction and words. You have to take action. You need to make the other person feel your like and love, and make the other person feel that you value them.

It's really good-looking. Xiao Wu is really a big green tea, and he can probably compete with his big daddy. But our Xiao Su is a real practitioner of ruthlessness, and he looks a bit like a cute straight man who doesn't care about oil or salt.

It's looking great so far! Come on, author, you must keep writing. This is the first time I have seen a character like Xiao Su. After seeing so many sinister and villainous protagonists, I finally have one that shines brightly (I don't mean to say anything bad about the previous one)

I feel like the Marshal is a bit... How should I put it? In many aspects, I feel that he is not suitable for his original family. His parents' three views were very upright, but they didn't seem to let Wu understand or learn those three views. Wu learned more about the emotional views from the great witch. Mr. Shen told Ya, but he didn't mean to let Wu understand, which made Wu become childish. Many of his emotional behaviors are inconsistent with the status of a marshal. I can see that the author wants to portray Wu as a very responsible marshal. He is usually fine, but when he meets Su, he feels like a child, which makes people very confused. Su Hmm... It's hard to say. Anyway, it's okay to watch, it's pretty good, the plot is very interesting It's so uncomfortable, I really want to see it

Even though the title of the book is Crying, the E can't just be Crying. You'll be a gangster if you don't do anything. I hope the protagonist's cultivation will improve quickly (I may be the person who hopes the protagonist's cultivation will improve rapidly) [face covering]

What's nice is when does it enter the emotional line?

I have to say that it suits my taste very well. It is a double-strength book. It is not an old-fashioned dog-licking story. Su Shijin's character is really to my taste. He is a bit ignorant and straight-mannered, but also very polite and old-fashioned. It is a pure swordsmanship template. Wu Ying's character is also good. Although it is a little calculating, it is not too much. Come on, author, don't stop updating.

It's a very interesting setting. I've been looking forward to [Sending Hearts] the ferocious and beautiful upright but succubus swordsman and the marshal who is steady and mature towards the people but flirts with the little succubus. They are so cute! It feels pretty good, but I see the same idea as the hot review now. There are too many exclamation marks [laughing and crying]. When I see exclamation marks, I subconsciously raise the tone of the entire sentence, but sometimes I feel that this should not be the idea of ​​​​this tune. Come on, madam.

I didn't see a story with two male protagonists. I haven't read this type of book for a while, and I don't have a suitable book. First impression, it's not as good as the ones I've seen before. I flipped through it, I read it pretty quickly, and something felt a little wrong about the dozen or so chapters. Different writing, familiar flavor, a little weird [face covering] There are many books that I can't read, but it would be great if I could read them. I can see anything, as long as I feel it. I opened the book without shouting, ah, it's a bit long, I'll read it slowly.

Published a book review after a few months (without writing guidance) Overall, I feel good about it. The subject matter is novel and makes people want to continue reading. I felt quite comfortable when we first got along with it. But there are also some points that are poisonous to me, such as the part where Wu asks Su for money, which may be his philosophy. It's also possible that he felt insecure, so he wanted Su to hand over all the money he earned. But the problem is that they have only known each other for a short time. Is this too much? What if Su wants to use the money? Has Wu ever thought about this? Wu may think that Su can ask him for it. But it can be seen from the character design that Su is very responsible and should take on the responsibility of supporting his family. In his mind, the witch is his wife, so he will not ask the witch for money. Su still has his sword to maintain later, so what should he do this time? In the early stage, Su was more like Shou, very cute. With this bonus, it also made me feel that Wu was a bit selfish. The way he got along with Su was to show weakness and then make Su compromise. Anyway, Su would listen to him no matter what. But from God's perspective, Su has just come to this world. Because of witchcraft, his money is gone and his personal freedom is gone. This really makes me feel a little uncomfortable. Obviously Wu is very rich, but he gives me the feeling that he is blindly asking Su for what he wants, but Su is also willing. The above is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it! After watching it later, I was very friendly to the protagonist. Xiao Su has a very upright outlook on life and I like it very much😍 Looking back, it's a bit shocking to me and a bit unacceptable.

I really feel that the author can let Wu make some changes, but if he can make some changes, there will be no progress in the relationship after more than 100 chapters. Su's people are well established, and the author's writing style is also very good, but I personally feel that if Wu continues to act like this, he is not worthy of Su. Sooner or later, he will be left behind by Su, and he will not even look back at him.

The relationship between the two is okay. Although Mr. Su refuses verbally, he still enjoys it sometimes. He has very upright views. Mr. Wu is also very good in this era. He has grown a lot. From the beginning to now, he is respectful and upright. I just want to say that I hope the author can write according to his own inner thoughts and not be affected! ! ! !

I like this novel very much. I feel that the author wrote it very well, especially the fighting scenes. However, I have a bit of a controllable attribute. I hope that Wu can also become an immortal in the future and be evenly matched with Su. However, this is just my idea. The author can just write according to his original idea.

It's beautiful, but even though there are over a hundred pictures, my husband still can't catch a hundred million (๑°3°๑) It's almost 200 chapters and Marshal Wu hasn't caught up with Xiao Su yet, but Xiao Su finds that his heart is moved, and he has been suppressing his feelings due to his spiritual practice, and has no intention of telling Marshal Wu.

It's very good, and it's difficult to agree with others. It's okay if I'm happy to write it. I don't understand why I still read it if I'm angry. I can't just change the book.

What on earth does the author Wu think of getting beaten up every day? When will Su become less ruthless? Is there a plot about chasing his wife? The kind of plot where the witch is tired of chasing her and Su realizes that she likes the witch and then chases her back [laughter]

One doesn't plan to fall in love, and the other doesn't know how to chase people. How long will it take for them to be together [grievance] Regarding money, Wu wants to take Xiao Su's money to protect his sweetheart, but Wu is paying for Xiao Su's food, clothing, housing and transportation. Although this operation is quite confusing at first, if Xiao Su doesn't mind, I don't mind [face covering]

Teacher, do you know that the article you wrote is very in line with my taste! ! ! ! ! It's so delicious! ! ! ! Beautiful, cold-faced, cute, long-haired (this is from the back) and powerful! Immortal product! ! ! ! ! !

Looks good, Xiao Su is so upright, I hope to pet Xiao Wu again, this will make it easier to eat [shy][shy]

I hope the author will continue writing. I really like this kind of refreshing [shy][shy][shy]. I really like the characters of Xiao Su and Wu. I also hope that they will be together soon without being hindered by how long they live. Then, I don't know if Wu Chuai Zai can achieve [admiration][admiration][admiration]! @ Number

I like the protagonists very much. I look forward to the day when the witch will be pampered by little Su Fahe. It would be best for the witch to have a child hahahaha

Shocking and delicious, but their love is a bit difficult [Thoughts]

Not bad, not bad. I like to read it. Faster and faster, author. [Send heart][Send heart]

I like it very much. I feel that both characters are very unique and the story is very attractive. I recommend reading this book.

Hmm... How should I put it? The writing style is great and the story as a whole is very logical and smooth, but the main CP's emotional line develops slowly. Finally... After more than 180 chapters, I finally have some candy. It's not easy｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡

Teacher, when will the reversal come? I want to see the reversal! ! ! 🥺🥺🥺

! ! So far, it's very good and very good-looking. The author must stick to it...!

Beautiful and beautiful😍Who knows the feeling of being strong?