My Succubus Beta Wife Is a Crybaby Powerhouse E

It's good-looking. The characters are very novel. The teacher's writing is very good. I haven't seen such a book in a long time. (A small suggestion: the exclamation marks appear a bit too often and the emotions are a bit too strong. Some of them can be replaced with periods.) But it's really good-looking. Just a small suggestion 😫

It's super good-looking. I like the characters of the two protagonists very much, but Xiao Su is too straight. When will the young couple make progress? Urgent, urgent, urgent. My writing style is still a bit rough, I hope it gets better and better, please do your best [Love]

It's really good-looking. Xiao Wu is really a big green tea, and he can probably compete with his big daddy. But our Xiao Su is a real practitioner of ruthlessness, and he looks a bit like a cute straight man who doesn't care about oil or salt.

It's good, but can you add more information about how Wu chases Su? If you like someone, it's not just about seduction and words. You have to take action. You need to make the other person feel your like and love, and make the other person feel that you value them.

The character design is very clear and the plot is also very interesting. Come on, the author. [Sending my heart] There are just some posts. When will you understand that spending money on your wife is the responsibility of the family? [Shame face] The point is not about the means, but about the reality. I think it's nothing to scold someone for cheating money for dozens of chapters. If you don't like it, don't read it. Thank you.

I feel like the Marshal is a bit... How should I put it? In many aspects, I feel that he is not suitable for his original family. His parents' three views were very upright, but they didn't seem to let Wu understand or learn those three views. Wu learned more about the emotional views from the great witch. Mr. Shen told Ya, but he didn't mean to let Wu understand, which made Wu become childish. Many of his emotional behaviors are inconsistent with the status of a marshal. I can see that the author wants to portray Wu as a very responsible marshal. He is usually fine, but when he meets Su, he feels like a child, which makes people very confused. Su Hmm... It's hard to say. Anyway, it's okay to watch, it's pretty good, the plot is very interesting It's so uncomfortable, I really want to see it

It's looking great so far! Come on, author, you must keep writing. This is the first time I have seen a character like Xiao Su. After seeing so many sinister and villainous protagonists, I finally have one that shines brightly (I don't mean to say anything bad about the previous one)

I have to say that it suits my taste very well. It is a double-strength book. It is not an old-fashioned dog-licking story. Su Shijin's character is really to my taste. He is a bit ignorant and straight-mannered, but also very polite and old-fashioned. It is a pure swordsmanship template. Wu Ying's character is also good. Although it is a little calculating, it is not too much. Come on, author, don't stop updating.

It's a very interesting setting. I've been looking forward to 💕 the ferocious and beautiful upright but succubus swordsman and the marshal who is steady and mature towards the people but flirts with the little succubus. They are so cute! It feels pretty good, but I see the same idea as the hot review now. There are too many exclamation marks 😂. When I see exclamation marks, I subconsciously raise the tone of the entire sentence, but sometimes I feel that this should not be the idea of ​​​​this tune. Come on, madam.

Even though the title of the book is Crying, the E can't just be Crying. You'll be a gangster if you don't do anything. I hope the protagonist's cultivation will improve quickly (I may be the person who hopes the protagonist's cultivation will improve rapidly) 🤦