One rainy night ten years ago, my wife left a note and left without saying goodbye. There were only a few words on the note: "I'm fed up with this life without hope."
At that time, our daughter was six years old and fast asleep. From then on, I started living as both a father and a mother.
Ten years have passed in a blink of an eye, and my daughter has grown into a graceful sixteen-year-old girl. But over time, I discovered:
She became more and more indifferent to me. "Whatever", "It's fine" and "It doesn't matter" became her mantras.
She started coming home late, and her phone was always on silent so I wouldn't see the screen.
There was an item in her bag that didn't belong to her - a men's keychain.
Her social account is set to be invisible to you and me.
This is a journey about family love, possession and redemption. Can I repair the broken father-daughter relationship? Or do you want your daughter to leave you completely?
Reader comments
Weird.
First of all, let's not talk about the plot. Guitar is always written as guitar. Is it wrong to replace it with one click after writing it?
Secondly.
Did the male protagonist get divorced because he did something wrong?
I feel that the male protagonist's sense of deservingness is a bit low and there is a bit of internal friction. For example, I didn't give my daughter a complete home and complete love.
The same goes for my daughter, who feels emotionally closer to her absent mother than her father. Maybe distance brings beauty.
What I see now is that my daughter complains about her parents' divorce and blames it on her father. She needs love, but she blames her father, so she doesn't get close to him. And my father also thought he was wrong.
But in our country, when the child is still young and the child is divorced, the child is generally awarded to the mother. Those who follow the father are usually given up by the mother after negotiation. Moreover, if the man is unilaterally at fault, it is impossible to award the crime to the man. . .
The impression given to me by the male protagonist is that he has a bit of low self-esteem and is negative. He was greatly hurt in a love affair, unable to recover, and lost the motivation to actively change his life. Otherwise, it would be difficult to explain why the relationship between father and daughter is still the same after 10 years.
My daughter gives me the feeling that she is not inferior when she is close to her, but she resents her when she is far away. She is not a very good character.
At last.
What kind of story does the author want to write?
Some descriptions in the article may be a bit strange from my perspective. The description of my daughter's smell and figure was a bit inappropriate. It often makes me digress to "Do you know what filial piety is?"
If you just want to write about an adolescent daughter and an old father. I think old fathers also need to be loved before they can love their children. The theme of the story should also change to teaching your daughter to go her own way, rather than just being a companion to show that she cares about you. Otherwise, this old father would be too powerless. It's so strange that you don't write about your daughter to support her helpless old father.
I want to see a capable old father and a rebellious daughter, or an incompetent old father and a sensible daughter.
Weird. First of all, let's not talk about the plot. Guitar is always written as guitar. Is it wrong to replace it with one click after writing it? Secondly. Did the male protagonist get divorced because he did something wrong? I feel that the male protagonist's sense of deservingness is a bit low and there is a bit of internal friction. For example, I didn't give my daughter a complete home and complete love. The same goes for my daughter, who feels emotionally closer to her absent mother than her father. Maybe distance brings beauty. What I see now is that my daughter complains about her parents' divorce and blames it on her father. She needs love, but she blames her father, so she doesn't get close to him. And my father also thought he was wrong. But in our country, when the child is still young and the child is divorced, the child is generally awarded to the mother. Those who follow the father are usually given up by the mother after negotiation. Moreover, if the man is unilaterally at fault, it is impossible to award the crime to the man. . . The impression given to me by the male protagonist is that he has a bit of low self-esteem and is negative. He was greatly hurt in a love affair, unable to recover, and lost the motivation to actively change his life. Otherwise, it would be difficult to explain why the relationship between father and daughter is still the same after 10 years. My daughter gives me the feeling that she is not inferior when she is close to her, but she resents her when she is far away. She is not a very good character. At last. What kind of story does the author want to write? Some descriptions in the article may be a bit strange from my perspective. The description of my daughter's smell and figure was a bit inappropriate. It often makes me digress to "Do you know what filial piety is?" If you just want to write about an adolescent daughter and an old father. I think old fathers also need to be loved before they can love their children. The theme of the story should also change to teaching your daughter to go her own way, rather than just being a companion to show that she cares about you. Otherwise, this old father would be too powerless. It's so strange that you don't write about your daughter to support her helpless old father. I want to see a capable old father and a rebellious daughter, or an incompetent old father and a sensible daughter.