Warhammer******************

It's beautiful, and it's among the top three Warhammer novels I've read. The hammer flavor isn't that strong, but why are you reading something so dark when you've already read it as a fan? It's quite fun. Old Man Huang is no longer so naughty. The brotherhood between the Primarchs is well written and I feel happy about it.

It's very interesting. It's basically in line with the original work, and the rhythm is pretty good. The protagonist temporarily plays the role of Miao Miao's gadget, but there is no special tool person. He is flesh and blood. This setting is quite good. The golden fingers appear within a reasonable range, not too many. I look forward to the follow-up.

Yes, it's worth looking forward to. I'm sure Abaddon will be punished by Baldhead and the Blood Angels will be very happy to see the real Horus [smile][smile][smile]

I've been reading it for a while, but it doesn't have an AI flavor, and it's not too OOC to be uncomfortable to read. Secondly, although some of the content is funny, it's to the point. Many of the articles are too comedic and uncomfortable to watch. The content also follows the main content, and doesn't get carried away by side plots and get sidetracked.

A 40K story about the coming of hope. The author has written it very well, and at first glance, you can tell that he has actually read the original work. The words and some small supplements are also very friendly to Yunzhui like me. The key is that I like to see a loving father and a filial son, and I like to see brothers and sisters respectful. The protagonist also has the character of a high-dimensional descendant, but he is not proud of the Warhammer world. Slowly looking down, I like it very much. The most important thing is that there is no messy relationship between men and women, hahaha. This is one of the things I pay more attention to when reading the article. They have all traveled through Warhammer. The Primarch and the Emperor are the must-try places in time travel (no), and the Golden Throne is the must-see attraction. Now it is connected to the talker, haha. As the emperor, I strongly recommend that he and all mankind can have a bright future [laughing] Come on, the author, I suggest you be more loyal to the emperor at 13 a day, otherwise you can wait for time travel hahahahahahaha

It's really nice, the Warmaster's character is not OOC at all, and I praise the Emperor

I am Yun, but I can tell that the author has read a lot of gw books. The chat between the protagonist and Horus is also very interesting. I think it is well written [like] The plot is smooth and I can feel the charm of the Warmaster. I look forward to what kind of 40K the author will describe.

It can be regarded as one of the best 40k fanfics I have read on 🍅 so far. It is not AI. The author has read the original novel, and he also got my favorite original body, Lao He! In order to compensate for the psychological trauma of being forced to hold arrows or guarding the broken watch before, I must immediately score five stars!

Praise the Emperor, it's a pretty good plot. At least your plan is really feasible, rather than just some whimsical idea of ​​grabbing a ship and flying directly to Terra.

It's a very good book. It's based on the setting of GW. It doesn't have too many problems with Yunzhui. In terms of writing style, the language is refined, the rhythm is tight, the characters are vivid and profound, the narrative has no faults, and the plot is interesting and humorous. The author is a veteran, and I hope it won't end more poorly. Add more, you can't see enough

So far, the author's writing is very good. Keep in mind that the author has read a lot of original novels, and there are many Easter eggs to interact with. I guess the author has also been involved in Water Hammer. If this Warhammer fan wants to have such a grand background without a little knowledge, it cannot support it. The author is fine at the moment. After reading a hundred chapters, can the author bring this novel to life [Like][Like][Like][Like]

Very good writing, much better than AI writing 😋.

It's really great. Just keep updating and write more Warhammer and Primarch memes, similar to space comedies. [Like] Don't stop updating. Really write more Warhammer 2.

He's not the kind of war commander who suppresses Old Man Huang every day. This is the first time I saw a normal bald head (most of them are like gods even if they don't become demons) Anyway, it looks good [like]

I'll go, I'll go, it's really good to watch, brothers, you can watch it and it's very interesting. It can be seen that the author has paid attention to many key parts and the writing is very exciting, especially the part about Horus and Abaddon, I'll go, I'll go!

My good friend, please update soon. I already have great curiosity and expectations for this novel. I understand that the various settings and stories of Warhammer are basically derived from the videos and content described and explained by major authors. So I don't know that much about the plot in the original novel. For example, I don't know much about who is under each of my subordinates. I know more about the people in it, so it can be said that I know it from your novel, so you must write well, my good buddy.

I really like the author's novel. Although it is a cool novel, the characters are very rich. The character of the protagonist is very charming. As a time traveler, he comes from a high-latitude narrative level. Not only does he not think of himself as superior to others and show off his power because of his big hook, but he is also neither humble nor overbearing when getting along with the original characters (for example, Horus and Guilliman). He talks appropriately and humorously, and treats each other as equals and communicates like friends. As a reader, it is always a pleasure to see the protagonist chatting with the Primarchs. In addition, the author's portrayal of other characters is also very good, such as Horus. Most other fans have ridiculed or satirical descriptions of him, but the author shows the true style of the Warmaster in the original work. In the author's writing, Horus is considerate to his brothers but also charismatic, frank and upright yet funny. Just like the original work, people can't help but be impressed by him. In this regard, I am very grateful to the author. After all, the death of the Warmaster in the original work is a tragedy in itself. Of course, the author is also very good at describing the plot. Among them, my favorite is the plot of Guilliman's return and the collapse of the empire after knowing that it is half-dead. This episode is heartbreaking and moving. Let readers see that at this moment Guilliman is no longer the brave primarch or the noble regent, but just a child who is about to die under the heavy responsibility on his shoulders. The author's description of the personality changes of the Primarchs is also natural and detailed, which is rare. After all, few authors can carefully figure out the character characteristics and analyze the deep meaning and background of the characters like this. Praise the author! At the same time, I look forward to the author's subsequent plot development, come on! [Blowing kiss]

Marvelous! My Warmaster [like], when I think of the expressions of the other Primarchs when they see the resurrected Horus, I get so high!

It's very beautiful, and the main character keeps shouting "my wolf god", which is so doting. ੧ᐛ੭ Give back my forbidden army man and woman [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] Give back my forbidden army man and woman [angry] [angry] [angry] Give back my forbidden army man and woman [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] Give back my forbidden army man and woman [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry]

Brother, you must keep writing well and don't leave it unfinished or interrupted. It's not easy to see such good Warhammer articles.

The clean flow in Warhammer, although I always feel that the Emperor part and the writing are a bit poisonous, but the flaws are not hidden, the logic can close the loop, and it is interesting. As for the Hammer flavor, I have come to read the fan fiction. If it is still written according to the original cesspit of the universe, what is it called fan fiction? Fan fiction is based on the original pursuit of freshness. Based on the above points I think this is a good book.

The description of Horus is perfect and the story does not drag on. If this level is maintained, it should be a very good book.

This is the true meaning of the Warmaster, For The Warmast, For lupercar!

It's a very interesting Warhammer novel, and I see hope. But the author said that it is almost finished, so the book is only about 600,000 words. It is quite short, and many of the plots of the original body have not been written. There are still 100,000 words, about thirty or forty chapters, which is too short. The author has also started to stop updating in the past two days. The next few chapters are also a bit urgent, and the plot of Xiulun, the king of timely rain, has basically not been written. I'm still thinking about when the other ones will appear. Russ has been talked about for so long, and he can have some fun when he comes out. There are also the returns of Uncle Black, Crow King, Stone, Khan and even Perturabo. There are also stories about various races, including green skins, ribs, and elves. The short plot is still a bit unfinished.

This book is really good, and it is very enjoyable to read. It is one of the few novels that I can follow. Even though I don't know much about Yun Warhammer, I still have a lot of fun watching it. The book friend comments in the book also include supplementary settings and Warhammer jokes, and the atmosphere is very good. Some people also say that it was written by AI, but I didn't feel it. Of course, there are some minor problems, such as the detail processing problems in the first few pictures, but it goes over quickly and goes straight to the main line. If you are interested in Warhammer, this is a good novel, but overall quite loose. And the biggest Abaddon joke, Stone Dorne is everywhere, even Russ

It's rare to find such a good piece of writing on Tomato. The system almost persuaded me to quit at first, but I persisted. It's rare to see such a plump war commander. Many other works are too Electra.

Great, needless to say, a very favorite Warhammer novel. I read this book as Yun Zhui and enjoyed reading it. The plot is very general and the logic is very clear. The character description is also very good. There is no plot about stepping on the emperor. The emperor is a yellow-skinned man similar to a talking machine. I really like it. I always like it😋, but it has no cp (you can steal the family property😋) and the protagonist has no interest in love. However, Huang Pizi has been trying to match the protagonist and I really can't do it🌚. The only drawback is that there are too few wives, which is not enough to watch😭😭😭

You can refer to a book at a certain point next door. Although in that (later) book there is a thing that is comparable to the Star God, and two things that are comparable to the Emperor. One is the Imperial Brain (Guilliman type), which perfectly united the Eldar and the Necrons, smashed the Tyranid minions, and stabilized the throne (direct stud overdraft power) , while running towards the Black King, helping humanity as much as possible, and then waiting for the webway, waiting for himself to be killed), he also burned the Garden of Nurgle, robbed the Library of Tzeentch, and established a complete, systematic, integrated political, military, psychic, subspace system and a complete subspace, psychic, god, and alien system. Knowledge [laughing evilly] I think it can be used as a reference to bring back the hopeless universe little by little. After all, there is Karen's Mickey Mouse House. [Laughing evilly] A little pinch can always establish a subspace safe zone, a communication stabilizer, stabilize the subspace routes, and long-distance communication, and military forces can be organized immediately. And it can improve governance, improve people's livelihood, and prevent humans from turning to Chaos out of despair (after all, a regime that can really protect you, let you live well, and popularize the basic knowledge of subspace is definitely more attractive than Chaos, but you need a god who can move and respond to faith, and Sanguinius is good)

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It's good to watch. Someone made an audio video on site B. I listened to it for nine hours without realizing it. It's really well written and interesting. It's not OOC and not too rigid. The plot is very logical. Good reviews.