[Exotic Beast Style, the protagonist does not transform, there is no heroine, and there is no Virgin]
Lin Yu died suddenly due to overtime and was reborn as an anaconda cub. How did he survive in the crisis-ridden Amazon rainforest when he was less than 30 centimeters old? Fortunately, he awakened the system and could choose his evolutionary path as long as he swallowed food:
[Route I: Gigantization—strengthening body size and strength. Next stage: Muscle density strengthening]
[Route II: Poison Gland—Evolve the venom system. Next Stage: Neurotoxin Glands]
[Route III: Stealth - Optimize concealment and perception. Next stage: environmental mimicry scales]
Choice? I want them all
Many years later, humans discovered traces of giant beasts that were tens of meters long deep in the rainforest.
Reader comments
Anacondas are not that small, right?
What about holding your breath while diving?
Are anacondas born to dive?
The anaconda is destined to live in the muddy water of swamps most of the time due to its size!
It is reasonable for you to write that some snakes hate water!
Only the anaconda is unreasonable, because the anaconda basically spends its whole life in or near water!
Advantages: From the perspective of alien beasts, there is no incident of being discovered by humans at the beginning, the protagonist is well developed and does not do anything strange.
Disadvantages: The writing is very detailed and a bit watery, but it's not a big problem.
Summary: An excellent novel about strange beasts
The current pace is moderate, the writing is smooth, and overall there seems to be no major problems, and there are no sudden illnesses. What is the character/snake design of the protagonist? It's not bad. I don't know what the follow-up will be. I'm looking forward to the protagonist's journey after breaking through the meter level, and how to explore the direction of discovering human beings.
It's a good novel, but it has a slight flaw, that is, the pace is a bit too slow. This is probably the slowest of all the alien beast novels I've read. Normally, by this time, the protagonist should have mastered several relatively powerful skills, or already started to interact with humans.
Of course, I don't mean that you have to contact humans. I am very annoyed by the kind of alien beast novels where people insist on becoming humans even though they have turned into various monsters or alien beasts. If you are so obsessed with becoming humans, then why don't you write about alien beasts from the beginning. So, author, don't be like those people when a protagonist suddenly feels the need to return to human beings.
As for the rhythm issue, as long as the writing is good, it doesn't matter if it is slower. If it is written at this pace, the book will at least start with a million words. I am afraid that the author will suddenly give up by then. After all, there is not much that can be finished in the alien beast novel.
Well written and feels very professional
I read it again. The previous article showed the protagonist biting the prey. Do the cubs have teeth? And what follows is all about swallowing prey. Did the anaconda have teeth at the beginning? It's not like I haven't watched popular science videos. Although I've only seen one popular science video about anacondas, they don't have teeth at all in their childhood.
Auv, unexpectedly, is relatively rigorous. So far, I don't think there are any big problems, and the logic is relatively smooth. It's not bad. It feels like it can reach a level of about nine points. Unfortunately, it was discovered early. Come on, author [Like][Like][Like]
There are some minor flaws in some places, but they are worth a look.
Well written, please keep updating.
It is a kind of realistic story. It mainly tells the story of the growth of a time-traveling snake. It is about growth. There are no direct elements such as superpowers at the moment. The protagonist is an ordinary system that can help him grow up. The writing is okay.
Speaking of this style of writing and the story, I have a sense of déjà vu. Have you, the author, written a novel of the same type in which you are reincarnated into an ancient saber-toothed tiger?
It's okay, it's pretty good, but it's equipped with AI. I also know that AI can help a lot with modifications, but it's also prone to repeated words, but it's okay, come on⛽
So pretty, so pretty
Not bad, evolutionary text
It feels good, a little bit redundant
Overall, it's okay. There's nothing major wrong with it. It's just that there are some errors in the data, which affects the perception. I hope it can be corrected.
The author's wording is rigorous, and I can't find any big complaints for the time being. And judging from the wording, the author still has some knowledge about biology.
Okay, the writing is pretty good, there are no weird surprises, the development and growth are ordinary, it's worth watching to catch fish at work.
Four stars support it
A little stressful, but okay.
It's okay, author, please do your best.
Okay, keep going. Comparing it with other articles, I think it's good.
Come on, I suggest you divide the period paragraphs into different layers so that readers can feel better.
Rebirth Furui: My animal design is Anaconda [smile][smile][smile]
Very comfortable to watch. It's just that the update speed is a bit anxious [face covering] I want to send some souvenirs to the author
I recommend reading it to old bookworms. Apart from the small number of words, there are no other problems.
Very real, very slow and detailed, I like you very much
It's not bad, it's written very carefully, and it's a pretty alien beast flow, but I don't know what will happen next.
It feels okay, but the segmentation is a bit uncomfortable.
I really love reading this daily writing. If you look at my homepage, you can be considered a bookworm ~ Trust me ~
Anacondas are not that small, right? What about holding your breath while diving? Are anacondas born to dive? The anaconda is destined to live in the muddy water of swamps most of the time due to its size! It is reasonable for you to write that some snakes hate water! Only the anaconda is unreasonable, because the anaconda basically spends its whole life in or near water!
Advantages: From the perspective of alien beasts, there is no incident of being discovered by humans at the beginning, the protagonist is well developed and does not do anything strange. Disadvantages: The writing is very detailed and a bit watery, but it's not a big problem. Summary: An excellent novel about strange beasts
The current pace is moderate, the writing is smooth, and overall there seems to be no major problems, and there are no sudden illnesses. What is the character/snake design of the protagonist? It's not bad. I don't know what the follow-up will be. I'm looking forward to the protagonist's journey after breaking through the meter level, and how to explore the direction of discovering human beings.
It's a good novel, but it has a slight flaw, that is, the pace is a bit too slow. This is probably the slowest of all the alien beast novels I've read. Normally, by this time, the protagonist should have mastered several relatively powerful skills, or already started to interact with humans. Of course, I don't mean that you have to contact humans. I am very annoyed by the kind of alien beast novels where people insist on becoming humans even though they have turned into various monsters or alien beasts. If you are so obsessed with becoming humans, then why don't you write about alien beasts from the beginning. So, author, don't be like those people when a protagonist suddenly feels the need to return to human beings. As for the rhythm issue, as long as the writing is good, it doesn't matter if it is slower. If it is written at this pace, the book will at least start with a million words. I am afraid that the author will suddenly give up by then. After all, there is not much that can be finished in the alien beast novel.
Well written and feels very professional I read it again. The previous article showed the protagonist biting the prey. Do the cubs have teeth? And what follows is all about swallowing prey. Did the anaconda have teeth at the beginning? It's not like I haven't watched popular science videos. Although I've only seen one popular science video about anacondas, they don't have teeth at all in their childhood.
Auv, unexpectedly, is relatively rigorous. So far, I don't think there are any big problems, and the logic is relatively smooth. It's not bad. It feels like it can reach a level of about nine points. Unfortunately, it was discovered early. Come on, author [Like][Like][Like] There are some minor flaws in some places, but they are worth a look.
Well written, please keep updating.
It is a kind of realistic story. It mainly tells the story of the growth of a time-traveling snake. It is about growth. There are no direct elements such as superpowers at the moment. The protagonist is an ordinary system that can help him grow up. The writing is okay. Speaking of this style of writing and the story, I have a sense of déjà vu. Have you, the author, written a novel of the same type in which you are reincarnated into an ancient saber-toothed tiger?
It's okay, it's pretty good, but it's equipped with AI. I also know that AI can help a lot with modifications, but it's also prone to repeated words, but it's okay, come on⛽
So pretty, so pretty
Not bad, evolutionary text
It feels good, a little bit redundant
Overall, it's okay. There's nothing major wrong with it. It's just that there are some errors in the data, which affects the perception. I hope it can be corrected.
The author's wording is rigorous, and I can't find any big complaints for the time being. And judging from the wording, the author still has some knowledge about biology.
Okay, the writing is pretty good, there are no weird surprises, the development and growth are ordinary, it's worth watching to catch fish at work.
Four stars support it
A little stressful, but okay.
It's okay, author, please do your best.
Okay, keep going. Comparing it with other articles, I think it's good.
Come on, I suggest you divide the period paragraphs into different layers so that readers can feel better.
Rebirth Furui: My animal design is Anaconda [smile][smile][smile]
Very comfortable to watch. It's just that the update speed is a bit anxious [face covering] I want to send some souvenirs to the author
I recommend reading it to old bookworms. Apart from the small number of words, there are no other problems.
Very real, very slow and detailed, I like you very much
It's not bad, it's written very carefully, and it's a pretty alien beast flow, but I don't know what will happen next.
It feels okay, but the segmentation is a bit uncomfortable.
I really love reading this daily writing. If you look at my homepage, you can be considered a bookworm ~ Trust me ~