Pirate: the More Children I Have, the Harder My Fist Will Be!

Remarkable. MC: This is not a brainless stallion novel. Each heroine has an emotional line and the characters are fleshed out. The strength is gradually improved, which is a bit slow, but reaching the top step by step, rather than climbing to the top in one step, makes me more interested in watching it; Disadvantages: There are too many setbacks, and the feeling is not enough. The broken hand of the second heroine is also very poisonous, and there are some other poisonous points that I won't mention.

The content is well written. The combat power slowly increases from low to high. I hope the combat power will not collapse in the later period. I would like the author to read the original work and use his wild imagination. There are characters in the original work and a little more wild imagination. In fact, this series of One Piece is mainly about combat power. My personal opinion is that Joey Boy should be the strongest, followed by Im, Davy Jones, and Rocks should be on the same level, followed by Garp and Roger Whitebeard. Personally, I feel that the protagonist acquires the body of a furry monster plus a moon lion. The moon lion ability can be written as the same as the aunt's narcosis. If she transforms into a moon lion, it will be difficult to do this later. It's like if you reveal yourself to see a corner of the future, it should be vague, but it shouldn't be so accurate, just like the mermaid Mrs. Charlie uses a crystal ball to see a corner of the future. You can write more, but you can't explain the plot.

Chapter 52: The Broken Hand persuaded many people to quit, but I haven't picked up the story yet. The latest chapter is about telling the protagonist that he is very powerful and can defeat all kinds of magic. It also creates a vicious point where the villain pretends to be the protagonist and does bad things, and others misunderstand the protagonist. However, the protagonist has many children and many blessings. There are also many laughs similar to the original novel. The content is all original. It is recommended for casual reading.

After reading it, support it by giving it a five-star rating. Those who haven't read much of the original work can also read it. This is not a bomb-hitting novel, nor is it mindless. The emotional lines of the characters are also well written. I was a little frustrated in the early stage and look forward to the development of Wan Guo and his wife and children in the later stage. Come on [laughs]

I came across this book twice on the recommendation page. I thought Stallion was stupid when I looked at the cover and title. I didn't expect the characters to be well-drawn and flesh-and-blood. It's a bit rough. [Adoration] I like it very much, but it's too seedy. The author needs more updates soon.

I was attracted by the title of this book. I read the reviews for a long time and read dozens of chapters. I just couldn't bear it and wanted to review it. First of all, I saw a lot of negative reviews saying that there was something wrong with the protagonist. Well, in my opinion, there is indeed something wrong with the protagonist. The first thing is that it is a bit of a jerk because the description of the inner activities made me feel it. I think there are some inner descriptions of human ethics that we know ourselves and there is no need to write them. When written like this, it always feels like the protagonist is born. , For example, when Tris's parents died, people's inner thoughts were that her parents had just died and they felt it was not appropriate for them to have children. In fact, I feel that it would be better to change to some words or daily chats that care about the heroine. Also, after her parents died, the protagonist did not go to help when they were not dead. I just watched it while I was busy. Alas, I really felt that I didn't deserve it. Mia's many inner thoughts and purposes were too strong, which made me think that the protagonist was a wretched bastard and born. However, in addition to the protagonist himself being portrayed as dark, wretched, and born, this book is mainly about reality and The shaping of the inner activities makes you feel like this. If you only look at the realistic actions, the protagonist is honest and harmonious. He should be ruthless and always strive to become stronger. It is very attractive, but after adding the inner activities, it feels unbearable, but this book is still very good. It's watchable and quite novel. For the time being, the heroine has seen that both of them are original works by the author. The author's technique is quite good and the emotional descriptions are quite novel. The tsundere Mia and the sinister Tris are both very good. Come on, let's see if it's good later. If it's good, I'll add one star.

The writing is quite good. It belongs to the genre that I prefer to read. It has some poisonous points but it doesn't have much impact. I didn't give it 5 stars because of Nika. It's not that Nika isn't strong enough. It's just that I don't like the setting of Nika, which is full of crazy laughter and has a fatalistic feel.

It's so interesting. The author is really a genius for thinking of this. I thought it was a simple system of having more children and more blessings, but I didn't expect that it also involves universities and primary schools. I heard that other authors update 10 times a day, so don't say it's not possible [laughs]

I have read Chapter 10 so far. The plot is too explosive, but I plan to continue reading. The author's writing is not bad [laughing and crying] There's something wrong with you, author. The first heroine is a villain, and the second heroine lost her hand before they got together. Why don't you go see a psychiatrist...

It looks good, maybe it suits my taste. Some of the emotional lines have never been seen in other pirate novels. It is more novel and fresh. The characters are not out of the ordinary, whether they are original or the original characters. Moreover, the protagonist now has Nika and three-color domineering. I am looking forward to being invincible after having many children. Son, after all, the version has been updated to the Age of Gods, and the protagonist limit is the highest. I just don't know if he will be involved in Rocks' matter. After all, Lingling already has one, and she only needs to have a child to become invincible. Let's see how the author writes it. There is a possibility of a breakdown in the plot of combat power. I hope it can be created.

Top grade! There is time and space, and the world construction has depth. The narrative is smooth and there are no flashbacks or random storyboarding. Although it's a bit tedious to accept people, there is tension in accepting cranes. I give it three to four stars, and full marks are considered an encouragement. After all, it is really not easy to find gold in manure.

As many children bring many blessings, I thought that the author would choose a strange race to be the first mother. I also thought about the small human race. But I think it is more like the mermaid, which has the property of having multiple babies and bursting the population. Since the new book, the author will definitely cherish the feathers and not be with people, otherwise the fun will be gone.

It seems pretty good so far, but it's better to be more restrained in the number of subsequent female protagonists. There are quite a lot of them now. I can't imagine how many children the protagonist will have in the later stages of this book. It makes my scalp numb just thinking about it. With Lingling in hand, there is no need to care too much about the other little villains.

It's very interesting, and I can see that the writing is very thoughtful. However, there is still a lot of room for improvement in the writing style. It has gone beyond the limitations of stallion writing, and I can feel that the author has written the protagonist closer to reality. However, after reading the first 100 chapters, there are still big flaws in the writing style. I hope to continue to improve and get better and better. The story is told very well.

To be honest, this book is really good, but I feel that it may contain 10% to 15% water. It is not very watery, but the food is definitely there, but to be honest, both the description of emotions and the setting of the plot are quite delicate. This book is definitely worth 9 points on Tomato. It is quite good, very good, you can read it.

It's nice and logical. I hope the writing will get better and better in the future. I've read Chapter 30, but I still don't feel what the protagonist's character is like. Is he a careerist or a kind-hearted person who never gives up by any means necessary? I feel like his character keeps changing.

It's better than expected. The rating is only 6.2, Which is not right. It's at least 8.5. It's too much to sail with a pregnant woman. I thought it was like the golden boy showing mercy everywhere, and it's useless to give you more children and more blessings. It's better to collect beauties instead.

It's a very good book. The logical thinking is more in line with the conditions of ordinary people's life at the beginning. It's not too unreasonable. I've caught up with the latest chapter. Come on 💪💪💪Author

This book is considered to be the best one in One Piece that has many children and many blessings. The description of the emotional lines in this book is more reasonable and the characters' behaviors are more realistic. The other books I read were much better. Of course, the progress of the protagonist's strength is much slower than others. Because the emotional line is pretty good, I can accept the slow progress, but it's hard for other viewers. Come on, author! [Blowing kiss]

Come on, I think it's well written. It was okay in the early stage, and I got my first island account.

Very nice, very nice. Whitebeard doesn't know if he has any older sisters. Married his sister, who poached him. Whitebeard longs for his family so much, it must be because he doesn't have his original family.

What the author writes is quite real, I can only say that it is very immersive [laughter]

Not bad, just too little

The author is so classy, ​​please continue to update me [adoration][adoration][adoration]

Overall, it looks pretty good. Why is the rating so low?

Not bad, the writing is also quite detailed and has emotional progression. It's better than expected.

It's very creative. This kind of novel where you can't guess the plot is acceptable even if there are some minor problems.

Tomato is a rare and good article about pirates, and it is also unique in terms of having many children and many blessings.

I don't understand why this book has such a low rating, it's very well written.

Very good, abstract is abstract, but the content is good