Zhan Shen: He Was Clearly Supposed to Be the Villain but Became Bai Yueguang

Wow, it's really delicious. It doesn't matter if you haven't watched God of Destruction. The plot is smooth, and it can be seen that the author is well versed in the development of the plot, and the writing is also very good. A lot of the development with the small contacts is forced love (what), but I just like this kind of love that may make you look bad in the early stage (although you can't beat it at all), but after training, it is obvious that you don't care about it, but you still have to deny your feelings. The heroine is very strong and is a person who enjoys evil. She seemed to be obedient when she was with Zhou Ping in the early stage, but since liberating her nature and releasing herself has become more interesting, An Crucian carp and the heroine are simply two good "masters and apprentices" who resonate at the same frequency. Although the relationship is still messy if it can't be cleaned up, after all, we are friends? He is a dank male ghost, but he is a puppy who is always available to the heroine and is secretly jealous and punishes other people who bully the heroine... I really hope to see the plot in the later stage when Zhou Ping learns that his girlfriend is not dead, and Lin Qiye's emotional change after "having been in love for a long time". The rest depends on the author's arrangements. Come more, come more, just a few... All in is the best. Our sisters will not be stingy in giving emotional comfort and emotional experience to good dogs. Someone in the comment area said that it is delicious to accept two extra sandwiches. Shura Field Modo Modo, it looks good and I love to eat it. I want to see the ending🥰

It's super, super, super good-looking. This is the most naturally emotional Zhanshen fanfic I've ever read. The heroine walks easily among the male protagonists. I like Xiaoyu and the heroine the most. They get along so sweetly! ! ! ! ! ! Like like like ヾ(*ΦωΦ)ツ Very good-looking, Meibao is just a joke to everyone, but in fact, it is different for Zhou Ping. She is worthy of being the main palace. She likes Meibao and Xiaoyu the most. Alas, in fact, what she wants from the beginning to the end is someone who can always firmly choose her, someone who will put her first.

Since I have read the latest chapter of this book, I will briefly comment on it. One thing that I am more concerned about is that the author's writing style is too immature. I don't know if it's because I was too anxious when writing or for some other reason. Sometimes there is a reason for using too much force, which makes the originally reasonable plot feel stiff and confusing to the readers. It feels too harsh to say this. Let me give you an example. The atmosphere designed by the author for Zhou Ping and the heroine was quite good at the beginning. I decided to continue reading after reading two chapters. However, when the behavior of the heroine began to change subtly later, I found that something was not quite right. The author deliberately created the heroine to be a The image of a mature woman seems to cater to the characteristics of the characters in the original work who like mature older sisters. The author is eager to establish the image of the heroine. The main manifestations include making the heroine often say "good boy", "good boy" and "really disobedient". This is very strange. Do normal people talk about these things? If this were the case, of course it could be attributed to a common mistake made by novices. It was not unusual, and far from being strange. But then the direction of the heroine's portrayal changed again. The main direction was probably to pretend to be a fun person. The most commonly used one is the tilde, and the often teasing tone is not good for people. Although we know what the heroine's character is, we still feel that the heroine's behavior is very stiff. Finally, I want to say why I keep reading, because sometimes the emotions created by the author are very good and touch people's hearts. Maybe it's just one sentence, maybe it's just three or two lines. In short, I stayed because of that little ethereal emotion. In short, I would like to give some suggestions to the author. Although I know that the heroine changes her personality for some reasons, the sudden change will make people very uncomfortable. You can add a transitional plot in the middle. By the way, explain why the heroine becomes like that and why her emotions change. Such things are not suitable for foreshadowing, and explain the heroine's personality. The main story is also too late. Readers who read it in the early stage accepted the setting of the evil girl and continued reading. If you think about it, you will be a whole-hearted evil girl. However, the tragic plot of the heroine's childhood is too late, so it will not retain a large number of readers who feel sorry for the heroine. On the contrary, it will lose a group of readers who like to watch pure evil girls. Of course, the above are all my personal opinions. I couldn't help but write this review because I have too complicated emotions about this book. I don't intend to have any negative emotions. I hope this review will not give the author or readers a bad mood. If you are unhappy after reading it, please don't scold me.

This book has also been reviewed directly, it is very outstanding, finally it is not the kind of story where the heroine revolves around them and acts as a nanny for them. Highlights: The heroine is strong. Not restricted by others, will not join the protagonist group, follow the plot, and have his own ideas And on the other hand, I have to eat it quickly, 071/🐟/🐰/🎍, currently there are four of them, the emotional description is really delicious😋, looking forward to Shura Field

If you can't accept the split, don't read it. It's mentioned in the introduction that Jialan is now regarded as a key supporting character and has a good relationship with the heroine. This article still focuses on the female protagonist. The heroine has divinity and lacks humanity, but she also has human emotions. She can also feel joy, anger, sorrow, and joy. She can face her own desires. She has a strong sense of deservingness. She has a heroic competition, a Shura field, etc. The heroine is a bright and beautiful heroine. She has no mother-in-law. She will put herself first in everything she does. She will not join the Ancient God Church or other things just because she will become hostile to the male protagonists. Looking forward to Zhou Ping and Bai Yueguang's lethality,

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This book is really delicious. The author writes a lot about it. I love reading it.

I like this. The protagonist has the same sense of guilt as the villain, but he is not as brainless as the villain. Especially the protagonist is fooled around. I like it very much. I like it very much. ٩(♡㉨♡)۶

Unexpectedly, I thought it was quite good-looking [laughing and crying] It was different from what I expected [laughing and crying] Although I skipped through it ~ it wasn't very long, so I went through the general plot ~ and each couple was quite enjoyable [laughing and cried] The heroine is also very interesting! The evil Big Brother has harmed many people, but he doesn't find it annoying [laughing and crying] [like]

It's so good, my family. The author of this novel is simply divine. This is the first time I saw this kind of character of the heroine written by the author in the Zhanshen fanfic. It's so delicious, it's almost ദ്ദി˶•̀֊<)✧

It's nice to look at, but it's a pity that the heroine is not the strongest. It feels so bad to be suppressed. Are there any male cleaners?

Very interesting, cool article

The content is quite interesting and novel, and the heroine is uniquely beautiful and strong.

It's rare to see someone who doesn't follow the conventional plot, who talks about whether it's righteous or evil, and likes to always stand by the protagonist's side🐟. It's a turmoil that I can't get, and the other feelings are average.

It looks good and tastes great, but there's just too little of it.

The author can go for further training. The process should be written in more detail [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [send heart][send heart][send heart]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! Perfectly suits my taste 😍

Looks good! The heroine is so happy [shy] I like the heroine and Xiaoyu, Nanaya (づ￣3￣)づ╭❤～

Why is the rating so low? Very beautiful

It looks good, author, hold on, author, come on! I love the heroine's character so much, it's very rare.

I really like this book(//∇//)

I feel good about myself, the author must continue to update, and I look forward to the author's big meal every day [shy]

It's really beautiful(୨୧• ᴗ •͈)◞︎ᶫᵒᵛᵉ ♡

So pretty! Teacher, I will always follow you! ! ! ! Please update! ! ! Please update! !

It's very beautiful, I really like the heroine's mental state! !

A perfect book, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's beautiful, I love watching it~ The author would like to support you for more updates (╹▽╹)

It looks good, but the heroine is a little bit villainous, but that's okay. I've seen more villainous ones, and they're pretty good.