Another Ring Master from Spider Nest

It's hard to imagine that in the Spider Nest, only two ring masters are human beings, and the remaining one is a command card man-machine, a giant middle-finger baby, a drunkard, and a super domestic violence woman. Mayig is a human [smile]

Ring Master: Your work! ! ! I heard it! ! ! That's comparable to the melody played by Tibia's pair of humerus and twenty-four ribs! ! !

A+, Ring·New·Power The writing is quite smooth, but sometimes it suddenly switches to first person. There's nothing wrong with the plot. Mebius and Yoshihide are both cute. It's pretty bland so far. I'm looking forward to the smoke war chapter. Having said that, the protagonist sees people who are hiding by seeing colors, and Yoshihide also knows this. So when he ran away, would he break that eye out of fear that Alaya would be discovered?

At the end of the exam, your grade is: A+ Here are the comments written for you by the review master: "In a novel art form, the creator breaks out of the conventions of traditional visual art and outlines a brand new world with delicate brushstrokes and unbridled imagination. Unfortunately, the beauty of the work is slightly flawed. The short length, some disconnected paragraphs, the shaping of the protagonist's portrait, and the original plot make your work lack the most important aura. I believe that after improvement, a brand new genre will rise in the urban night sky."

The character and experience of the protagonist are very interesting (the command is the area), and the personality and language of the original character can be said to be restored. The various little ingenuities in the article are enough to make readers who have played with buses smile (interesting, it turns out this novel feels like this). Overall A+ [shy]

[Please update] Ring Master: Your work! ! ! I heard it! ! ! That's comparable to the melody played by Tibia's pair of humerus and twenty-four ribs! ! !

A Although the writing style is slightly lacking, the impact and expression brought by the words are a bit flat, and there is a slight gap with the emotional explosion point that should appear in the plot. At present, it is mainly foreshadowing and there is no major event as a climax. However, the flaws are not concealed. Overall, it is a very excellent work.

The language is very comfortable and the characters are also very likable. Teacher, you are A+!

Could it be possible to make Mathias more human by the end? I don't want to change the ending, I just want to see what it would be like for Mattias to transform from a heartless beast to a human little by little.

Smooth, comfortable and non-toxic, the protagonist is a tsundere. There are a lot of foreshadowings, and the future of the story can be expected. The characterization is smooth and the original characters are lovable. Perhaps I have eaten too much history. This book is very comfortable in terms of narrative and story transfer. The foreshadowing is just right, and there will be no plot that makes the audience confused and thinks it is the author's negligence. Comprehensive evaluation super large cup

Did you understand that when Yoshihide left the Spider Nest, he took Mebius with him? The most important thing is to sprinkle his own colors on the protagonist's sister.

It's delicious, just don't die. If the author could have written more, I can't wait to see the blood flow. [Laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

😵Oh no, I typed it wrong! 🤓✋Oh, right, right, 🤨Oh, no, 😫ah, I'm telling you it's not right, oops, it's not right‍, 🤔Oh, right, right, right, right... Right? Oh, yes, yes, yes, 😁, 😐😨, no, ah, I even fainted 😵‍💫Oh😲, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, I understand🤓

The writing is delicate and the characters are outstanding. This is the feeling. You are A+

The Lobe Company was founded, the ruined library stood tall, the Border Bus reached heaven and earth, and you and I, the authors, are the only ones in heaven and earth.

When you add a human to a spider nest be like:

This is real art!

No need to be stingy, (heehee)

A+, these are the mouth teeth that I want to look at, the monthly meter is getting better and better

It's a 10 or even 9. It looks great. Keep writing. I'm looking forward to the future development. Very delicious

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

A very good book!

Looks good, come on, update your teeth

The latest masterpiece of a ring finger master

Good-looking protagonist and good relationship

Good looking. Love to see more.

The evaluation given by the masters is A+

Wait a minute, the main character seems to be called... New socks?

It's a good deal, but it's too little. I can give it an A+.

This book is pretty good, why are so few people reading it?