Su Ling, a time traveler, came to the world of One Piece, woke up in Rogge Town where Roger was executed, and awakened his only ability "Snap" - starting from one speed, doubling each level, up to the ninth level, 512 times the speed. At the age of sixteen, he went to sea as a bounty hunter with a cigarette in his mouth, and vowed to use his sword to fight for freedom. Luffy said, "You are very strong, be my partner." He wanted to refuse, but because of the stubbornness in the eyes of the orange-haired girl from Cocoa West Village, he finally set foot on the Straw Hat crew's ship.
From the East China Sea to the Grand Line, from the sandstorms of Alabasta to the thunderclouds of Sky Island, he tore through the battlefield at an instant's speed, cutting iron and steel, witnessing the peak of color, hardening his weapons, and breaking through the limits in life and death along the way. Facing Hawkeye in the war at the top, the eighth-level Setsuna awakens; meeting Mihawk again in the new world, the ninth-level Setsuna's sword slashes towards the world's number one throne.
Three minutes of heat is his label, except for Swordsman and Nami. The swashbuckling swordsman and the orange-flavored sea navigator carved freedom and protection into each other's names during the sunrise in the clouds, next to the burning Merry, and in the separation and reunion two years later in the shampoo field. As the Thousand Sunny sails towards the end of the sunset, this adventure about speed, swordsmen and pirates will never land.
Reader comments
The writing style is quite good. I personally like it very much. The early characters may be different from the original characters themselves, and there is a sense of ambiguity, much like prose. The characters may not be perfectly logical but they fit the rhythm of the article. They are not quite like Pirates fan fiction. I think the author can consider writing some prose. If he wants to write a fan fiction, Character image is a very important point. For example, the pirate caught by the protagonist in the early stage can be written as both an enemy and a teacher, but some image preparation must be done, otherwise it will be a bit strange for an unknown desperado to treat the protagonist like this. Moreover, some parts of the sword training in the early stage do not need to be written so clearly. They can be changed later, and then the author can control the rhythm. Once again, the writing style is really good, which is so rare in foreign persimmons.
The writing style is quite good. I personally like it very much. The early characters may be different from the original characters themselves, and there is a sense of ambiguity, much like prose. The characters may not be perfectly logical but they fit the rhythm of the article. They are not quite like Pirates fan fiction. I think the author can consider writing some prose. If he wants to write a fan fiction, Character image is a very important point. For example, the pirate caught by the protagonist in the early stage can be written as both an enemy and a teacher, but some image preparation must be done, otherwise it will be a bit strange for an unknown desperado to treat the protagonist like this. Moreover, some parts of the sword training in the early stage do not need to be written so clearly. They can be changed later, and then the author can control the rhythm. Once again, the writing style is really good, which is so rare in foreign persimmons.