The Fourth Calamity: Sky Fortress Search, Fight, and Escape Plan

The background setting is very large, including old empires, floating cities, magic, machinery, steampunk, wasteland, monsters, and surface forces. It is very rich and attractive. It's a template for the Fourth Disaster. Unfortunately, the author's writing style is lacking in warmth. He used a lot of words to foreshadow the world view in the early stage, and mixed it with descriptions and foreshadowing of other forces. As a result, the description of the main line of the player's exploration and adventure is slightly less, and it feels very dragging when listening to the book. In addition to this point, the protagonist has too little interaction with the players and the connection is not close. Generally speaking, it is for potential works, please work hard and write well.

I want to collect player IDs Are there any readers who would like to use the player's vest to make a guest appearance? Write down the ID you want to play as a guest, your preferred gameplay and the type of machine you want, and I'll put it into the text as appropriate [laughing]

Five-star reviews said yes, The first is the AI issue that concerns me the most. For this book, it is an intensive revision by Homo sapiens. It is equivalent to the author using AI to correct the language problem. At most, there is a little expansion. Although I used a little AI at the beginning, the author abandoned it after discovering it. Some of the AI stereotypes that existed before Chapter 10 (such as deathly silence, not but this kind of thing) are completely invisible in the later part (currently the latest chapter is 50 chapters and 60 chapters), which is very good. Secondly, there is the problem of poisonous points. For me as a reader, there are no poisonous points at all. The only possibility is some dissatisfaction with the development, such as always mentioning the trading house. It feels like the mechanism of searching and withdrawing is too rigid. The game is different and there is no way to reproduce it one by one. Personally, I think this book has no poisonous points. The summary is that I think the book written by Homo sapiens is an honor 😋 But who can read fifty or sixty chapters? I guess, write it quickly! !

That's good. 🍅A bunch of template articles with fixed routines are more AI than AI articles, not even as good as the white articles above. This worldview is considered good and novel enough

As a novel about the 4th natural disaster plus search and rescue, it is very interesting, and the story is okay. When I read the reviews, I saw that others said it was verbose, which is true, but it is more to increase the sense of substitution and enrich the character. After reading it, I already have a general understanding of the character's personality. However, Yuan Maomao was a bit too naughty as a comedy in the early stage. It is a small drawback and cannot be read away. There are also few chapters, and I have already planned to start reading it (I read it every two days?)

I like it not written by AI. When your normal AI writes, it will have a lot of repetitively prompted words. And just like for teachers, everyone must understand that if a writing is too boring or excessive, you will get bored after listening to it for a while. Later, he will appear a little irritable and jump to watch. Those who read more will just give up. But this one is different, this is a good book. The best fourth natural disaster article currently. What I personally like is The Fourth Natural Disaster: Doomsday Floating City Search, Strike and Evacuation Plan. Is the evil god deceiving these players more weirdly than me? The Fourth Disaster: Project Starfall. These books are pretty good

The current look and feel is very good. There are small forces, and there are big forces behind the small forces. The ecology and background introduction are relatively clear. There is no telling you that this is the end of the world, and then the players come, and then there is nothing. The overall book still has a framework. But I hope there won't be any god-man plot. In the end of the world, if you don't have the strength to do anything, there will be a price, including staying alive. The book's vague connection with reality is handled well, but there shouldn't be any linkage with reality that directly and violently affects the real world. The official basically regards the game as a place for non-destructive training and experiments. No matter how many countries there are, the content of the book will basically become cliche, and it will be easy to get scolded. Come on, the author is optimistic about you [laughs]

I hope that after the author's online game settings become popular, he will change it to first-time charging. The kind that can be bought out or issued in batches every time it is updated. . Because even if there is a production line, this game will only have a few million or tens of millions of players at most. It can't be like free online games. Because the cost for the protagonist is here. Plus the cost of resurrecting every day and the loss. It is destined that this game cannot be particularly multiplayer. You can refer to another book, which is also about searching, fighting and withdrawing. It started with Resident Evil.

I want to move it to the bookshelf: Player Catastrophe, and I want to move it to the bookshelf: The End of the World. Finally, I chose to move it to the bookshelf: Tower Anzhou · Search, Fight, and Retreat [Sneaky Smile]

I feel that the writing is very good. Personally, I feel that it is very good among Search, Strike, and Retreat and The Fourth Natural Disaster. In the future, just follow this pattern and don't use AI. Newcomers may not be able to tell, but us old bookworms will feel weird after reading a few pages. As long as we continue to write according to the current model, I feel that it will be worth looking forward to without AI. Worth recommending