Collapse of Iron**********

I'm currently reading Chapter 8, and it's really unbearable. Regarding the setting of the characters, the mistakes are very outrageous. It's okay at the beginning. Some minor mistakes can be corrected to a certain extent. For example, calling yourself this name before Chang Yueyue has arrived can be said to be based on the memory of the protagonist. There is also the Big Black Tower experiment. At that level, you actually have to take anesthesia or something to do the experiment. After reading the subsequent plot, isn't the protagonist replaced by the starry sky? It seems like you started doing some experiments after meeting the Black Tower doll, right? How could you still be so excited? This can also be said to be because the protagonist did not agree. There are also things like Jizi's brewing. The bad taste is coffee, not black tea. It can also be said that it is a different development. I never said that I can brew this. Forget it. When I arrived at Beloberg, I was given a big wave at the beginning. What is the cause of Bronya? It doesn't matter why I don't remember Xiacheng District. After all, it's not clearly stated in the game, and I'm not a picky person, but Xi'er doesn't remember Bronya either. In the game, when the two of them learned about their backgrounds, they didn't even mention that they were playmates when they were children. What about Earthfire? Xi'er joined Dihuo when she was a child and started to manage order together. Did Xi'er know that she had such a lofty dream when she was a child and didn't have enough to eat? It's not that you, the author, are required to be detailed. At least you have to conform to the characters shown in the main line of the game and the plots of various major events.

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I don't like to see the protagonist feel threatened, as if the protagonist doesn't want to be forced to