After Zaoyao Xiaonaituan Woke Up, the Whole Wealthy Family Panicked

The subject matter is not bad, and the writing is also very good. It has some shortcomings. The previous content is too repetitive. The pace of the plot is a bit slow. It can be improved appropriately. Some other plots can be added appropriately. The relationship between the heroine's parents is very strange. I feel that the heroine's father has feelings for her mother but does not protect her. If it is a group favorite article and makes readers feel comfortable, it can be changed. Including the attitude of grandma towards mother and the protection of mother by the people around her are not reflected. I want to see that mother and heroine are not worried and will protect them. The author writes well. It's normal to have some shortcomings at the beginning. The more you go on, the better it gets. I'm looking forward to the next plot. Good luck, author.

It's quite nice and well written. But the background of the story is a bit confusing. I'm about to finish it. I still don't know what the relationship is between the Gu family and the heroine. Why do I care about her so much? Come on, the author.

I don't know why, but I just like to read it and think it looks good. Good cheers to the author💪 The heroine is really smart, and the heroine's mother has a hard time. That's why she is driven crazy in the novel. Only when the heroine comes does she come back to life. Maybe because I just started writing, the buried lines are a little unclear. Why is the relationship between the heroine's mother, the heroine's father, and their two sons like this? I hope the author will provide details later, as well as the main reasons for the heroine's accident. Grandma's behavior explanation, the Gu family line seems to be very important, but the writing is not particularly clear. What I understand is that one is a family friend, the second is the Gu family is quite powerful, even more powerful than the heroine's family, and the third is the child adopter or supporter prepared for the heroine, so there are more intersections.

It's really good to read, and the writing is so detailed. You made me feel soft after reading it. I really recommend everyone to read this book. I think I will read it many times. Although it has not been updated yet, it is still highly recommended.

This is the first novel written in the first person that I have read in so many years. I used to find it awkward, and it was either that I had not tried it, or that I just couldn't stand it. But this one is really good, maybe because the heroine only calls her parents now.

Awesome👍🏻, come on, come on

It's so well written and beautiful [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

It's pretty good so far, but there are very few chapters. I'm looking forward to it. It's a pure family from the capital city 😂

It's very warm. Who knows how powerful maternal love is?

Nice book, highly recommended

The subject matter is very good and very novel!

Just don't be too weird, don't be so long-winded, actually

Not bad, not bad, hahahahaha, quite delicate ^O^

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

It's very novel, the writing is very delicate, and it's a rare first-person perspective. I look forward to the follow-up.

Delicate and beautiful, worth watching again and again

My eyes were filled with tears when I read it at the beginning. It was so well written and detailed. My mother's love is great. It gets warmer and warmer later on.

Very nice and well written with great details and soft heart.

What is the relationship between the Gu family and the protagonist? I don't understand what role they play.

Anyway, it looks good

V just came home, hurry, hurry, hurry

Why haven't I heard the baby babbling? It feels weird. It's beautiful and beautiful, but a little strange. It feels like a mute. This has always been on my mind.

I thought she was a group favorite, but it turned out that the little girl was trying her best to survive and protect her family from being torn apart.

Author, author, between chapters 1 to 5 and 1 to 10 pictures, I felt like I burst into tears.

This novel is really well written, the story is interesting, and the characters stand up well. Once you pick it up, you don't want to let it go. The more you read, the better it gets.

Immediately tied, the subject matter is very interesting, a bit suspenseful, it feels [laughing and crying] There are a lot of threads buried, I hope the author will answer them one by one later, there are too few and it is not enough to read.

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