After Marking the Alchemist, the Heavenly Dao Forces Me to Save the World

The plot is smooth and there are no major logical flaws. The existence of the sect system allows people to see a clear main line. The setting of Golden Finger is neither so big that it makes people feel mindless, nor is it so small that it makes the protagonist worried all the time. I think this is good. The only drawback is: there are too few updates. I have read an article before. The author set up three systems for the protagonist. The golden finger is wide open. It sounds very awesome, but the main text is very messy, and both career and emotional lines are very ink. Career: The protagonist talked about his career ambitiously, but later he continued to pursue the protagonist and no longer focused on his career. In terms of love: Two people clearly know each other's feelings, but they keep trying to pull each other inexplicably. Fortunately, the author did not do this. When the author said it would heat up slowly, I was worried that it would be watery, but now it seems that although it is slow, it is not watery. The protagonist's background color is gray, but this does not prevent him from respecting noble people and being infected by them. This is very good. You will not be blind to the Holy Mother, nor will you be hypocritical because you are not so noble. The plot of Tunyun Valley was very touching [I almost cried] and I also got the charm of Zhaoyu from this episode. Who wouldn't like a tsundere kitten who is hard-spoken and soft-hearted? [Note] I hope the author can stay steady and not collapse 💕

The author came to me from God. After looking at the homepage and replies, I found that apart from a writing practice book, this is actually the author's second novel! I'm really not a noob at all, I was shocked. I read a lot of novels in JJ but the authors didn't feel this way. I like the characters of Shi Yunzhou and Xiaoyu very much. Their main focus is on the charm of writing. They are my favorite CP models. They are a perfect match for each other. It touches my heart~ When I read the introduction, I thought it was the kind of game I had in mind about traveling through time and cultivating immortals. But after reading it, I realized that it still has that apocalyptic feel. The world view is not small, and there are many new settings. The summary is that the author writes very well. The low rating is just because there are too few people. It is actually very interesting and I look forward to the follow-up! I hope the teacher will live a good life and update more, and don't forget us little readers who are waiting for food 😘

It's very nice. Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooot to… I love watching this. I don't know how to say it, but it's very delicate. I haven't written that much yet, so I can't write too many detailed reviews. It's the local people who are guiding Gong Bao, making him gradually have a sense of belonging and righteousness. Shou Bao should be the kind of person who has the world in mind.

It's really a strong attack. The protagonist written by the author is brave and resourceful. It feels like he was born to be the one in power! He is also very doting on his wife. The plot is also very compact and not silly. It is fun to watch the protagonist expand his power step by step.

The writing is solid and the storyline is unconventional. It can be seen that the author is setting up a very grand world view background. The character design is vivid and full, which is very attractive to read. The layers of foreshadowing are just waiting to be revealed one by one in the follow-up. In short, it is very interesting to read.

The entry point of the characters is very interesting. After reading a few chapters, I was moved by the group portraits written by the author. Some people are selfish and greedy, but there are also a group of people who sacrifice themselves and sacrifice themselves for the lives of more people. This confirms the sentence: Even if there are thousands of people, I will die. I hope the author will work hard and update [Adore][Adore][Adore]

This novel is very well written, and the protagonist is well established. After reading the chapters so far, there is nothing OOC about it. The relationship scenes between the two male protagonists are not fast either. It is a profitable part, but it is also generous. The other group portraits are also well written. Everyone has their own story and highlights. Great support for the author. I support you.

It's quite interesting so far. As the plot develops, the relationship between the protagonists gradually heats up. The protagonists each have their own shining points. No one is dependent on the other, they are all independent individuals. The disadvantage may be that it is currently being serialized, so it is a bit painful to wait for updates, and it is not enough to watch. If you don't want to update, don't update. Is it fun to update a little more than 1,000 words a day recently? This is a walker.

It's nice to read, the author's writing is very good, not verbose, and the ideas are clear.

It's good to watch. I read it in one sitting. It's not enough. The world view is grand and novel.