I wrote a book with the mentality of wanting to write a fine book for readers. It is not a refreshing article. I tried to make a strong drink for everyone to taste. Although I am not sure whether I can succeed, I still let it go! Stay tuned everyone! Lots of support!
In the 21st year of Konoha, the aftermath of the First World War was still lingering, and the Uchiha tribe welcomed a baby who was born weak.
Qiongqiu
A former Ninja school friend died, and his girlfriend had her Sharingan dug out by the Root of Konoha.
In extreme despair, he awakened the kaleidoscope, fought hard to kill the root ninja, saved his empty-eyed girlfriend, and cut off his last feelings for Konoha.
Resolutely, he defected.
He defected for many years, met his nephew Uchiha Sasuke, and met the twelve young Konoha heroes.
"Sasuke, you don't even want to call me uncle!"
The moment he was stabbed in the chest by his nephew Sasuke, he understood that this world. He is not the protagonist.
Later, he was reincarnated by the dirt during the Fourth Realm War and met his children again. After learning that his son-in-law was Gaara, the zombie said with a smile on his face, "If Rasa is still alive, I will blackmail him for a large sum of money as a gift! Okay, you seal me quickly and show your strength, otherwise many of you will die!"
"Naruto! You simple-minded guy, your mouth is of no use here."
Aboriginal people + original single female protagonist + non-cool writing + sadistic writing + non-invincible + non-routine
He and his descendants will continue this story
If you like to read daily articles, I recommend you to read it.
Reader comments
The recent data has not been very good, but I think the writing is not bad, so I will recommend it to you first. If it is good, it is good, and if it is ugly, it is ugly. I still hope to have a book review or a paragraph review. It would be good to urge an update. As an author, the thing I fear most is that there is no movement. Readers do not post or rate, and there is not even a curse. This is the thing I fear most. Well! I hope everyone can interact with each other more. I feel uncomfortable when it is so deserted.
I feel a bit pitiful when I see this author writing for love, but no one has commented. Although I almost haven't finished reading it, I still want to review it. I feel that this book may not be suitable for publishing on a cool writing platform like Tomato, so it is not a big hit. But I think the whole book is still very beautiful and worth reading (maybe because I am a TikToker, haha, just kidding). Regardless of whether it is, you can read it, but I feel that this author is too The writing is very good. I personally think it also reflects the dark side of the ninja world in the Naruto world very well. I have always felt that the ninja world is an extremely dark place, and this book reflects it very well. So I have never been used to reading those kind of cool articles that are very refreshing until the end. I think they may be a bit magical, but this book is not so sunny and cheerful, and the protagonist is very miserable. I feel very distressed every time I read it. I feel that the author is my uncle😘.
❤️❤️❤️ I also recommend some ways for the author to improve: 1. You can choose a name that is more popular among people. To be honest, the name of your novel is easy to write poorly in the Naruto Tomato fanfic, but it does not mention you, the author. You still write very well, but I still think that if you change this, you can attract more people to read it, so choose a more interesting name.
2. The author can ask an online artist, or a relative or friend who can draw to help you draw a picture, or you can train Doubao like crazy and ask him to generate a super-good-looking cover photo for you, because to be honest, this cover is a bit too AI, and it feels like it lowers the grade of the entire work. If you change it to a better-looking cover, and add a charming name, the whole work will be more attractive and perfect, and then they will be successfully attracted by this to see the author's masterpiece in big letters.
To sum up, I think it's probably just the cover and name. The content is not a big problem, unless he really hates abusive writing. Of course, Tomato is sometimes very nervous and will bury some good works. I hope the author can get through it. I'm really disappointed too. I like this work, and I have been in a book shortage. I hope the author can keep updating it😋, and I hope the author is happy every day. It's like talking in my sleep😄, author, just watch it and have fun. As long as you update, I will always support you.
Overall, it's well written and very detailed.
However, because it is too delicate, it may be a bit dramatic, so it can be simplified appropriately.
Maybe you are more suitable for ancient themes, such as fox monsters?
And your coding speed really puts me to shame.
Gaga, it looks good, damn, it's so tragic, it's so tragic, the protagonist has the strength to kill all of Konoha [crying]
The recent data has not been very good, but I think the writing is not bad, so I will recommend it to you first. If it is good, it is good, and if it is ugly, it is ugly. I still hope to have a book review or a paragraph review. It would be good to urge an update. As an author, the thing I fear most is that there is no movement. Readers do not post or rate, and there is not even a curse. This is the thing I fear most. Well! I hope everyone can interact with each other more. I feel uncomfortable when it is so deserted.
I feel a bit pitiful when I see this author writing for love, but no one has commented. Although I almost haven't finished reading it, I still want to review it. I feel that this book may not be suitable for publishing on a cool writing platform like Tomato, so it is not a big hit. But I think the whole book is still very beautiful and worth reading (maybe because I am a TikToker, haha, just kidding). Regardless of whether it is, you can read it, but I feel that this author is too The writing is very good. I personally think it also reflects the dark side of the ninja world in the Naruto world very well. I have always felt that the ninja world is an extremely dark place, and this book reflects it very well. So I have never been used to reading those kind of cool articles that are very refreshing until the end. I think they may be a bit magical, but this book is not so sunny and cheerful, and the protagonist is very miserable. I feel very distressed every time I read it. I feel that the author is my uncle😘. ❤️❤️❤️ I also recommend some ways for the author to improve: 1. You can choose a name that is more popular among people. To be honest, the name of your novel is easy to write poorly in the Naruto Tomato fanfic, but it does not mention you, the author. You still write very well, but I still think that if you change this, you can attract more people to read it, so choose a more interesting name. 2. The author can ask an online artist, or a relative or friend who can draw to help you draw a picture, or you can train Doubao like crazy and ask him to generate a super-good-looking cover photo for you, because to be honest, this cover is a bit too AI, and it feels like it lowers the grade of the entire work. If you change it to a better-looking cover, and add a charming name, the whole work will be more attractive and perfect, and then they will be successfully attracted by this to see the author's masterpiece in big letters. To sum up, I think it's probably just the cover and name. The content is not a big problem, unless he really hates abusive writing. Of course, Tomato is sometimes very nervous and will bury some good works. I hope the author can get through it. I'm really disappointed too. I like this work, and I have been in a book shortage. I hope the author can keep updating it😋, and I hope the author is happy every day. It's like talking in my sleep😄, author, just watch it and have fun. As long as you update, I will always support you.
Overall, it's well written and very detailed. However, because it is too delicate, it may be a bit dramatic, so it can be simplified appropriately. Maybe you are more suitable for ancient themes, such as fox monsters? And your coding speed really puts me to shame.
Gaga, it looks good, damn, it's so tragic, it's so tragic, the protagonist has the strength to kill all of Konoha [crying]