You are not the masters of the original work.
Many regrets will be made up for. I actually always thought that Gojo Satoru was deceived.
I combined the myth of mountains and seas with the curse. I watched the curse and swallowed it whole. Secondly, I always thought that the reason why the adult Jie was so desperate was society.
If you don't like it, don't spray it.
Reader comments
The idea is very good, the world view is quite huge, but the narrative is still too big, it can be divided into sections appropriately, but how can I put it, Gojo is too weak, and the narrative is too messy. The original characters except Gojo, Natsumi, Hisahito, Nanami, and Ichichi are all downplayed. It is too far away from the original work. It is difficult to write in the follow-up. It can be changed, but overall it is very good. I look forward to the follow-up plot [Like] [Like]
You can delete it if you don't like it. I said it after reading all the updates today. It's just my personal opinion.
The idea is very good, the world view is quite huge, but the narrative is still too big, it can be divided into sections appropriately, but how can I put it, Gojo is too weak, and the narrative is too messy. The original characters except Gojo, Natsumi, Hisahito, Nanami, and Ichichi are all downplayed. It is too far away from the original work. It is difficult to write in the follow-up. It can be changed, but overall it is very good. I look forward to the follow-up plot [Like] [Like] You can delete it if you don't like it. I said it after reading all the updates today. It's just my personal opinion.