The Knight's Revision Record

It looks good, but the system will deduct rewards in some insignificant places, which is not a good look. Others have to follow the theme of the novel, so you can reduce the rewards. However, if you reduce the rewards for some damage to buildings that are not in the original drama, it will affect the look and feel. But overall it's a good knightly novel

This is the third novel with this theme that I have seen. The only shortcoming is that in the world of armored combat, the protagonist did not pretend to be a tough and tender hero at the end, and the guys in space were not beaten up. This made me feel that there is no chivalry. My shortcoming is that the protagonist has no chivalry. I hope that the protagonist can become a real knight in the future. In summary, this novel has no flaws. I hope there will be more plots in the future. I would like to see the reaction of the real-world audience when the bug in the knight plot is patched. I really want to see the audience pop the champagne in the plot.

Shouldn't the key point of knightly literature be to have a knight's heart? Is this a dummy or a knight? Let's see.

Did you use AI later? What I wrote is completely different from what I wrote before.

The writing is smooth and the settings are good. However, the reward and punishment settings of the correction point mechanism are a bit too high and low, so I just jumped on it as a tool to promote the plot. Other than that, it's pretty cool to watch. It was a good start, but then the left and right brains were fighting each other. I should have used the AI ​​after the cut. To be honest, it was cut after the cut, so there was no need to use the AI ​​to continue. It's a pity that this book received rave reviews when it first started.

I think it's very good-looking. It can be said to be a good-looking knight story.

Yes, I think it's a good read. It has a semi-invincible protagonist. It's a pity that the world of armor and combat doesn't have a big wave. Also, I always feel that the AI ​​taste is too strong later. When writing chapters, I always get stuck in key places, which makes me want to read.

It's a rare Kamen Rider fanfic that I can watch on Tomato I don't know about AI. I haven't seen it enough to tell the difference, but the back is so sharp that it falls off the roadside.

After getting over the initial stage, it's the growth stage. As long as it stays fresh and interesting, I feel like the follow-up will be great. When I saw Zongzu, I inexplicably thought of the Insect King. Although there are two families, I feel that the only setting of time and space can make the King an evolutionary deduction. Considering the gap in broadcast time, one association is that the failure of the protozoa and the victory of the knight brought a new evolutionary idea, and the story of the Insect King began.

The writing is very interesting, and it breaks away from the common templates of ordinary knight stories, which makes people's eyes bright.