I fell out of love for two years, overeated to the point of weighing 200 pounds, and was laid off from a large factory.
The video of the ex-girlfriend and her new boyfriend showing off their affection has been viewed five million times, with more than a thousand @me comments in the comment section.
"From the school idol to the pig head, laugh to death."
I turned off my phone, but the screen turned on by itself.
An APP that cannot be uninstalled, cannot be taken, and cannot be seen by others appears on the desktop——
"Heartbeat Link".
[System prompt: The peak of the host's emotional fluctuation is detected, and the Heartbeat core algorithm awakens.
[Function unlocked: Mind-reading barrages—you can view the other party's true psychological activities in real time while chatting.
She sent this: "Haha, I'm fine."
Three lines of words floated across the barrage: [What a fart] [I want to cry] [If he asks me if I am really okay, I will collapse]
I didn't ask "are you really okay".
I said: "The three words 'very good' are the biggest lies adults can tell."
Favorability +8.
After three days, the favorability level reached 100.
[Countdown to forced encounter: 23:59:57]
She appeared downstairs from me out of nowhere.
Reader comments
The writing is very delicate and the writing style is very good. It should be a female author. It is not a grand novel written by Shen Shen, but a novel that wins with details. It's a pity that Tomato doesn't provide traffic. This is a good book that should be seen by more people.
The smell of AI is very strong, but it's not bad. Brother, can you teach me how to adjust it? [Laughing]
Now I have read the latest chapter. Favorability is a relatively unpopular theme in the city. There are few favorability systems at the same level that look better than it. [Top post]
As for the protagonist, Lu is a former industrial manager of a large factory. The code he worked hard to write was used by others, and he destroyed it with his own hands in the end. In the end, he was fired. Coupled with the double blow of the breakup, Lu, who was already in a low spirit, became a 200-pound fat man. As a result, the code he once deleted came back in a new attitude. The current image of the protagonist is very reassuring, and he is not that slouched or greasy.
The psychological description of the novel is very good. For example, Qin and Su fascinate me. The writing style reveals a sense of madness in the plainness. The dialogue is casual but sticks to the characters step by step. There is no need to worry about the collapse of the characters [get it]
At present, I feel that the first hundred chapters are just sedimentation. The real counterattack of the villain, as well as the foreshadowing of the ex-girlfriend and Driftwood should be behind.
If there are shortcomings, the update is too slow. I suggest you call me directly [laughs][Please give me more updates][Please give me more updates][Please give me more updates]
It's quite good-looking, the characters are very three-dimensional, and there's also a Shura field. I looked through the comments and someone said ai in the comment area. I don't think so. I can't tell. It's really well written. My experience, experience, and behavior are all very good. I have a mature mind and no silly or unreasonable behavior. It's a very good book.
The early stage is still very interesting, the kind that I can stay up late to watch. There are more and more of them later, and daily life is quite harmonious. When it comes to the underworld boys, those who are a bit speechless, Shenzhen eh [face covering] By the 7th one, it's already full, right? The male protagonist is also very strong and has a skin. One a week is not enough for rotation? Each character is well described and deserves to be treated well. Now that everyone has accepted each other and the atmosphere is harmonious, let's write something more relaxed and solve the problems around us. Personally, I think the ending of Sleeping Together deserves 5 stars. Then I saw that the eighth chapter was scanned... I couldn't stand it anymore. I turned to the latest dozen chapters and found out that there is a ninth one and the tenth one is the ex-girlfriend... It can only be said that the author has already thought of the ending, the origin of the system, and the final ending. Alas, my ending ends at the seventh episode anyway. We all live together in Dafa, and a bunch of wild children are happily together, spreading flowers🎉
How can I put it so far? It seems that the look and feel is good. It is a different style from the popular one. It is also a style that I have not seen often. When I first read this novel, it felt a bit strange. But after reading it for a long time, I found that this writing method is indeed good. Whether it is in character creation, scene preparation, plot advancement, or emotional expression, dialogue description, and psychological activities. After reading it carefully, I can savor it carefully and eagerly want to know how the plot will develop later.
Overall, this is a book with great potential. I believe that if the subsequent plot does not deviate too much from the current theme and is not rushed, this book will become a masterpiece in the future.
I loved reading it. After reading 120 chapters, almost all of them are about daily life. The writing is calm and exciting. The author of the ex-girlfriend is currently planning to go abroad (I haven't read it back and praised it. If I do, I will come back and change it to let you know).
There are no overlords in the book for the time being, they are all cows and horses, and there is nothing messy about the table. I like this kind of thing very much. There are very few business descriptions, but the current one is about the male protagonist establishing a company, the new female anchor, and some bosses involved. I don't know what the follow-up will be, so I'll give it 5 stars for now, and I'll follow up if I'm still following you later.
It's very beautiful, a great work, but does the full three-dimensional number need to be a hundred? I just saw the seventh one. Are there repetitions in the one hundred words? After all, more than 90% of the problems in the world can be solved with money.
In modern society, the past views on marriage and love have gradually been ignored by many young people. They often decide to start or break up an intimate relationship based on their own needs and instincts. This may be a phenomenon endowed by this era. It's hard to evaluate the character relationships in this book, but at least it's well written.
The heroines each have their own characteristics, 🉐eats quickly, has details, and the writing and plot are not cliche.
I saw the latest chapter. Although it is a harem story, I don't envy the male protagonist at all. It's not that he is abusive, but the female protagonist he takes is really enviable. The last two are okay, the first three didn't kill him, they are all in a good mood, but the details are described really well. Are you sure you don't have a trumpet with the moderator, Hajisaku?
How many of them are first-hand goods? Qin Chu, I looked a little confused. Did he just have a boyfriend, or did he have someone else? Not counting ex-girlfriends. There were about seven people. How many are first-hand? Can any brother explain it?
Although it is a harem with multiple female protagonists, they are not pure mentally, but at least a lot of them are physically clean, and except for the one who left, none of them have betrayed the male protagonist before, so I will give it four stars and hope that there will be a few who are clean both physically and mentally. It is acceptable to accept that one or two can be emotionally redeemed, but not accepting them is the most important thing. If the body is not pure, it cannot be the main thing. The same is true for wives. Those who have been betrayed before and have unclean bodies are absolutely unacceptable.
And since the fat man is counterattacking, why not spread the world view a little wider, use a bigger imagination, open up the pattern, let the male protagonist discover a door to a different world at home, and find the next princess of the different world while also participating in the struggle of the different world. As a result, he accepted several girls, and also accepted a A girl from the universe participated in the interstellar war at the same time, and kept a few mythical beasts as pets. She could also go to heaven and underworld to fight and have gods to fight against her. Then her descendants traveled from the future and told him that he had married several wives, and the descendants were nine sons of dragons, each with different characteristics.
The writing is very true. Most of the women are losers and are dumped. They then start to have emotional disputes. With the help of the system, they can help women. There are more emotional disputes and a bit of a Shura field, but most of them are in daily life.
Let's talk about the conclusion first: grass jelly level. This book is very special. The main tone is a bit depressing and gloomy, but the author's writing skills are very strong and the characterization is very clear. Each female character has a distinct personality. The description of Shura Field makes me scratch my head as a reader [Petrified]
After reading more than 30 chapters, it was quite good and I wanted to keep reading. The most satisfying thing about this book is that there are no immaculate virgins or the like. They are all drawn from reality and are unrealistic. This way, I feel more immersed in the book and more down-to-earth.
It's okay, it's the first time I've seen this type of movie.
I looked very immersed in it from the beginning, but when the heroine got to the fourth episode, I felt a little disgusted and wanted to give up.
I just removed it from the bookshelf, looked through the rankings, and then retrieved it from the history books to continue reading. I am still very curious about how the male protagonists will deal with these complicated relationships as there are more and more female protagonists in the future.
And the whole book happens to be set in Shenzhen. Many places are familiar and I feel immersed in it.
I've read Chapter 43 so far…
1. A refreshing novel that is very satisfying. In terms of cheesiness, this is the harem novel that everyone wants to read.
2. Have writing style and logic
3. The storyline is well arranged
4. The reason why I got four stars is because I am a pure fan, but this novel is great.
I came across this book by chance. I just finished reading the updated chapters. I found it on the recommendation page. I clicked on the title of the book and read the introduction. I wanted to read it, so I came to the present and saw the latest chapter. Each character has its own characteristics, regardless of whether there are traces of AI or not. There is rarely something you want to see in the characters, or there are shadows of people around you. Yes, there is a friend series, and I still have a very deep impression of that friend. After many years, I have not forgotten it. All impressions are stuck in the beauty of the past, and the beauty just stopped suddenly to make people remember it.
Quite pretty. It is rare that the protagonist has almost no psychological description. The description of the environment often includes numbers, which gave me a feeling of calm spectatorship. The last time I saw this style was Asako Yamashiro.
The writing style is quite good, but it's just too good. It could be more straightforward or metaphorical, and it might be more interesting.
Scumbag textbook
This book is really well written, and its advantages are obvious: unique dialogue style, appropriate pacing, and appropriate progression. There are also disadvantages: the main plot is not obvious, and the male protagonist feels like he is being pushed around. Overall, it is a good food. In addition, a good-looking cover is also a necessary condition for a good book.
There are also questions that are not very good, they should be more innovative.
It's so well written, the only book I haven't read in recent times.
I didn't expect to see such an excellent work in Tomato Novels. It's really good. Halfway through, I checked out the author's other works and found that the others were basically short stories. I was a little disappointed. I hope the author can keep writing.
The main line of the story is placed on the heroines who are trying to conquer each other. The strategy is also redemption. If there is no contact, they will most likely die. The male protagonist will also gain energy from it and reach the peak of life.
The process of conquering the heroine is not the same, each has its own hardships, business development is a auxiliary line, not too much emphasis is given, and it is well received.
The description is super delicate. This is the second author who has moved the book to have a place among the moderators. I hope it will only write stories about low-level cows and horses, and not involve the boss's daughter and the like.
Come on, the author. As an old bookworm, I haven't seen such a literary and artistic content without being vulgar since the internet was released. It's quite an old-school style of writing, but when placed on a tomato, it's a feature that can kill AI writing.
Why is the rating so low? I will study it chapter by chapter and update it soon. This is the only way for me to understand girls [crying] [crying].
It's quite innovative. To be honest, the writing style is also good.
I read it yesterday afternoon, and then watched it until early morning. Today I read the latest chapter. There are some unreasonable parts, which is a bit painful for literary issues, but it is one of the best-looking ones on Tomato.
The writing is very delicate and the writing style is very good. It should be a female author. It is not a grand novel written by Shen Shen, but a novel that wins with details. It's a pity that Tomato doesn't provide traffic. This is a good book that should be seen by more people.
The smell of AI is very strong, but it's not bad. Brother, can you teach me how to adjust it? [Laughing]
Now I have read the latest chapter. Favorability is a relatively unpopular theme in the city. There are few favorability systems at the same level that look better than it. [Top post] As for the protagonist, Lu is a former industrial manager of a large factory. The code he worked hard to write was used by others, and he destroyed it with his own hands in the end. In the end, he was fired. Coupled with the double blow of the breakup, Lu, who was already in a low spirit, became a 200-pound fat man. As a result, the code he once deleted came back in a new attitude. The current image of the protagonist is very reassuring, and he is not that slouched or greasy. The psychological description of the novel is very good. For example, Qin and Su fascinate me. The writing style reveals a sense of madness in the plainness. The dialogue is casual but sticks to the characters step by step. There is no need to worry about the collapse of the characters [get it] At present, I feel that the first hundred chapters are just sedimentation. The real counterattack of the villain, as well as the foreshadowing of the ex-girlfriend and Driftwood should be behind. If there are shortcomings, the update is too slow. I suggest you call me directly [laughs][Please give me more updates][Please give me more updates][Please give me more updates]
It's quite good-looking, the characters are very three-dimensional, and there's also a Shura field. I looked through the comments and someone said ai in the comment area. I don't think so. I can't tell. It's really well written. My experience, experience, and behavior are all very good. I have a mature mind and no silly or unreasonable behavior. It's a very good book.
The early stage is still very interesting, the kind that I can stay up late to watch. There are more and more of them later, and daily life is quite harmonious. When it comes to the underworld boys, those who are a bit speechless, Shenzhen eh [face covering] By the 7th one, it's already full, right? The male protagonist is also very strong and has a skin. One a week is not enough for rotation? Each character is well described and deserves to be treated well. Now that everyone has accepted each other and the atmosphere is harmonious, let's write something more relaxed and solve the problems around us. Personally, I think the ending of Sleeping Together deserves 5 stars. Then I saw that the eighth chapter was scanned... I couldn't stand it anymore. I turned to the latest dozen chapters and found out that there is a ninth one and the tenth one is the ex-girlfriend... It can only be said that the author has already thought of the ending, the origin of the system, and the final ending. Alas, my ending ends at the seventh episode anyway. We all live together in Dafa, and a bunch of wild children are happily together, spreading flowers🎉
How can I put it so far? It seems that the look and feel is good. It is a different style from the popular one. It is also a style that I have not seen often. When I first read this novel, it felt a bit strange. But after reading it for a long time, I found that this writing method is indeed good. Whether it is in character creation, scene preparation, plot advancement, or emotional expression, dialogue description, and psychological activities. After reading it carefully, I can savor it carefully and eagerly want to know how the plot will develop later. Overall, this is a book with great potential. I believe that if the subsequent plot does not deviate too much from the current theme and is not rushed, this book will become a masterpiece in the future.
I loved reading it. After reading 120 chapters, almost all of them are about daily life. The writing is calm and exciting. The author of the ex-girlfriend is currently planning to go abroad (I haven't read it back and praised it. If I do, I will come back and change it to let you know). There are no overlords in the book for the time being, they are all cows and horses, and there is nothing messy about the table. I like this kind of thing very much. There are very few business descriptions, but the current one is about the male protagonist establishing a company, the new female anchor, and some bosses involved. I don't know what the follow-up will be, so I'll give it 5 stars for now, and I'll follow up if I'm still following you later.
It's very beautiful, a great work, but does the full three-dimensional number need to be a hundred? I just saw the seventh one. Are there repetitions in the one hundred words? After all, more than 90% of the problems in the world can be solved with money.
In modern society, the past views on marriage and love have gradually been ignored by many young people. They often decide to start or break up an intimate relationship based on their own needs and instincts. This may be a phenomenon endowed by this era. It's hard to evaluate the character relationships in this book, but at least it's well written.
The heroines each have their own characteristics, 🉐eats quickly, has details, and the writing and plot are not cliche.
I saw the latest chapter. Although it is a harem story, I don't envy the male protagonist at all. It's not that he is abusive, but the female protagonist he takes is really enviable. The last two are okay, the first three didn't kill him, they are all in a good mood, but the details are described really well. Are you sure you don't have a trumpet with the moderator, Hajisaku?
How many of them are first-hand goods? Qin Chu, I looked a little confused. Did he just have a boyfriend, or did he have someone else? Not counting ex-girlfriends. There were about seven people. How many are first-hand? Can any brother explain it?
Although it is a harem with multiple female protagonists, they are not pure mentally, but at least a lot of them are physically clean, and except for the one who left, none of them have betrayed the male protagonist before, so I will give it four stars and hope that there will be a few who are clean both physically and mentally. It is acceptable to accept that one or two can be emotionally redeemed, but not accepting them is the most important thing. If the body is not pure, it cannot be the main thing. The same is true for wives. Those who have been betrayed before and have unclean bodies are absolutely unacceptable. And since the fat man is counterattacking, why not spread the world view a little wider, use a bigger imagination, open up the pattern, let the male protagonist discover a door to a different world at home, and find the next princess of the different world while also participating in the struggle of the different world. As a result, he accepted several girls, and also accepted a A girl from the universe participated in the interstellar war at the same time, and kept a few mythical beasts as pets. She could also go to heaven and underworld to fight and have gods to fight against her. Then her descendants traveled from the future and told him that he had married several wives, and the descendants were nine sons of dragons, each with different characteristics.
The writing is very true. Most of the women are losers and are dumped. They then start to have emotional disputes. With the help of the system, they can help women. There are more emotional disputes and a bit of a Shura field, but most of them are in daily life.
Let's talk about the conclusion first: grass jelly level. This book is very special. The main tone is a bit depressing and gloomy, but the author's writing skills are very strong and the characterization is very clear. Each female character has a distinct personality. The description of Shura Field makes me scratch my head as a reader [Petrified]
After reading more than 30 chapters, it was quite good and I wanted to keep reading. The most satisfying thing about this book is that there are no immaculate virgins or the like. They are all drawn from reality and are unrealistic. This way, I feel more immersed in the book and more down-to-earth.
It's okay, it's the first time I've seen this type of movie. I looked very immersed in it from the beginning, but when the heroine got to the fourth episode, I felt a little disgusted and wanted to give up. I just removed it from the bookshelf, looked through the rankings, and then retrieved it from the history books to continue reading. I am still very curious about how the male protagonists will deal with these complicated relationships as there are more and more female protagonists in the future. And the whole book happens to be set in Shenzhen. Many places are familiar and I feel immersed in it.
I've read Chapter 43 so far… 1. A refreshing novel that is very satisfying. In terms of cheesiness, this is the harem novel that everyone wants to read. 2. Have writing style and logic 3. The storyline is well arranged 4. The reason why I got four stars is because I am a pure fan, but this novel is great.
I came across this book by chance. I just finished reading the updated chapters. I found it on the recommendation page. I clicked on the title of the book and read the introduction. I wanted to read it, so I came to the present and saw the latest chapter. Each character has its own characteristics, regardless of whether there are traces of AI or not. There is rarely something you want to see in the characters, or there are shadows of people around you. Yes, there is a friend series, and I still have a very deep impression of that friend. After many years, I have not forgotten it. All impressions are stuck in the beauty of the past, and the beauty just stopped suddenly to make people remember it.
Quite pretty. It is rare that the protagonist has almost no psychological description. The description of the environment often includes numbers, which gave me a feeling of calm spectatorship. The last time I saw this style was Asako Yamashiro.
The writing style is quite good, but it's just too good. It could be more straightforward or metaphorical, and it might be more interesting. Scumbag textbook
This book is really well written, and its advantages are obvious: unique dialogue style, appropriate pacing, and appropriate progression. There are also disadvantages: the main plot is not obvious, and the male protagonist feels like he is being pushed around. Overall, it is a good food. In addition, a good-looking cover is also a necessary condition for a good book. There are also questions that are not very good, they should be more innovative.
It's so well written, the only book I haven't read in recent times.
I didn't expect to see such an excellent work in Tomato Novels. It's really good. Halfway through, I checked out the author's other works and found that the others were basically short stories. I was a little disappointed. I hope the author can keep writing.
The main line of the story is placed on the heroines who are trying to conquer each other. The strategy is also redemption. If there is no contact, they will most likely die. The male protagonist will also gain energy from it and reach the peak of life. The process of conquering the heroine is not the same, each has its own hardships, business development is a auxiliary line, not too much emphasis is given, and it is well received.
The description is super delicate. This is the second author who has moved the book to have a place among the moderators. I hope it will only write stories about low-level cows and horses, and not involve the boss's daughter and the like.
Come on, the author. As an old bookworm, I haven't seen such a literary and artistic content without being vulgar since the internet was released. It's quite an old-school style of writing, but when placed on a tomato, it's a feature that can kill AI writing.
Why is the rating so low? I will study it chapter by chapter and update it soon. This is the only way for me to understand girls [crying] [crying].
It's quite innovative. To be honest, the writing style is also good.
I read it yesterday afternoon, and then watched it until early morning. Today I read the latest chapter. There are some unreasonable parts, which is a bit painful for literary issues, but it is one of the best-looking ones on Tomato.