Actress Su Nian was hit and killed by a stalker fan, leaving her full of resentment in her final moments. System Xiao Qi suddenly showed up and said, “Sign the contract and go on quick transmigrations. Win over the male leads and collect energy, and you can come back to life.”
Su Nian said, “There’s really a deal this good in the world? You damned stalker, just you wait. Your auntie’s coming back to kill you.”
First world: Love O2O, paired with Xiao Nai
Second world: A Lifelong Journey, paired with Lin Dongzhe
Third world: Beyond Mischief, paired with Jiang Zhishu
Fourth world: Twenty Your Life On, paired with Zhou Xun
Fifth world: Harry Potter, paired with Draco
Sixth world: Love You, paired with He Suye
Seventh world: The Three Daughters of the Xia Family, paired with Yan Ge
Eighth world: The Fireworks of My Heart, paired with Meng Yichen
The writing is very good, but the tension between the male and female protagonists is not enough, the ambiguous entanglement between adults and the excitement of rapid heartbeat are not enough. Instead, it has a light healing and warm atmosphere. Summary: a bit plain.
The author writes very well. The heroine guides the male protagonist step by step, which brings out the calmness and intelligence of the heroine. The heroine also falls in love with the hero during the guide. This is not a shameful thing. I feel that only when the heroine really falls in love with the hero, can the hero give 100% of his love and be successful in the real strategy. I have been watching this kind of demolition CP since junior high school, and now I have started working on it. I have written it, and there are tens of thousands of it. I am tired of reading novels in which the male protagonist does not meet the original heroine and is conquered by the heroine. A casual search will show that the author has this kind of setting, and there are relatively few, so I prefer this kind of story. The storyline is much better than most of the light-hearted guides, so it is very interesting. I hope the author can add more. The ending of the story of Jiang Zhishu and Su Nian in the third world made me teary-eyed and red-eyed. The author handled Yuan Xiangqin's ending very well.
To be honest, I think the author's writing style is really good. The only thing I don't understand is why the entry point of the heroine can't be moved earlier and I have to intervene after the original heroine and the hero are together.
Halfway through the first story, I can't help but comment. The psychological interpretation is much better than that of similar genres. It's no exaggeration to say that this is the only fanfic that I can read with a slight smile. Too many people describe the male protagonist as lustful. The author's choice of perspective is really good. I haven't read Bian's story and will wait to review it later, but there is no doubt that I will watch it again and again for the first story. I don't know why the number of viewers and the rating are so much lower than other similar stories. The author is considering changing the title and cover of the book, which may be better. The quality is completely better ❤️ 👍 I'm almost finished watching it, but I feel that the full immersion in the later stage is still a bit lacking. Hey, can you please add a little more system at the beginning? The first four stories are pretty good.
I have finished reading the first story, and it is actually four stars because there are many repetitive sentences or language errors, but the author wrote the heroine so well. For the first time, I felt the charm of women in the workplace in the article. She is so powerful. It is not a pale summary but shows the heroine's abilities through various detailed events. I really love the heroine's working status. I hope there will be less repetitive scenes when the two are emotionally involved, and that the male and female protagonists can be more intimate later on. Overall it looks great, good luck to the author.
It's pretty good. I feel like writing sweet articles, but I always feel depressed.
The writing is okay, but I have a question as to why the author likes it so much: not xxx, not xxx, but xxx. I feel like I will see this sentence pattern [salute] in every chapter
After watching the first world, I was a little sad. The process of the female protagonist taking away the male protagonist step by step is also the process of the male protagonist slowly decaying. The beauty of idol dramas is that they allow us to see loyalty and romance that are rare in reality. But the existence of the heroine tore it all apart. It turns out that the price is just not enough, it turns out they are all the same.
Naughty Kiss, I really think this is very good, Xiangqin has always been a very good person.
The first world is better written, and the second world is a bit like reading prose. Come on, author.