Ming Tide: the Other Side of This World

The description is a bit mechanical or numb, but it brings out the despair of ordinary people in the post-apocalyptic world. It must be said that the pace is a bit fast or the details of the plot are not explained clearly, and the plot of Lolo is also very good. It is not a pure love of some second creation, but the mutual rescue of two people with the same trauma. As the one who understands the true meaning of Lolo's music during the tour, Chao Li is only called a close friend, and this kind of mutual rescue may be more worth staying together for a lifetime. Finally, I! Want! Eat! Sugar! ! !

It's really beautiful, well written and logically clear. And the author's big bookshelf is very similar to mine [shy] and the emotional line is also very well written, please keep it updated! Practice hard, kid, you will succeed [OK]

Different from other Mingchao fanfics, this book focuses on depicting the background of the end of the world. The protagonist who was "abandoned" by society gained family love in Mingchao and then lost it again. Frollo, who had a good family, also lost his family. The two lonely souls comforted each other (in the early and middle periods). The life and death experiences along the way forged friendship. After giving to each other, emotions will come naturally. The story line has its own unique style and main line. I am looking forward to what will happen when the protagonist and Frollo enter the main line (game). After all, the protagonist should be regarded as a savior before the drifter came (personally I feel it should be to protect the life with Frollo) [shy][shy] What amazes me the most is that the IQs of the male and female protagonists are all online, and there are no words or actions that are not very logical.

After reading the first three chapters, it is a book worth reading slowly, second and third time. As long as the writing is not bad, even if the plot of this book is cliché, it can still be a hit. (Actually, the plot is not bad either) Your sister Fu is worthy of being your sister Fu. Even though her major is music, she has also shown considerable talent in science. Also, my ability to accept new things is too strong [laughs] Isn't this plot more exciting than the one in the game? [Think]

I feel that the AI ​​is still very obvious, but I still hope that the dialogue will be more lively.

The writing style is very good, and the dark style of the former Mingchao is also well written. The emotional description between the protagonist and Frollo is very delicate. I feel that the writing is very good for a story about the heroine Frollo - ̗̀ ෆ( ˶'ᵕ'˶)ෆ ̖́-

The writing style is very suitable for the subject matter. It is neat, detailed and short, and has a lot of feeling. This style is also good for writing about dystopia or darkness. The single heroine Frollo, no OOC, can you say that.

Didn't Frollo start to go dark after Piao broke the date? [What] [What] [What] In the early stage, he wanted to resurrect his relatives, but was deceived, so he wandered around and performed. After meeting Piao, he ignited the hope of coming back. After Piao broke the date, he started to go dark and became unscrupulous. It feels like the author skipped the middle part. Can anyone explain it?

90% Of it is AI, but it's still okay

Just read it as the original. The first part is a bit stiff, but the second part is fine.

To be honest, this novel is the best one I have seen among Mingchao fanfics. He describes each person's emotions very delicately, and his writing is very good at shaping the character of the protagonist, and the various "little actions" with Fu Luoluo are very well written👍. At the same time, there are many self-created plots in the plot that are very novel and interesting. I think this book is very beautiful (♥∀♥) Frollo's name was misspelled [awkward laugh]

I came from Douyin. I have read all 28 chapters so far. The writing is very good. I feel that Frollo is well written, but it is really just the story background of Mingchao. There are many new things.

If you taste it carefully, time will prove that I am right.

The author is awesome, and the writing is super logical. You must check the information carefully. The characters are perfect. Frollo's process from indifference to salvation is very clear.

I don't know why everyone in the comment section is saying that the writing is good, but although I quite like Frollo, it smells like AI.

It's very good. It leans towards the realistic and dark style. This is in line with Mingchao's world view, and the relationship between the protagonist and Nuo Nuo is also very interesting. I must continue writing it [crying] [crying] [crying]

You like me, i like you

Come on, I don't want to take the knife anymore

Personally I think it's pretty good, and there are very few people writing about Frollo.

The sense of doom is very strong, and the author should not stop updating. The frequency of updates is getting lower and lower.

A very good fanfic. The content is rigorous but the description is too digital. The plot content has little connection with the original work and is more like a prequel type. The plot setting is very interesting and interesting.

It's good to read. I love reading it. The author doesn't want eunuchs [blowing kisses]. I won't be in a hurry to update slowly. Don't stop updating [blowing kisses]

It's a very good book. The emotional lines are not abrupt but very delicate, making it very comfortable to read.

I really like the character Frollo. This novel is also very well written, but the updates are too slow.

Very delicate, very vivid, and very helpless

It's nice to look at, but what I've seen so far are soul-piercing ones. Can you tell me a bit about whether they're wearing soul-piercing ones? Is there any reversal later? Officially certified, there is a reversal of the time travel method. Overall, it's very interesting and has a bit of its own writing style. It's a good Tomato fanfic.

Not bad, but there is no main plot

Not bad, neither urgent nor too slow, the pace is appropriate, come on author

Ok ok ok

Please support me, Nuo Nuo is so cute.